规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

示例: Yes, there are several rules at my school to encourage respectful and disciplined behavior. For instance, during assemblies, students are instructed to remain quiet and attentive.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid filler words. Use specific age ranges and explain how rules benefit students.

示例: Yes, I believe that having more rules helps students aged 9 to 15 become more responsible and disciplined because they learn to follow guidelines and understand consequences.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and repetitive fillers. Use more precise vocabulary and avoid unnecessary pauses. Provide specific examples of how the teacher was dedicated.

示例: Yes, I had a teacher named Ambigames who was very dedicated. She always encouraged students to study hard and improve their behavior, which motivated us a lot.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains many hesitations and awkward phrasing. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons using linking words.

示例: I prefer fewer rules at school because too many rules can make students feel frustrated. However, some rules, like those about discipline, are necessary to maintain order.

建议: Your answer includes important information but has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Avoid using inappropriate or sensitive details without explanation. Use correct tenses and vocabulary.

示例: Yes, I had a very strict teacher named Ashuba, who was also our headmistress. She enforced discipline strictly, but sometimes her methods were too harsh, which I think was not good.

建议: Your answer conveys your opinion but has many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

示例: Yes, I would like to work in a school without strict rules because children would feel more comfortable and friendly. Without many rules, it would be easier to build good relationships with them.

× Is there are several rules in the school for making the children's more respectful and disciplinary behaviour.

✓ There are several rules in the school for making the children more respectful and disciplined in behaviour.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Is there are' which is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'There are' to indicate existence of plural 'rules'. Also, 'children's' is possessive but should be plural 'children' here, and 'disciplinary behaviour' should be 'disciplined in behaviour' for correct adjective use.

× For example, during assemblies the management provide instruction for children how to keep quiet.

✓ For example, during assemblies the management provides instructions to children on how to keep quiet.

The subject 'management' is singular, so the verb should be 'provides' not 'provide'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' to match the context, and 'for children how to keep quiet' should be 'to children on how to keep quiet' for correct preposition use.

× Definitely rules make children's, uh, very responsible at the age of, uh, 9215 years, umm, in that period, uh, they also learn the disciplinary actions and uh, they try to be discipline.

✓ Definitely, rules make children very responsible at the age of 9 to 15 years. During that period, they also learn disciplinary actions and try to be disciplined.

'Children's' is possessive but should be plural 'children'. The age '9215' is likely a typo and should be '9 to 15'. 'Try to be discipline' is incorrect; it should be 'try to be disciplined' (adjective). Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yes, I had a teacher named Ambigames. Uh, she's very dedicated in her work. Uh, she's always encouraged every children's, uh, for studying or developing their behaviour, etcetera. Uh, she's very good teacher.

✓ Yes, I had a teacher named Ambigames. She is very dedicated to her work. She always encourages every child to study and develop their behaviour. She is a very good teacher.

'Every children's' is incorrect; 'children' is plural and 'every' requires singular noun 'child'. 'Encouraged' should be present tense 'encourages' to match context. 'Dedicated in her work' should be 'dedicated to her work'. Also, 'very good teacher' needs article 'a'.

× Umm, I prefer, uh, fewer rules at school because over a lot of rules, uh, make children's more, uh, frustrated, uh, so some kind of, uh, indeed rules are necessary. For example, discipline.

✓ I prefer fewer rules at school because too many rules make children more frustrated, so some rules are indeed necessary, for example, discipline.

'Over a lot of rules' is incorrect; 'too many rules' is the correct quantifier for countable nouns. 'Children's' should be plural 'children'. 'Some kind of indeed rules' is awkward; 'some rules are indeed necessary' is correct.

× Yes, I had a very strict teacher. Her name was Ashuba. Uh, she's our headmistress. Also, she's very strict in her work. And also she, uh, used a stick for hamming children's, uh, when, uh, children's violated discipline, she will, uh, harm children. That is not a good.

✓ Yes, I had a very strict teacher. Her name was Ashuba. She was our headmistress and very strict in her work. She used a stick to hit children when they violated discipline, which is not good.

'Hamming children's' is incorrect; likely meant 'hitting children'. 'Children's violated discipline' is incorrect; should be 'children violated discipline' or 'they violated discipline'. 'She will harm children' is inconsistent tense; past tense 'used' should be matched with 'hit'. 'That is not a good' is incomplete; corrected to 'which is not good'.

× Yes, I like to work as a teacher in a role free school because uh, children's love that make us more, uh, comfortable to work with them. Uh, rules make children's very uncomfortable. Uh, so it's uh, nice thing without rules they will feel friendly.

✓ Yes, I would like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because children love that and it makes us more comfortable to work with them. Rules make children very uncomfortable, so it is nice that without rules they will feel friendly.

'Role free' should be 'rule-free'. 'Children's love that' is incorrect; 'children love that' is correct. 'Make us more comfortable' needs subject 'it' to be clear. 'It's nice thing' should be 'it is nice that'. Sentence structure improved for clarity.