规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Use the correct word 'rules' instead of 'roles'. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples. Avoid run-on sentences and improve sentence structure.

示例: Yes, there were several rules at my school. For example, students were not allowed to fight, had to help each other, and were expected not to disturb teachers during lessons.

建议: Make sure to use 'rules' instead of 'roles'. Your answer should be more specific and explain why more rules help students. Provide clear reasons and examples to support your opinion.

示例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because rules help maintain discipline and ensure that students complete their homework and participate actively in class.

建议: Improve your grammar and pronoun consistency. Use singular or plural forms correctly. Provide more specific details about how the teacher was dedicated and helpful.

示例: Yes, when I was in ninth grade, I had a dedicated teacher who was very kind and intelligent. She helped me and other students with every task and always provided useful information.

建议: Use 'rules' instead of 'roles'. Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Clearly state your preference and explain why, using correct grammar and sentence structure.

示例: When I was a student, I did not prefer many rules at school. However, now I think having more rules is better because they help students improve their work and complete homework effectively.

建议: Improve grammar and pronoun use. Use 'rules' instead of 'role'. Provide a clear and concise answer with specific examples of the teacher's strictness.

示例: Yes, in ninth grade, I had a strict teacher. If a student did not complete their homework or broke the rules, the teacher would punish them firmly.

建议: Use 'rules' instead of 'role'. Your answer should be clearer and more grammatically correct. Explain why rules are important for student success and respect.

示例: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because without rules, students may not have a clear path to success and might not respect their teachers, making teaching difficult.

× When I was a student there are many roles for me at school don't fight with one another, a help to each other, don't disturb teacher when they taught us and many other roles that.

✓ When I was a student, there were many rules for me at school: don't fight with one another, help each other, don't disturb the teacher when they taught us, and many other rules.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'are' instead of 'were' to describe past existence, which is a 'There be' issue. Also, 'roles' should be 'rules' as per context. The verb 'help' should not have an article 'a' before it. 'Teacher' needs the definite article 'the'. The sentence is corrected to past tense and proper article usage.

× Yes, I think students would benefit more from more roles because if they follow the rules, they do many things that they will not be able to do without rules.

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit more from more rules because if they follow the rules, they can do many things that they would not be able to do without rules.

The word 'roles' is incorrectly used instead of 'rules'. Also, 'do many things' is better expressed as 'can do many things' to indicate ability. The correction improves word choice and modal verb usage.

× Yes, when I read in nine class, I had a dedicated teachers.

✓ Yes, when I was in ninth grade, I had a dedicated teacher.

The phrase 'read in nine class' is incorrect; it should be 'was in ninth grade' to indicate past schooling. 'Teachers' should be singular 'teacher' to match the context. The sentence is corrected to proper past tense and singular form.

× She is very kind and intelligent. He helped me. He helped me and other student in every task.

✓ She was very kind and intelligent. She helped me and other students in every task.

The pronoun 'He' is incorrectly used instead of 'She' to refer to the female teacher. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'other'. The verb tense is adjusted to past tense for consistency.

× She's very kind and information.

✓ She was very kind and informative.

The word 'information' is a noun and incorrectly used here; the correct adjective is 'informative'. The verb tense is changed to past tense for consistency.

× And when I was a student, I don't prefer to have more roles at school.

✓ When I was a student, I didn't prefer to have more rules at school.

'Don't prefer' is incorrect for past tense; it should be 'didn't prefer'. Also, 'roles' should be 'rules' as per context.

× But now I am not student and I really prefer to have more or fewer role at school because it provide and it provide great facilities for student to improve their work and home task.

✓ But now I am not a student and I really prefer to have more or fewer rules at school because it provides great facilities for students to improve their work and homework.

Missing article 'a' before 'student'. 'Role' should be plural 'rules'. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Home task' is better expressed as 'homework'.

× Yes, when I read in nine class, I also have strict teacher.

✓ Yes, when I was in ninth grade, I also had a strict teacher.

'Read in nine class' is incorrect; 'was in ninth grade' is correct. 'Have' should be past tense 'had' to match past context.

× They she he's very strict.

✓ She was very strict.

Multiple pronouns 'They she he's' are incorrectly used together. The correct singular pronoun 'She' is used with past tense verb 'was'.

× When when any student had no done their home task and break the role, they punish him.

✓ When any student had not done their homework and broke the rule, they punished him.

'Had no done' should be 'had not done'. 'Break' should be past tense 'broke'. 'Role' should be 'rule'. 'Punish' should be past tense 'punished'.

× Sometimes they punish hardly and strictly.

✓ Sometimes they punish harshly and strictly.

'Hardly' means 'barely' and is incorrect here; 'harshly' is the correct adverb to describe severe punishment.

× No, I don't like to work as a teacher in role free school, because if they are no role, the student do not way to success.

✓ No, I don't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school, because if there are no rules, the students do not have a way to succeed.

'Role free school' should be 'rule-free school'. 'If they are no role' is incorrect; correct form is 'if there are no rules'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Do not way to success' is incorrect; it should be 'do not have a way to succeed'.

× And the student I think student will not respect, will not respect their teachers and teachers facement difficult.

✓ And I think students will not respect their teachers, and teachers will face difficulties.

Sentence structure is incorrect. 'The student I think student' is redundant and confusing. 'Facement' is not a word; correct verb is 'face'. 'Difficult' should be plural noun 'difficulties'.