聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be natural and directly answer in present tense, avoid awkward phrasing and mention a reason or feeling. Keep it concise and appropriate (avoid saying you like gossip). Use linking phrase to expand briefly.

示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. For example, we often catch up about our day or share funny stories.

建议: Give a clear, specific and appropriate topic. Avoid negative or vague phrases like ‘the one who we hate’. Use linking words to add details and an example to make answer coherent.

示例: We usually talk about things happening in our lives, such as work, school and mutual friends. For instance, last week we discussed a friend’s new job and how it affects her schedule.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, like, kinda), and use linking words to explain reasons. Be specific about how group chats help you and give a short example.

示例: I prefer chatting in a group because it brings more perspectives and ideas. For example, when we plan an event, everyone suggests different options which helps us make better decisions.

建议: Use present tense, avoid repetition, and give a concise reason with one supporting detail. Mention a positive aspect of social media communication as well, using a linking word.

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel less social pressure online. For example, messaging allows me time to think before I reply and keeps conversations more relaxed.

建议: Give a clear, appropriate answer and avoid saying you enjoy arguing about others. Explain how arguments happen and show resolution strategies. Keep it short and structured with a topic sentence and a supporting detail.

示例: Yes, sometimes we have arguments, usually about opinions or misunderstandings, but we resolve them by talking things through. For example, if we disagree about someone’s behavior, we discuss our viewpoints calmly and try to find common ground.

× I really enjoyed chatting with friends, especially for gossip.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with friends, especially about gossip.

The examiner's question is in present tense: 'Do you like...?' The student used past tense 'enjoyed' which mismatches the current habit. Use simple present 'enjoy' for habitual actions. Also replace preposition 'for' with 'about' to collocate with 'gossip'. Suggestion: Use simple present for routines and 'about gossip' to express topic.

× We usually share some interesting news about the one who we hate and my friend.

✓ We usually share interesting news about someone we dislike and about my friend.

The phrase 'the one who we hate' is awkward and uses a relative clause incorrectly. Replace with 'someone we dislike' for natural English. Also add 'about' before 'my friend' to show both topics. Ensure pronoun/relative usage is natural and avoid 'hate' when speaking casually. Suggestion: Use 'someone we dislike' or 'a person we don't like' and keep parallel structure: 'about someone ... and about my friend.'

× I prefer to chat with a group because uh, when we chat with the group we can like share some interesting opinion about the one topic and sometimes it kinda helpful for me.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group because, when we chat as a group we can share interesting opinions about a topic and sometimes it's kind of helpful for me.

Several issues: 'share some interesting opinion' needs plural 'opinions' or 'an interesting opinion'. 'the one topic' is incorrect; use 'a topic' or 'one topic'. 'kinda helpful' is informal and missing the verb 'is' — subject-verb agreement requires 'it's kind of helpful'. Also 'chat with the group' is better as 'chat as a group'. Suggestion: Use plural for countable nouns when appropriate, include the auxiliary 'is' for adjectives, and choose more formal phrasing: 'it's kind of helpful.'

× I prefer to communicate on social media because whenever I communicate with people on face to face, I feel pressure and then I don't wanna feel that pressure, so I prefer to communicate on social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because whenever I communicate with people face to face, I feel pressure and I don't want to feel that pressure, so I prefer social media.

Use 'via' or 'on' social media (more common 'on social media' or 'via social media'); 'on face to face' is wrong — use 'face to face' without 'on'. Also replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to'. Redundancy: remove repeated phrase. Suggestion: Use 'face to face' as an adverbial phrase and 'want to' in formal speech.

× Yes. Honestly, we enjoyed arguing with each other whenever we talk about someone, especially for like boys or some classic Yeah.

✓ Yes. Honestly, we enjoy arguing with each other whenever we talk about someone, especially about boys or other typical topics.

Mix of tenses: 'enjoyed' (past) and 'talk' (present) conflict. Use simple present 'enjoy' for habitual action. 'Especially for like boys or some classic' is ungrammatical; use 'especially about boys or other typical topics'. Also remove filler 'like' and 'Yeah' in formal correction. Suggestion: Maintain consistent tense for habits (simple present) and use 'about' for topics.