规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni answer ta aro natural korte paren, ar kichu linking words use korte paren jate answer ta fluent hoy. Apni specific example dite paren rules gulo ki rokom, jemon "Students must wear uniforms and submit homework on time."

示例: Yes, at my school, there are strict rules such as maintaining discipline and submitting homework on time. These rules help students stay focused and become good learners. For example, students must wear uniforms every day, which promotes equality among us.

建议: Apnar answer e grammar ar sentence structure khub confused. Apni clear ar simple sentence use korben. Linking words use korben jemon "because", "also" properly. Apni opinion er sathe specific karon dite paren, ar example dite paren.

示例: Yes, I think more rules can help students become more disciplined because they learn good habits. However, when I was a student, I did not like too many rules because they felt strict and limiting.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu sentence incomplete ar grammar error ache. Apni clear ar logical sentence structure use korben. Apni teacher er dedication er specific example dite paren, jemon ki bhabe se apnake help korechilo.

示例: Yes, I had a very dedicated math teacher who was amazing. He taught me discipline and shared real-life experiences. Because of his guidance, I achieved good results and I am successful now.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu confusion ache, ar grammar o sentence structure khub weak. Apni clear kore bolben apni more rules prefer koren na fewer rules, ar karon bolben. Linking words use korben jemon "because", "also" properly.

示例: I prefer to have more rules at school because they help students develop discipline and good manners. These rules prepare us to be better people in the future.

建议: Apnar answer e grammar ar sentence structure khub confused. Apni simple ar clear sentence use korben. Apni specific example dite paren strict teacher er behavior niye.

示例: Yes, I had a very strict science teacher during my school life. He was very strict about rules. For example, if we did not complete our homework, he would give us extra assignments.

建议: Apnar answer e onek grammar error ar sentence structure khub confused. Apni clear ar simple sentence use korben. Apni specific karon bolben keno apni rule-free school e teacher hote chan.

示例: Yes, I would like to work as a preschool teacher because I believe children learn better in a free environment. In a rule-free school, students can explore and enjoy learning naturally.

× Yes, yes, at my school there are really quite strict rules for students such as maintain the discipline and complete their homework time to time.

✓ Yes, yes, at my school there are really quite strict rules for students such as maintaining discipline and completing their homework from time to time.

The verbs 'maintain' and 'complete' should be in the '-ing' form after 'such as' because it introduces examples of activities or rules. Using the base form is incorrect here. In English, after phrases like 'such as', gerunds (-ing form) are used to indicate activities.

× It is really important for every schools to ensure their students become more attentive for their studies and become a good student.

✓ It is really important for every school to ensure its students become more attentive to their studies and become good students.

The word 'schools' should be singular 'school' because 'every' is used with singular nouns. Also, 'their' should be 'its' to agree with singular 'school'. 'Become a good student' should be plural 'become good students' to match 'students'. Additionally, 'attentive for' should be 'attentive to'. These are common agreement and preposition errors.

× Yes, at this moment I think that rules are more beneficial for every student because it be makes every students more disciplined and also great students and also it gets makes their great habit with their life.

✓ Yes, at this moment I think that rules are more beneficial for every student because they make every student more disciplined and also better students, and they help develop good habits in their lives.

The phrase 'it be makes' and 'it gets makes' are incorrect. The correct form is 'they make' because 'rules' is plural. Also, 'every students' should be 'every student' (singular). The sentence structure is corrected to properly express the intended meaning. Modal verb usage is involved in correcting 'be makes' which is ungrammatical.

× When I was a student I really hate more rules.

✓ When I was a student, I really hated having more rules.

The verb 'hate' should be in past tense 'hated' to match the past time frame indicated by 'When I was a student'. Also, 'more rules' is better expressed as 'having more rules' for clarity.

× Yes, in my student life I had a mathematic teacher who is really stunning, an amazing teacher in my life.

✓ Yes, in my student life I had a mathematics teacher who was really stunning, an amazing teacher in my life.

The verb 'is' should be 'was' to maintain past tense consistency since the student is referring to a past experience. Also, 'mathematic' should be 'mathematics' as the correct noun form.

× He provides me all of the discipline and real life experience.

✓ He provided me with all of the discipline and real-life experience.

The verb 'provides' should be past tense 'provided' to match past context. Also, 'provides me all of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'provided me with'. 'Real life' should be hyphenated as 'real-life' when used as an adjective.

× How to win all of the achievement for him.

✓ He taught me how to achieve all of my goals.

The original sentence is a fragment and unclear. It lacks a subject and verb. The corrected sentence provides a clear subject and verb, making it a complete sentence and conveying the intended meaning.

× I am. I am success now.

✓ I am successful now.

The phrase 'I am success' is incorrect because 'success' is a noun. The adjective 'successful' should be used to describe the state of the subject. Also, the repeated 'I am.' is unnecessary.

× Yes, I prefer that uh have more or fewer rooms at school is really beneficial for students.

✓ Yes, I prefer that having more or fewer rules at school is really beneficial for students.

The word 'rooms' is likely a typo for 'rules'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; 'that uh have' should be 'that having'. Pronoun and word choice errors are corrected here.

× It try to help their students becomes a great students in the rest of the life.

✓ It tries to help its students become great students for the rest of their lives.

The verb 'try' should be 'tries' to agree with singular subject 'It'. 'Becomes' should be 'become' after 'help'. 'A great students' is incorrect; it should be 'great students'. 'In the rest of the life' should be 'for the rest of their lives'.

× Also it teaches their discipline and also good manners.

✓ Also, it teaches discipline and good manners.

The pronoun 'their' is unnecessary before 'discipline' because discipline is uncountable and general here. Removing 'their' makes the sentence clearer.

× Yes, during my students life I had a strict teacher who was our science teacher.

✓ Yes, during my student life I had a strict teacher who was our science teacher.

'Students life' should be 'student life' as the correct noun phrase. The rest is correct.

× I had ever seen that he was extremely strict for every rules.

✓ I have never seen anyone as extremely strict about every rule as he was.

The phrase 'I had ever seen' is incorrect; 'I have never seen' is appropriate for expressing that the speaker has not seen such strictness before. 'For every rules' should be 'about every rule'.

× If we do not did not complete his homework, they gives gave us really strict full.

✓ If we did not complete his homework, he gave us really strict punishment.

The phrase 'do not did not' is incorrect; only past tense 'did not' is needed. 'They gives gave us' is incorrect; 'he gave us' is correct to match singular teacher. 'Really strict full' is unclear; 'really strict punishment' is appropriate.

× Yes, I would like to work, uh, as a teacher in preschool because I think that it gives me a natural experience as and also have to seen enjoy the summer and interest in in experience that in a free rule, free school, students can everything what they do.

✓ Yes, I would like to work as a preschool teacher because I think it would give me natural experience, and I would enjoy the summer and be interested in the experience. In a rule-free school, students can do everything they want.

The original sentence has multiple errors including modal verb misuse, sentence structure, and word choice. 'It gives me a natural experience as and also have to seen enjoy' is incorrect; 'it would give me natural experience, and I would enjoy' is correct. 'Free rule, free school' should be 'rule-free school'. The last part is corrected for clarity and grammar.