规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, avoid hesitation sounds, and provide specific details about the rules. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid incomplete sentences.

示例: When I was a student, there were several rules at my school. For example, students had to arrive on time for class, and if someone was late three times, they would face a penalty.

建议: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to express your opinion clearly with a topic sentence, then explain your reasoning using linking words. Avoid filler words and be more specific about which rules might be beneficial.

示例: I believe that rules are important for students, but having too many rules may not be helpful. It depends on the type of rule; if a rule is reasonable and convenient, it can benefit students, but unnecessary rules might cause frustration.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains hesitations and some grammatical errors. Try to use correct tenses and avoid repeating words. Provide a clear topic sentence and expand with specific details or examples.

示例: To be honest, I have never had a really dedicated teacher, but I wish I had one who was passionate about their subject and eager to teach.

建议: Your answer has pronunciation and word choice errors, and some unclear phrases. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and provide a clear reason for your preference with linking words.

示例: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I value freedom. When there are fewer rules, I feel more comfortable and confident.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence and specific details about the strict teacher to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I have had a really strict teacher. For example, my geography teacher was very strict and expected students to follow all the rules carefully.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Try to give a direct answer to the question with a clear topic sentence, explain your reasons using linking words, and avoid filler words.

示例: Yes, I would like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I value freedom and believe it would create a more relaxed learning environment.

× Actually I'm not student anymore, but when I was one, there was several rules, uh, one of them was umm, about getting, about coming on time on the class, in the class.

✓ Actually I'm not a student anymore, but when I was one, there were several rules, uh, one of them was umm, about getting, about coming on time in the class.

The word 'student' is singular and needs the article 'a' before it. 'There was several rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was'. Also, the preposition 'on the class' should be 'in the class' to indicate being inside the classroom.

× Uh, when you uh, get 3 later class you will get yeah.

✓ Uh, when you get 3 late classes you will get, yeah.

The phrase 'get 3 later class' is incorrect. 'Later' should be 'late' as an adjective describing 'classes', which should be plural. Also, 'get' is correct here as a verb, but the sentence is incomplete and unclear; however, the correction focuses on the grammar issue.

× I think the rules are important, uh, for students, but umm, it's not that important and uh, it's uh, not going to, umm, be so beneficial.

✓ I think the rules are important, uh, for students, but umm, they're not that important and uh, they're uh, not going to, umm, be very beneficial.

The use of 'it's' (it is) is singular, but 'rules' is plural, so 'they're' (they are) should be used. Also, 'so beneficial' is less natural than 'very beneficial' in this context.

× Students, uh, it kind of depends on a rule.

✓ Students, uh, it kind of depends on the rule.

The phrase 'depends on a rule' is grammatically correct but contextually unclear. Changing 'a rule' to 'the rule' makes it more specific and natural. However, the main issue is the unclear subject 'Students, uh, it' which is confusing; it should be rephrased for clarity, but per instructions, only grammar issues are corrected.

× To tell the truth, I haven't fortunate enough to have a really dedicated teacher, uh, during my life, but I wish that I had the teacher that will be passionate about her subject and, umm, wants to teach.

✓ To tell the truth, I haven't been fortunate enough to have a really dedicated teacher, uh, during my life, but I wish that I had a teacher who would be passionate about her subject and, umm, want to teach.

The phrase 'haven't fortunate' is incorrect; it should be 'haven't been fortunate' using the past participle 'been'. Also, 'the teacher that will be' should be 'a teacher who would be' to express a hypothetical wish. 'Wants' should be 'want' to agree with 'who would be'.

× Uh, yeah. I preferred to have fewer roof at school because I like freedom Glover person.

✓ Uh, yeah. I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I like freedom as a person.

'Preferred' is past tense but the context suggests present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. 'Fewer roof' is incorrect; 'roof' is singular and countable, but the intended word is 'rules' which is plural. 'Freedom Glover person' is unclear; likely meant 'freedom as a person'.

× I think everyone at my age, uh, used to have really strict teacher.

✓ I think everyone my age, uh, used to have a really strict teacher.

'Everyone at my age' is better expressed as 'everyone my age'. 'Really strict teacher' needs an article 'a' before 'really strict teacher' because it is singular countable noun.

× One of them, uh, were teacher of geography.

✓ One of them, uh, was a teacher of geography.

'One of them' is singular, so the verb should be 'was' not 'were'. Also, 'teacher of geography' needs the article 'a' before 'teacher'.

× She was really historic, like uh, uh, she does like when uh, children.

✓ She was really strict, like uh, uh, she acted like when uh, children.

'Historic' means important in history, but the intended meaning is 'strict'. 'She does like when children' is incomplete and unclear; 'she acted like when children' is a better attempt but still unclear. The correction focuses on replacing 'historic' with 'strict'.

× You know, someday I would like to work as a teacher. I like people too. I like to share my experience. Uh, yes, uh, Wolf, we will be amazing because, uh, as I mentioned before, I am really no that person who values freedom.

✓ You know, someday I would like to work as a teacher. I like people too. I like to share my experience. Uh, yes, uh, work will be amazing because, uh, as I mentioned before, I am really that kind of person who values freedom.

'Wolf' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'work'. 'We will be amazing' is incorrect; it should be 'work will be amazing'. 'I am really no that person' should be 'I am really that kind of person'. The modal verb 'would like' is correctly used here.