规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ваш адказ мае некаторыя граматычныя памылкі і паўторы, што робіць яго менш натуральным і зразумелым. Рэкамендуецца выкарыстоўваць больш простыя і дакладныя сказы, пазбягаць паўтораў і ўдакладняць інфармацыю.

示例: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, we are not allowed to use mobile phones during the school day. Also, we must wear the school uniform, which is blue in color.

建议: Ваш адказ не зусім ясны і мае паўторы. Рэкамендуецца выразна выказваць меркаванне і даваць канкрэтныя прычыны, выкарыстоўваючы звязныя словы для лагічнай пабудовы адказу.

示例: No, I don't think more rules would help students. Because when I had a mobile phone, I was more distracted. So, schools should adapt to modern developments to benefit students better.

建议: Ваш адказ перапыняецца і мае паўторы, што робіць яго не завершаным. Рэкамендуецца даваць поўныя і звязныя адказы з канкрэтнымі прыкладамі і без паўтораў.

示例: Yes, most of my teachers are dedicated. My favorite is my math teacher because she explains topics like geometry and algebra very clearly, which helps me understand better.

建议: Ваш адказ мае паўторы і некаторыя граматычныя памылкі. Рэкамендуецца выкарыстоўваць больш дакладныя і кароткія сказы, а таксама звязныя словы для лепшай лагічнай структуры.

示例: I prefer fewer rules at school, but important ones should remain. For example, banning phones can help students focus better during lessons.

建议: Ваш адказ добра структураваны, але ёсць паўторы і некаторыя граматычныя памылкі. Рэкамендуецца пазбягаць паўтораў і ўдакладняць інфармацыю.

示例: Yes, my previous English teacher was very strict. We had many mock tests, and once I got a low score in speaking because of mispronouncing a word.

建议: Ваш адказ мае паўторы і некаторыя неадназначныя выразы. Рэкамендуецца выкарыстоўваць больш дакладныя словы і пазбягаць паўтораў для лепшай зразумеласці.

示例: No, I wouldn't like to work in a school without rules because students might get distracted easily, especially by phones, which would slow their progress.

× we should follow the school uniform of like we should have the color of our gymnasium, it's like blue one

✓ we should follow the school uniform, like we should have the color of our gymnasium, which is blue

The phrase 'follow the school uniform of like' is incorrect. The preposition 'of' is unnecessary here. Also, 'it's like blue one' is awkward; it should be 'which is blue' to correctly describe the color of the gym uniform.

× I feel the difference when I had mobile phone and now I don't have

✓ I feel the difference when I had a mobile phone and now I don't have one

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'mobile phone'. Also, adding 'one' after 'don't have' clarifies the object. The past tense 'had' is correct here as it refers to a past situation.

× she can perfectly dip in in for example in her subject geometry or or for example algebra

✓ she can perfectly dive into, for example, her subjects like geometry or algebra

The verb 'dip in' is incorrect in this context; 'dive into' is more appropriate to express deep involvement. Also, the sentence has repeated words and awkward phrasing that need correction for clarity.

× I prefer to have fewer rules in in my school

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules in my school

The repetition of the preposition 'in' is incorrect and should be removed.

× if they really important and crucial for the school curriculum, it's better to have more rules

✓ if they are really important and crucial for the school curriculum, it's better to have more rules

The verb 'are' is missing after 'if they', which is necessary to complete the clause properly.

× if someone thinks that phones just bother us so it's better not to use them at all

✓ if someone thinks that phones just bother us, then it's better not to use them at all

The sentence lacks a conjunction 'then' to properly connect the conditional clause and the result clause.

× once I had a mistake in speaking part and she put me a six just because of mispronunciation of the word

✓ once I made a mistake in the speaking part and she gave me a six just because of mispronunciation of a word

The phrase 'had a mistake' is incorrect; 'made a mistake' is the correct collocation. Also, 'put me a six' is incorrect; 'gave me a six' is the proper expression. Articles are also needed before 'speaking part' and 'word'.

× if there is no if there are no rules at all, students usually will bother me with something umm uncrushial

✓ if there are no rules at all, students usually will bother me with something uncrucial

The phrase 'if there is no if there are no rules' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'if there are no rules'. Also, 'uncrushial' is a misspelling of 'uncrucial' (though 'unimportant' might be better).

× Like they won't be able to study really fast and have some progress in their study because they will be bothered by phones

✓ They won't be able to study effectively and make progress in their studies because they will be distracted by phones

The phrase 'study really fast' is awkward; 'study effectively' is better. Also, 'have some progress in their study' should be 'make progress in their studies'. 'Bothered by phones' is better expressed as 'distracted by phones'.