聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um) and small grammar errors. Use one to two supporting details with linking words. For example, say you enjoy chatting and briefly state how often and what you do together.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. I often go to a café or restaurant with a close colleague, and we usually catch up about work and personal life over coffee.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence, avoid trailing off, and use linking words to organize points (for example, 'mainly... but also...'). Give specific examples rather than general lists.

示例: It depends, but mainly we discuss work-related matters such as tasks and deadlines. We also talk about hobbies and weekend plans, for example, going hiking or watching movies together.

建议: Avoid repetitions and hesitations; give a direct answer followed by a concise reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference.

示例: I prefer talking with one friend rather than a group because I feel more comfortable and can have deeper conversations. For instance, I can discuss personal matters more openly in a one-on-one chat.

建议: Give a clear preference or say it depends with a brief explanation. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'long-distance'). Mention both methods and give a specific circumstance when you use each.

示例: It depends: I prefer face-to-face when possible because it's more personal, but for long-distance friends I use social media and video calls. For example, I use WhatsApp and Zoom to stay in touch with colleagues who live abroad.

建议: Answer directly and give a concise reason plus an example. Avoid repeating words and hesitations. Use linking words like 'because' and a short example of how you handle disagreements.

示例: No, I try not to argue with friends because I prefer to keep relationships peaceful. If disagreements happen, I usually step back and discuss the issue calmly later to avoid conflict.

× Uh, we spend a lot of time to go for a cafe or restaurant for chatting.

✓ Uh, we spend a lot of time going to cafes or restaurants to chat.

The original uses an incorrect verb + preposition pattern 'spend time to go for a cafe'. After 'spend time', use the -ing form (spend time doing something). Also use 'going to' rather than 'go for', and pluralize 'cafes or restaurants' for general reference. Use 'to chat' (infinitive) or 'chatting' consistently; 'to chat' is natural here.

× At Warwick, we usually talk about our task, our deadlines or projects outside of the work.

✓ At Warwick, we usually talk about our tasks, our deadlines, or projects outside of work.

Use plural 'tasks' for general reference (singular/plural issue tied to count nouns). The phrase 'outside of work' is the correct prepositional phrase; 'outside of the work' is unnatural. Also add commas for list clarity.

× However, we often chat about our hobbies, our personal lives or sometimes our weekend plans such as.

✓ However, we often chat about our hobbies, our personal lives, or sometimes our weekend plans, such as going to the cinema or visiting friends.

The original sentence ends with 'such as' but gives no example, making it incomplete. Provide examples after 'such as' to complete the sentence and correct sentence structure.

× I I'm I'm not a social person and I'm not comfortable to be to talk with a a group of people.

✓ I'm not a social person and I'm not comfortable talking with a group of people.

Remove repeated fillers 'I I'm I'm' and duplicated 'a'. Use 'comfortable talking' (adjective + gerund) rather than 'comfortable to be to talk', which is ungrammatical. Also use singular 'a group' correctly.

× It's hard for me to have interpersonal communication with them and I prefer personally to talk with just one friend.

✓ It's hard for me to have interpersonal communication with them, and I personally prefer to talk with just one friend.

Move 'personally' to a natural position 'I personally prefer'. Add a comma before 'and' to join clauses. The phrase 'to have interpersonal communication with them' is grammatical but acceptable; leaving it preserves meaning.

× Uh, honestly depends, uh, because now I have some friends, uh, and so we are friends long distance, so it's not possible for having a in person, umm, meeting or conversation with together.

✓ Honestly, it depends, because now I have some friends who live far away, so it's not possible to have an in-person meeting or conversation together.

The original lacks a subject ('it') after 'depends' and has awkward phrasing 'friends long distance' and 'for having a in person'. Replace with 'friends who live far away' and 'to have an in-person meeting'. Remove filler words and correct article usage ('an in-person').

× And this is the only, uh, way I can.

✓ And this is the only way I can communicate with them.

The original ends abruptly and is incomplete ('way I can' needs an infinitive or object). Add 'communicate with them' to complete the thought.

× No, I, I don't like to have argue with my friends.

✓ No, I don't like to argue with my friends.

Use the base form 'argue' after 'like to' (or 'like arguing'). 'Have argue' is incorrect—remove 'have'. Also remove repeated 'I's.

× I, I, I don't like personally to argue with anybody.

✓ I don't personally like to argue with anybody.

Move 'personally' to a natural position before the verb phrase: 'I don't personally like to...'. Remove repeated 'I's. Alternatively 'I personally don't like to...' is also correct.

× And, uh, usually maybe we don't have any common in or having a, some, uh, conflict regarding some, uh, subjects, but I personally prefer to not have.

✓ And usually we don't have any common interests or conflicts regarding subjects, but I personally prefer not to have them.

The phrase 'common in' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'common interests'. 'Having a, some, conflict' is awkward—use 'conflicts'. 'Prefer not to have' should be followed by the object 'them' (conflicts). Remove unnecessary fillers and correct noun choices.