规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够完整且表达不够清晰，句子结构有误，且内容重复。建议回答时直接回应问题，避免语法错误，并补充具体规则细节。

示例: Yes, there are many rules at my university. For instance, students are not allowed to stay overnight outside their dormitories. Additionally, there are strict guidelines about attendance and behavior on campus.

建议: 表达有一定逻辑，但语法和用词不准确。建议使用更准确的语法结构和词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: I believe it depends on the number of rules. Having a reasonable amount of rules can benefit students, but if there are too many, students might tend to ignore them.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，并补充具体细节。

示例: Yes, I remember my senior high school English teacher was very dedicated. She often spent extra time teaching us and even volunteered to hold additional lessons during her free time.

建议: 表达不够自然，语法错误较多。建议使用更地道的表达方式，注意主谓一致，并具体说明理由。

示例: I prefer having more rules at school because they help me develop self-discipline and guide me to make the right choices. I believe this will benefit my future.

建议: 语法错误明显，表达不够流畅。建议注意时态和动词形式，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I vividly remember my senior high school math teacher was very strict. He always kept a close eye on us and assigned a lot of homework, which I really disliked doing.

建议: 回答中有词汇错误（roof free应为 rule-free），表达不够清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，句子结构完整，并明确表达观点。

示例: No, honestly, I would like to be a student in a rule-free school, but as a teacher, I think it would involve more responsibilities, and I'm afraid I couldn't handle that.

× At my university, for example, you can not stay the whole night instead of staying on your own accommodation.

✓ At my university, for example, you cannot stay the whole night outside your own accommodation.

“can not”应写作“cannot”，且表达更自然的说法是“stay the whole night outside your own accommodation”，而不是“instead of staying on your own accommodation”。“instead of”用法错误。

× Besides, you can not.

✓ Besides, you cannot.

“can not”应写作“cannot”，且句子不完整，建议补充内容使句子完整。

× A proper amount of rules are benefit for students, but if there are tons of rules, students are tended to avoid following them.

✓ A proper number of rules is beneficial for students, but if there are tons of rules, students tend to avoid following them.

“amount”用于不可数名词，规则是可数名词，应使用“number”。“are benefit”语法错误，应为“is beneficial”。“are tended to”错误，应为“tend to”。

× Yes, I remembered weirdly that she is my Senior High school's English teacher.

✓ Yes, I remember clearly that she was my Senior High school's English teacher.

“remembered”应为一般现在时“remember”，因为记忆是现在的状态。且“weirdly”用词不当，改为“clearly”更合适。教师身份应使用过去时“was”。

× She spent a lot of time teaching us and volunteer to add another lesson when it was her free time.

✓ She spent a lot of time teaching us and volunteered to add another lesson when it was her free time.

“volunteer”应使用过去式“volunteered”，与前文时态一致。

× In my opinion, I really like to have more rules at school because that can make me more self-discipline and help me to do something right.

✓ In my opinion, I really like to have more rules at school because that can make me more self-disciplined and help me do things right.

“self-discipline”是名词，需用形容词“self-disciplined”。“help me to do”中“to”可省略，更自然。

× It actually guarantee my future with more rules.

✓ It actually guarantees my future with more rules.

主语“It”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，改为“guarantees”。

× Yes, I remember vividly that he is my Senior High School math teacher and he always keeping a strict eye on us.

✓ Yes, I remember vividly that he was my Senior High School math teacher and he always kept a strict eye on us.

“is”应为过去时“was”，因为指过去的老师。“keeping”应为过去式“kept”，与时态一致。

× Besides, he also assigned a lot of homework for us to do and I really hate to do them.

✓ Besides, he also assigned a lot of homework for us to do and I really hated doing it.

前半句为过去时，后半句“hate”应改为过去时“hated”。“do them”改为“doing it”更自然。

× No, to be honest I really want to be a student at a roof free school, but as a teacher I think it means more responsibilities and I'm afraid I cannot take on that.

✓ No, to be honest I really want to be a student at a rule-free school, but as a teacher I think it means more responsibilities and I'm afraid I cannot take that on.

“roof free”应为“rule-free”。“take on that”语序错误，应为“take that on”。