聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: ปรับความชัดเจนและไวยากรณ์ ทำประโยคหัวข้อชัดเจนก่อน แล้วเสริมรายละเอียดสั้นๆ ไม่เกิน 3 ประโยค ใช้คำที่ตรงความหมายและลำดับความคิดให้เหมาะสม เช่น หลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดไม่ชัดหรือศัพท์ผิด (เช่น “shouting liar”, “shooting”) และใช้ linking words เช่น because/so/and เพื่อความลื่นไหล

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. I like talking with them in my free time because it helps me relax and share news about our daily lives. We often catch up about family events and fun activities.

建议: แก้โครงสร้างประโยคและคำศัพท์ ให้ตอบตรงคำถามโดยมีหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียดเป็นตัวอย่าง ใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมแทนคำที่ผิด เช่น ‘stress’ แทน ‘high pressure’ และ ‘vent’ แทน ‘gossip’ ถ้าใช้ตัวอย่าง ให้เชื่อมด้วย linking words (for example, when, because)

示例: I usually chat about everyday life and personal issues. For example, when I feel stressed at work, I often vent to a close friend because it helps me feel better and get advice.

建议: ทำประโยคหัวข้อสั้นๆ ชัดเจน และอธิบายเหตุผลสั้นๆ โดยใช้ linking words เช่น because/so และปรับคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น ‘concentrate on the topic’ และ ‘consult’ ให้เรียงลำดับความคิดให้สมเหตุสมผล

示例: I prefer talking with one friend rather than a group. Because I can concentrate on the topic and feel more confident sharing personal thoughts and asking for advice.

建议: ตอบตรงคำถามแล้วเปรียบเทียบเหตุผลทั้งสองแบบอย่างชัดเจน ใช้คำที่เหมาะสมเช่น ‘real-time’, ‘video calls’, ‘convenient’ และเชื่อมความคิดด้วย linking words เช่น because, but, however อย่าใส่คำซ้ำหรือคำไม่ชัด

示例: I prefer communicating via social media because it’s convenient and allows real-time calls and messages. However, I still enjoy face-to-face meetings when we have time, as they feel more personal.

建议: ตอบโดยใช้โครงสร้างที่ชัดเจน: บอกว่าเกิดบ่อยไหม แล้วอธิบายว่าจัดการอย่างไร ใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องเช่น ‘occasionally’, ‘compromise’, ‘damage the relationship’ และเชื่อมด้วย linking words เช่น but/because เพื่อให้เหตุผลมีความสมเหตุสมผล

示例: We occasionally argue about different topics, but we usually try to compromise because continuing arguments can damage our relationship. So we focus on resolving issues calmly.

× Absolutely a life chatting wish friend.

✓ I absolutely love chatting with friends in my free time.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing verbs and prepositions. Use subject + verb + object structure: 'I absolutely love chatting with friends.' Add context 'in my free time' to match meaning. Grammar Problem Type ID:26

× Umm, because when I have free time I love to shouting liar up there.

✓ Umm, because when I have free time I love to shout and joke around with them.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the base verb or gerund; both are possible, but 'love to shout' or 'love shouting' are correct. The original had 'to shouting' which mixes infinitive marker 'to' with gerund 'shouting'. Also 'liar up there' is unclear; substitute a clearer phrase 'shout and joke around with them.' Grammar Problem Type ID:8

× Our daily life or just a whole shooting of her families.

✓ We talk about our daily lives or about our family matters.

Original lacks proper subjects and verbs and uses incorrect nouns. Use plural 'lives' for 'daily life' when speaking about multiple people. 'Shooting' is incorrect context; replace with 'family matters.' Ensure sentence has subject and verb. Grammar Problem Type ID:26

× It's like a good thing together.

✓ It's a nice thing to do together.

Use 'a nice thing' or 'a good thing' followed by 'to do together.' Original word order 'like a good thing together' is awkward; correct to natural collocation. Grammar Problem Type ID:22

× I normally, uh, chatting with friends about a daily life, uh, for, for example, when I have a high pressure, I just want to, uh, gossip my, uh, boss or I will chatting to my friend through Liza expense my fearing that's time.

✓ I normally chat with friends about daily life. For example, when I am under a lot of pressure, I want to gossip about my boss or I chat with a friend to relieve my stress at that time.

Use present simple 'I chat' not 'I chatting' (verb -ing misused). 'High pressure' should be 'under a lot of pressure' or 'highly stressed.' 'Gossip my boss' requires 'gossip about my boss.' 'Chatting to my friend' should be 'chat with a friend.' Clarify 'relieve my stress' instead of unclear 'Liza expense my fearing.' Grammar Problem Type ID:8

× I prefer chatting, uh, just only one because, uh, when I have, I have to concentrate which my, uh, topic.

✓ I prefer chatting with just one person because I have to concentrate on my topic.

Use 'prefer chatting with' or 'prefer to chat with.' 'Just only one' is redundant; use 'just one person.' Use preposition 'on' with 'concentrate on.' Remove repeated words. Grammar Problem Type ID:6

× So uh, chatting wish, uh, chatting wish them alone is makes me feel confident and open my mind to, uh, consult with them.

✓ So chatting with them alone makes me feel more confident and opens my mind to consult with them.

Use 'with' not 'wish.' Remove extra 'chatting.' 'Is makes' is incorrect; use 'makes.' Subject 'chatting with them alone' requires singular verb 'makes' and 'opens' to agree with subject. Use comparative 'more confident' for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID:12

× I prefer communicate, uh, in social media because it's real time.

✓ I prefer to communicate on social media because it's real-time.

Use infinitive 'prefer to communicate' or gerund 'prefer communicating.' Use preposition 'on social media.' 'Real time' should be hyphenated as 'real-time' when used as adjective. Grammar Problem Type ID:4

× I can, uh, share a video call or, umm, talking to them, uh, in their charm, a while, uh, face to face, uh, a very busy and uh, but sometime we love to face to face too.

✓ I can make a video call or talk to them in real time. Face-to-face meetings are sometimes difficult because we are very busy, but sometimes we like to meet face to face too.

'Share a video call' is awkward; use 'make a video call.' 'Talking' should be 'talk.' Remove unclear phrase 'in their charm, a while.' Use 'face-to-face' hyphenated as adjective. Maintain consistent tense and clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID:6

× Sometime we're arguing, uh, some, uh, topic, uh, but we try to, uh, compromise, uh, because we don't want to argue which, uh, some top any topic.

✓ Sometimes we argue about some topics, but we try to compromise because we don't want to keep arguing about any topic.

Use 'Sometimes' (adverb) and 'we argue about topics.' 'We're arguing' is present continuous but general habit uses simple present 'we argue.' 'Some top any topic' is unclear; replace with 'keep arguing about any topic.' Grammar Problem Type ID:6

× It make Lion bad, uh, relationship.

✓ It can make relationships worse.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It make' should be 'It can make' or 'It makes.' 'Lion bad' seems like mispronunciation; use 'worse' to describe deterioration. Use plural 'relationships' if speaking generally. Grammar Problem Type ID:27