规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to avoid repeating words and be more concise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, in my school and all schools in my country, students are required to wear uniforms. For example, girls must wear a scarf along with the uniform.

建议: Your answer has many fillers and some grammatical errors. Try to reduce hesitation sounds and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because they would understand how to behave properly. For instance, they would learn to respect their teachers and school staff.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to use correct verb forms and be more specific about the teacher's dedication.

示例: Yes, I was lucky to have a dedicated teacher in high school. She was very kind and always encouraged me to learn effectively.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains many hesitations. Try to express your opinion clearly and avoid unnecessary fillers. Use linking words to organize your ideas.

示例: I think the number of rules should be balanced. Having too many or too few rules is not good. Especially in my country, schools should have appropriate rules to maintain order.

建议: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear expressions. Avoid filler words and use correct grammar. Also, be more specific and polite when describing the teacher.

示例: Yes, I had a strict teacher in high school. She was very firm and expected us to follow the rules strictly.

建议: Your answer is short and lacks detail. Try to explain your reasons more clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: Not really. I am not interested in being a teacher, especially in a school without rules, because I think it would be difficult to manage students' behavior.

× Yes, of course in my school and and also in every schools in my country, students should wear a uniform, especially the girls should wear a scarf and and uniform especially for school.

✓ Yes, of course in my school and also in every school in my country, students should wear a uniform, especially the girls should wear a scarf and a uniform especially for school.

The word 'schools' should be singular 'school' after 'every' because 'every' is followed by a singular noun. Also, 'and and' is a repetition error and 'a uniform' is needed before 'uniform' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I have been fortunate to have a really dedicated teachers during my high school years and one of them was really nice and she behaved very good to me for she has a very good behavior such as learning very good.

✓ Yes, I have been fortunate to have really dedicated teachers during my high school years and one of them was really nice and she behaved very well to me because she has very good behavior such as learning very well.

The word 'teachers' is plural, so 'a really dedicated teachers' is incorrect; it should be 'really dedicated teachers' without 'a'. Also, 'behaved very good' should be 'behaved very well' because 'well' is the correct adverb here. 'For' is better replaced with 'because' for clarity. 'Learning very good' should be 'learning very well' as 'well' modifies the verb 'learning'.

× For example, they know they should uh, respect to their teachers and the staff of school.

✓ For example, they know they should respect their teachers and the staff of the school.

The verb 'respect' does not require the preposition 'to'. Also, 'the staff of school' should be 'the staff of the school' to be grammatically correct.

× I think it should be at the standard level and it's not very good to have, uh, more than this rules or fewer than now, But uh, I think we should have a better, uh, rules at our schools, especially in my country.

✓ I think it should be at the standard level and it's not very good to have more than these rules or fewer than now, but I think we should have better rules at our schools, especially in my country.

'This rules' is incorrect; 'rules' is plural so it should be 'these rules'. 'A better rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural; it should be 'better rules'. Also, 'But' should not be capitalized after a comma.

× Yes, of course. I think everyone have uh, a really strict teacher in the, their, umm, school's time.

✓ Yes, of course. I think everyone has a really strict teacher in their school time.

'Everyone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'the, their, umm, school's time' is awkward; 'their school time' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Uh, for example, uh, in high school I had UH-1 strict teacher that she was uh, very awful in behaving with us.

✓ Uh, for example, in high school I had a very strict teacher who was very awful in behaving with us.

'UH-1' seems to be a transcription error and is removed. 'Strict teacher that she was' is incorrect; it should be 'strict teacher who was'. Also, 'very awful in behaving with us' is awkward but kept for meaning; 'very awful in behavior towards us' would be better.