规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より正確な文法を使い、具体的な例を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

示例: Yes, there are rules about appearance at my school. For example, students are not allowed to dye their hair or wear sandals.

建议: 文の構造が不明瞭で、意見がはっきり伝わっていません。意見を明確に述べ、理由を簡潔に説明する練習をしましょう。

示例: I think it depends. Sometimes, too many rules make students feel restricted, but without any rules, students might not behave properly.

建议: 文法ミスと不自然な表現が多いです。過去形の正しい使用と、具体的なサポート内容を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

示例: Yes, my high school teacher was very dedicated. He supported me when I applied to college and always gave me good advice.

建议: 回答はやや曖昧で、理由が十分に説明されていません。自分の意見をはっきり述べ、理由を具体的に説明しましょう。

示例: I prefer fewer rules at school because it helps students feel more independent, but some rules are necessary to prepare us for society.

建议: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。過去の経験を正確に述べ、具体的な例を明確にしましょう。

示例: Yes, my high school teacher was very strict. He often shouted and did not allow us to wear makeup.

建议: 文法の誤りが多く、理由が不明瞭です。自分の性格や理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

示例: No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I am not the type of person who likes to argue with students.

× Moose for appearance, such as we can't dye our hairs or like we can't with the sandal.

✓ Rules for appearance, such as we can't dye our hair or wear sandals.

The word 'Moose' is incorrect and should be 'Rules'. 'Hairs' is incorrect as 'hair' is uncountable in this context. The phrase 'we can't with the sandal' is incomplete and should be 'we can't wear sandals'. The preposition 'for' is correctly used here to indicate the category of rules.

× I think it depends on because sometimes is too strict and we can feel like no freedom or something and but no rules are student go to the long ways.

✓ I think it depends because sometimes it is too strict and we can feel like we have no freedom, but without rules, students might go the wrong way.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper subject-verb agreement. 'Depends on' should be 'depends' or 'depends on something'. 'Sometimes is too strict' lacks a subject; it should be 'sometimes it is too strict'. 'No rules are student go to the long ways' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'without rules, students might go the wrong way'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I hope it was my high school teacher and he really support to me that like applied to the college or some something or like he always counsel me and.

✓ Yes, I had a high school teacher who really supported me when I applied to college, and he always counseled me.

The verb 'hope' is incorrectly used in past context; 'had' is appropriate. 'Support' should be in past tense 'supported'. 'Counsel' should be past tense 'counseled'. The phrase 'support to me that like applied to the college' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'supported me when I applied to college'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.

× I do not think so because my college has a few rules and I understand the rules and it is good for students to learn about the society.

✓ I do not think so because my college has few rules, and I understand them; it is good for students to learn about society.

'A few' implies some, but 'few' without 'a' implies not many, which fits better here. 'The society' is incorrect; 'society' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. The sentence is improved by clarifying the quantifier and article usage.

× Yes, I have made it was my high school teacher and he he always like shouting and. He mugged at our appearance that you can't wear makeup or something.

✓ Yes, it was my high school teacher, and he was always shouting. He was strict about our appearance, saying we couldn't wear makeup or similar things.

'I have made it was' is incorrect; it should be 'it was'. 'He he always like shouting' should be 'he was always shouting'. 'Mugged at our appearance' is incorrect; likely intended 'mugged' is wrong, should be 'was strict about our appearance'. The sentence needs past tense consistency and correct verb usage.

× No because I'm not school teacher type. Like I not argue with student so I don't become I don't want to become a teacher.

✓ No, because I'm not the school teacher type. I don't argue with students, so I don't want to become a teacher.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'school teacher type'. 'I not argue' is incorrect; should be 'I don't argue'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'I don't become I don't want to become' is redundant and incorrect; simplified to 'I don't want to become'. The sentence needs proper pronoun and article usage and verb negation.