规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro, jar fole answer ta natural lage na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto r shothik vabe banate, ar linking words use korun jate answer ta logical hoy. For example, 'Firstly, students must wear a uniform when they come to school because it promotes discipline. Also, they are required to wear shoes for safety reasons.'

示例: Firstly, students must wear a uniform when they come to school because it promotes discipline. Also, they are required to wear shoes for safety reasons.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu redundancy ache, ar kichu word use onek bar bar hoyeche. Apni chesta korun answer ta ke concise r clear korte, ar linking words use korun jate answer ta logical hoy. For example, 'Definitely, I believe rules benefit students because they teach discipline and help manage difficult situations, leading to success both academically and personally.'

示例: Definitely, I believe rules benefit students because they teach discipline and help manage difficult situations, leading to success both academically and personally.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar sentence gulo onek bar bar 'uh' use kora hoyeche, jar fole answer ta natural lage na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik vabe banate, ar linking words use korun. For example, 'Yes, I have had several dedicated teachers who not only teach but also support students when they face difficulties in their studies.'

示例: Yes, I have had several dedicated teachers who not only teach but also support students when they face difficulties in their studies.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek confusing. Apni chesta korun clear r shothik sentence banate, ar example ta ke bhalo vabe explain korte. For example, 'I prefer more rules at school because following rules helps students develop discipline. For instance, Dutch students follow school rules strictly, which helps them succeed in their future jobs.'

示例: I prefer more rules at school because following rules helps students develop discipline. For instance, Dutch students follow school rules strictly, which helps them succeed in their future jobs.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek boro. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke chhoto r shothik vabe banate, ar linking words use korun. For example, 'Yes, I had a strict teacher who was very dedicated. Although he was strict, he always supported students when they faced difficulties.'

示例: Yes, I had a strict teacher who was very dedicated. Although he was strict, he always supported students when they faced difficulties.

建议: Apnar answer e grammar error onek ache, ar kichu sentence onek confusing. Apni chesta korun clear r shothik sentence banate, ar linking words use korun. For example, 'Honestly, I don't want to be a teacher, but if I were one, I would enforce essential rules like wearing uniforms because it helps maintain discipline.'

示例: Honestly, I don't want to be a teacher, but if I were one, I would enforce essential rules like wearing uniforms because it helps maintain discipline.

× Yes, there are number of rules for student at my school.

✓ Yes, there are a number of rules for students at my school.

The phrase 'number of' requires the article 'a' before it, and 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural subject 'rules'. In English, countable nouns need to be plural when referring to more than one.

× when they come in school that time they have to wear a uniform

✓ when they come to school, they have to wear a uniform

The correct preposition to use with 'come' in this context is 'to' not 'in'. Also, 'that time' is unnecessary and can be omitted for clarity.

× And another things that when he come to school that time as much as possible he tried to wear shoes.

✓ And another thing is that when he comes to school, he tries to wear shoes as much as possible.

'Things' should be singular 'thing' because it refers to one additional point. 'He come' should be 'he comes' to agree with third person singular. 'Tried' should be 'tries' to maintain present tense. 'That time' is unnecessary and can be omitted.

× Like if student follow rules in their life, they not only achieve good things but also they learn how to manage difficult circumstance and how to manage anything.

✓ Like if students follow rules in their life, they not only achieve good things but also learn how to manage difficult circumstances and how to manage anything.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'they'. 'Circumstance' should be plural 'circumstances' because it refers to multiple situations. 'They learn' is correct; 'also they learn' is better as 'also learn' for smoother flow.

× Definitely, I think UH rules is really beneficial for a student.

✓ Definitely, I think the rules are really beneficial for students.

'Rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'A student' should be plural 'students' to match the general statement.

× Like if someone follow rules in their regular life, they not only uh get success in their life but also academic life.

✓ Like if someone follows rules in their regular life, they not only get success in their life but also in academic life.

'Someone' is singular, so the verb should be 'follows'. 'Uh' is filler and can be omitted. Added 'in' before 'academic life' for correct preposition use.

× I know number of UH teacher who are really dedicated uh, like whenever they study, teach their student that time they are trying to support them.

✓ I know a number of teachers who are really dedicated; whenever they study and teach their students, they try to support them.

'Number of' requires the article 'a' before it. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match 'a number of'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Uh' is filler and can be omitted. Sentence structure improved for clarity.

× Not only teach them uh as much as possible, they try to support their student if they face difficulty in their study.

✓ Not only do they teach them as much as possible, but they also try to support their students if they face difficulty in their studies.

Added auxiliary 'do' for correct sentence structure. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic work in general. 'Uh' is filler and omitted.

× I personally prefer more rule rather than fewer.

✓ I personally prefer more rules rather than fewer.

'Rule' should be plural 'rules' to match 'more' and 'fewer' which refer to countable plural nouns.

× Like if student follow rule in their life, they will get benefit from their future.

✓ Like if students follow rules in their life, they will benefit in their future.

'Student' and 'rule' should be plural 'students' and 'rules' to match the plural subject and object. 'Get benefit from their future' is awkward; better to say 'benefit in their future'.

× For example, Holland student follow rule in their school at the at the mature age when they are work and office.

✓ For example, Dutch students follow rules in their school at a mature age when they work in an office.

'Holland student' should be 'Dutch students' (correct demonym and plural). 'Rule' should be plural 'rules'. 'At the at the' is repetitive and corrected to 'at a'. 'They are work and office' corrected to 'they work in an office'.

× That time they can easily transfer transparent.

✓ At that time, they can easily transfer transparently.

'Transfer transparent' is incorrect; 'transparently' is the adverb form. Added 'At that time' for clarity.

× I know a strict teacher who are really strict about student but to be honest he's really dedicated about their students.

✓ I know a strict teacher who is really strict with students, but to be honest, he's really dedicated to his students.

'Who are' should be 'who is' to agree with singular 'teacher'. 'About student' corrected to 'with students'. 'Dedicated about' corrected to 'dedicated to'. 'Their' changed to 'his' to match singular teacher.

× As much as possible he tried to support them and and when I was faced difficulty that time if I call him that time he support me.

✓ He tried as much as possible to support them, and when I faced difficulty, if I called him, he supported me.

Corrected verb tenses to past tense for consistency: 'was faced' to 'faced', 'call' to 'called', 'support' to 'supported'. Removed repeated 'and' and unnecessary 'that time'.

× if I to be a teacher then I will provide a law which is really essential for a student.

✓ If I were to be a teacher, then I would provide a rule which is really essential for students.

Corrected conditional modal verb usage: 'if I to be' to 'if I were to be', 'will' to 'would' for hypothetical situation. 'Law' changed to 'rule' as more appropriate in school context. 'A student' changed to 'students'.

× They must have to wear uniform when they come to school because if they didn't don't wear uniform and after that they will never follow rules which is detrimentally paying.

✓ They must wear uniforms when they come to school because if they don't wear uniforms, they will never follow rules, which is detrimental.

'Must have to' is incorrect; 'must' alone is sufficient. 'Didn't don't' is incorrect double negative; corrected to 'don't'. 'Uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' to match plural subject. 'Detrimentally paying' is incorrect; corrected to 'detrimental'.