规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, we are not allowed to bring smartphones to class, and we must wear uniforms every day. These rules help maintain discipline and focus during lessons.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains mistakes that affect understanding. Focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be careful with word choice and sentence structure.

示例: I don't think having more rules would benefit students because it might increase their anxiety and affect their mental health. However, having no rules at all could lead to more conflicts and disorder in school.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples with correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

示例: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in high school named Miss Tai. She was patient and always helped me with difficult math problems. Her guidance greatly improved my understanding and motivated me to study harder.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains errors that make it hard to understand. Provide a clear opinion with reasons, use linking words, and avoid vague or incorrect phrases.

示例: I prefer having a moderate number of rules at school. Too many rules can limit students' creativity and cause anxiety, but some rules are necessary to maintain order and a good learning environment.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples using correct grammar and linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, my Chinese teacher in high school was very strict. She assigned a lot of homework and insisted that we arrive on time for class. Her strictness helped us develop discipline.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Clearly state your opinion, provide reasons, and use linking words to make your answer natural and effective.

示例: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school. I believe that some rules are necessary to create a good learning environment and help students focus on their studies.

× When I was high school, for instance, you don't don't to bring your smartphones to school and there are others you're sure to wear uniform every day.

✓ When I was in high school, for instance, you didn't have to bring your smartphones to school and there were others; you had to wear a uniform every day.

The phrase 'When I was high school' is missing the preposition 'in' to indicate time. 'You don't don't to bring' is incorrect; it should be 'you didn't have to bring' to express past obligation. 'There are others you're sure to wear uniform' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'there were others; you had to wear a uniform' to correctly express past rules and include the article 'a' before 'uniform'.

× I think is a regulation for a student to.

✓ I think it is a regulation for students too.

The sentence is missing the subject pronoun 'it' after 'I think'. Also, 'a student' should be plural 'students' to match the general statement, and 'to' should be 'too' to mean 'also'.

× I didn't think that more girls will increase the anxieties for students which they will have a risk of mental health.

✓ I didn't think that more rules would increase the anxieties for students, which would put them at risk of mental health issues.

The modal verb 'will' should be changed to 'would' to match the past tense context. 'More girls' is likely a typo for 'more rules'. 'They will have a risk of mental health' is awkward; it should be 'put them at risk of mental health issues' for clarity and correctness.

× Besides of that all, no rules will increase the risk of fighting against.

✓ Besides all that, no rules will increase the risk of fighting.

The phrase 'Besides of that all' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'Besides all that'. 'Fighting against' is incomplete and should be simply 'fighting'.

× Will I like to mention my message during my high school?

✓ I would like to mention my teacher from high school.

'Will I like' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I would like' to express a polite intention. 'My message' is likely a typo for 'my teacher'. 'During my high school' should be 'from high school'.

× She was very devoted teachers.

✓ She was a very devoted teacher.

'Teachers' should be singular 'teacher' to match the singular subject 'She'. The article 'a' is needed before 'very devoted teacher'.

× When I trapped in some difficult math problems, she always gave my answer patiently and gave some suggestion on my study which gave me deep.

✓ When I was trapped in some difficult math problems, she always patiently gave me answers and suggestions on my studies, which helped me a lot.

'Trapped' needs the auxiliary verb 'was' to form the past passive. 'Gave my answer' should be 'gave me answers'. 'Gave some suggestion' should be plural 'gave some suggestions'. 'On my study' should be 'on my studies'. 'Which gave me deep' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'which helped me a lot'.

× Umm, I reckon that the suitable rules are the best value.

✓ Umm, I reckon that suitable rules are the best.

'The suitable rules' is incorrect; 'suitable rules' without 'the' is more natural. 'Are the best value' is awkward; 'are the best' is clearer.

× News is too much use as cool if you reduce the creativity of students and it often allows by the anxiety problems.

✓ Too many rules are not good because they reduce the creativity of students and often cause anxiety problems.

'News' is likely a typo for 'rules'. 'Too much use as cool' is incorrect and unclear; it is corrected to 'are not good'. 'It often allows by the anxiety problems' is incorrect; it should be 'often cause anxiety problems'.

× Yes, I my Chinese teacher during my high school evening she always set up alone a lot of standards worth our housework.

✓ Yes, my Chinese teacher during high school always assigned a lot of homework.

The sentence is fragmented and contains errors. 'I my Chinese teacher' is missing a verb. 'Evening' is unnecessary. 'Set up alone a lot of standards worth our housework' is incorrect; it should be 'assigned a lot of homework'.

× Besides that she has a straight with classes so you don't too late for class.

✓ Besides that, she was strict with classes so you weren't late for class.

'Has a straight with classes' is incorrect; it should be 'was strict with classes'. 'You don't too late' is incorrect; it should be 'you weren't late'.

× Uh, no I don't. To create a better environment to education, I strongly to mention some rules to be adoptions for someone.

✓ Uh, no I don't. To create a better educational environment, I strongly suggest some rules should be adopted by everyone.

'I strongly to mention' is incorrect; it should be 'I strongly suggest'. 'To education' should be 'educational environment'. 'To be adoptions for someone' is incorrect; it should be 'should be adopted by everyone'.

× You should set up some uh rules to reduce the risk of studying.

✓ You should set up some rules to reduce the risks during studying.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'uh' is unnecessary. 'Risk of studying' is vague; 'risks during studying' is clearer.