规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar and sentence structure by using correct verb forms and plural nouns. Also, provide clearer explanations and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, my school has several rules. For example, we are required to wear a school uniform, which is a unique rule compared to schools in Taiwan where uniforms are not mandatory.

建议: Make your opinion clearer and support it with reasons. Use complete sentences and linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: I don't think having more rules would benefit students because it might restrict their freedom. However, some students might feel that more rules help maintain discipline.

建议: Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas clearly. Explain what you mean by 'blue' and provide specific examples of the teacher's dedication.

示例: Yes, I have had some dedicated teachers at my school. They are passionate and sometimes strict, but they teach well, so we respect and appreciate them.

建议: Clarify your opinion and use correct vocabulary. Avoid incomplete sentences and explain your reasons clearly with linking words.

示例: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because too many strict rules can limit our freedom and creativity. Therefore, schools should allow more flexibility for students.

建议: Use proper tense and sentence structure. Explain how the strictness affected you with specific details and linking words.

示例: Yes, I have had strict teachers who enforced many rules. Because of their strictness, I was often afraid to make mistakes in class.

建议: Improve clarity by correcting grammar and vocabulary. Explain why a rule-free school is beneficial using linking words and specific reasons.

示例: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because it encourages students to be creative and enjoy their freedom. I believe such an environment helps students learn better.

× My school have some rule, for example we need to wear school uniform.

✓ My school has some rules, for example we need to wear a school uniform.

The subject 'My school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'rule' should be plural 'rules' because it refers to multiple regulations. 'School uniform' should have an article 'a' before it.

× That's the Japanese special rule, because Taiwan have not that rule.

✓ That's a special Japanese rule, because Taiwan does not have that rule.

'Taiwan' is singular, so the verb should be 'does not have' instead of 'have not'. Also, 'Japanese special rule' should be reordered to 'special Japanese rule' for natural English word order, and 'a' article is needed before 'special'.

× Yes my school have some teacher they have passion so they are strict or blue.

✓ Yes, my school has some teachers who have passion, so they are strict or blue.

'My school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has'. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because it refers to multiple people. 'Who' is used to connect the clause describing teachers.

× Yes my school have some teacher they have passion so they are strict or blue.

✓ Yes, my school has some teachers who have passion, so they are strict or cool.

The word 'blue' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'cool' to describe teachers positively. Also, punctuation and conjunctions are added for clarity.

× However they good at teach so we love that teacher.

✓ However, they are good at teaching, so we love those teachers.

'They' requires the verb 'are'. 'Good at teach' should be 'good at teaching' because 'at' is followed by a gerund. 'That teacher' should be plural 'those teachers' to match 'they'.

× I want to prefer to have fuel at school because some rude, strict and liquidate our freedom and creativity.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school because some are rude, strict, and limit our freedom and creativity.

'Want to prefer' is incorrect; 'prefer' alone suffices. 'Fuel' is incorrect; likely 'fewer rules' is intended. 'Liquidate' is incorrect; 'limit' is appropriate. Also, adjectives need to be connected properly and the sentence restructured for clarity.

× Yes, I had had strict teacher.

✓ Yes, I had a strict teacher.

'Had had' is incorrect here; simple past 'had' is sufficient. 'Teacher' needs an article 'a' because it is singular.

× They are streak of rule so.

✓ They are strict about rules.

'Streak of rule' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'strict about rules' to describe teachers' behavior.

× I afraid them.

✓ I am afraid of them.

The verb 'afraid' requires the verb 'am' and the preposition 'of' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I think because in yellow free school it's good for us because that school helps students make creativity and their freedom.

✓ Yes, I think because in a free school it's good for us since that school helps students be creative and have freedom.

'Yellow free school' is unclear; likely 'a free school' is intended. 'Make creativity' is incorrect; 'be creative' is correct. 'Their freedom' should be 'have freedom' for natural expression.