规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“we can drinking”应为“we can drink”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和填充词，使用正确的时态和表达方式。

示例: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, we are allowed to drink and eat in class, but if we want to go to the toilet during lessons, we must ask the teacher for permission.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，如“it's depends”应为“it depends”，“rules is”应为“rules are”。建议使用连贯的句子结构，减少重复，明确表达观点。

示例: I think it depends on the situation. More rules can help us study better, but if there are too many rules or they are not suitable for our age, it might have a negative effect.

建议: 回答中词汇使用不当，如“benefit dedicate”应为“very dedicated”。句子结构混乱，建议使用简单明了的句子表达，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: Yes, when I was in junior high, my math teacher was very dedicated. Although I was not good at math, she still liked me and helped me a lot.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“control ourself”应为“control ourselves”，且表达不够清晰。建议简化表达，明确观点，减少填充词。

示例: I don't prefer more rules because as high school students, we can control ourselves well. Too many rules might have negative effects on us.

建议: 回答中语法和表达混乱，如“because you want me”不清楚意思。建议使用清晰的句子表达原因和对比，避免口语填充词。

示例: Yes, my music teacher was very strict because he wanted me to improve. However, I did better in history class.

建议: 回答中表达不完整且语法错误较多，如“the Bruce is all is also useful”不明所以。建议用完整句子表达观点，避免语法错误和不连贯。

示例: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because I don't think students can control themselves well without any rules. Therefore, rules are necessary.

× there's so many rules and like, uh, in the class we can drinking and we can eating and uh, if we want to go to the toilet during the class time, we have to umm, assign for teacher that we can go there.

✓ there are so many rules and like, uh, in the class we can drink and we can eat and uh, if we want to go to the toilet during the class time, we have to umm, ask the teacher that we can go there.

这里的 'there's' 是 'there is' 的缩写，后面接复数名词 'rules'，应使用 'there are'。另外，'can drinking' 和 'can eating' 结构错误，情态动词 'can' 后应接动词原形，改为 'can drink' 和 'can eat'。最后，'assign for teacher' 用词错误，应为 'ask the teacher'。

× if the rules is too much, too much and uh, they're not suit for students in this age, I don't think there will be good for our students.

✓ if the rules are too many, too many and uh, they're not suitable for students at this age, I don't think it will be good for our students.

'rules' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'。'too much' 用于不可数名词，'rules' 是可数名词，应使用 'too many'。'suit' 应为形容词 'suitable'。'in this age' 应改为 'at this age'。

× if the rules is too much, too much and uh, they're not suit for students in this age, I don't think there will be good for our students.

✓ if the rules are too many, too many and uh, they're not suitable for students at this age, I don't think it will be good for our students.

'suit' 是动词，句中应使用形容词 'suitable' 来修饰 'rules'。

× Yes, when I was in uh, junior high, my math teacher uh is really benefit dedicate and uh, she helped me a lot.

✓ Yes, when I was in uh, junior high, my math teacher was really dedicated and uh, she helped me a lot.

描述过去的情况，谓语动词应使用过去时，'is' 应改为 'was'。'benefit dedicate' 词语搭配错误，应为形容词 'dedicated'。

× my math teacher uh is really benefit dedicate and uh, she helped me a lot.

✓ my math teacher uh was really dedicated and uh, she helped me a lot.

'benefit dedicate' 不是正确的形容词搭配，应使用形容词 'dedicated' 来描述老师的态度。

× But uh, I'm really no not good at math umm, but she still like me and she really helped me a lot.

✓ But uh, I'm really not good at math umm, but she still likes me and she really helped me a lot.

'no not' 是重复否定，应改为 'not'。'she still like me' 中主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 's'，改为 'likes'。

× I don't think so because as uh, Sydney high school students, I think, uh, in this age, we can, uh, control ourself in a perfect way.

✓ I don't think so because as uh, Sydney high school students, I think, uh, at this age, we can, uh, control ourselves in a perfect way.

'ourself' 应为复数形式 'ourselves'，因为主语是复数 'we'。'in this age' 应改为 'at this age'。

× I think it's depends on the situation and the more rules can help, umm, to improve us in the study.

✓ I think it depends on the situation and more rules can help, umm, to improve us in our studies.

'depends' 后不需要 'it's'，应为 'it depends'。'the more rules' 中 'the' 不必要。'in the study' 应改为复数形式 'in our studies'。

× if the rules is too much, too much and uh, they're not suit for students in this age, I don't think there will be good for our students.

✓ if the rules are too many, too many and uh, they're not suitable for students at this age, I don't think it will be good for our students.

'in this age' 应改为 'at this age'，表示特定年龄段。

× Yes, because I mean major in the music and my music teacher is really strict to me because you want me uh, I know he want me to be better, so he's really strict man Umm, but uh, in the other hand, uh, for history, I get better.

✓ Yes, because I mean major in music and my music teacher is really strict with me because he wants me uh, I know he wants me to be better, so he's really strict man. Umm, but uh, on the other hand, uh, for history, I got better.

'strict to me' 应为 'strict with me'。'you want me' 应为 'he wants me'。'he want me' 应为 'he wants me'。'in the other hand' 应为 'on the other hand'。'I get better' 过去时应为 'I got better'。

× Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school? MMM, no, I don't want because, uh, real free school, uh, I don't think students can umm, perfectly to control themselves.

✓ Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school? MMM, no, I don't want to because, uh, in a rule-free school, uh, I don't think students can perfectly control themselves.

'I don't want' 后应加不定式 'to'。'real free school' 应为 'rule-free school'。'can umm, perfectly to control' 中 'to' 不应出现，情态动词后直接接动词原形。

× I want you to do the correction under following 5 steps:

✓ I want you to do the correction under the following 5 steps:

'following' 前应加定冠词 'the'，表示特定的步骤。