聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and fix key errors (e.g. “in person”, “misunderstand”).

示例: I don't really like chatting online; I prefer talking to friends in person because it's easier to understand their tone and expressions. However, for casual subjects like making plans, messaging can be convenient.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and add specific examples with linking words. Correct tense and phrasing (use present simple for habits). Avoid vague phrasing like “things she did”.

示例: We usually message about everyday life, such as our routines and how we're feeling. For example, I often text my best friend at night and she tells me about her day and any highlights or problems she had.

建议: Organize your answer: state preference, give two clear reasons with linking words, and correct grammar (e.g. “they start sending”, “if a group is for work”). Reduce hesitation words like “uh.”

示例: I prefer messaging one person at a time because group chats are noisy and often full of irrelevant pictures. However, if a group is related to my work, I would follow it to stay updated.

建议: Begin with a direct statement, then give two clear reasons using linking words. Correct phrasing (e.g. “face-to-face”, “misunderstand”), and avoid awkward constructions like “by and sharing”.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read facial expressions and tone, which reduces misunderstandings. Communicating only through social media can create confusion and unnecessary problems.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence and give a brief explanation with linking words. Fix grammar and remove repetition (e.g. “I try to prevent problems”).

示例: Sometimes I do argue with friends if I strongly disagree with their actions, but I tend to avoid conflict and try to resolve issues calmly before they escalate.

× I prefer to talk with them at person and because I think when I chat with people I could misunderstood some things.

✓ I prefer to talk with them in person because I think when I chat with people I could misunderstand some things.

Use 'in person' (correct preposition + phrase) instead of 'at person'. Also 'misunderstood' is wrong form after modal 'could' which should be followed by base verb 'misunderstand'. Suggestion: say 'in person' and use base verb after modal verbs.

× I prefer to talk with them in person and because I think when I chat with people I could misunderstood some things.

✓ I prefer to talk with them in person because I think when I chat with people I could misunderstand some things.

After modal 'could' use base form, not past participle 'misunderstood'. Replace with 'misunderstand'. Suggestion: practice modal + base verb patterns (can/could/may + verb).

× However, if there is a topic that is not really important, I think chatting could be good, but I really don't enjoy it.

✓ However, if there is a topic that is not really important, I think chatting can be good, but I really don't enjoy it.

'Could' implies possibility but 'can' is more natural when stating a general possibility. Both are possible but 'can' fits habitual/general statements. Suggestion: use 'can' for general abilities or possibilities.

× We used to message about some daily life activities and how they're feeling and how they are doing.

✓ We message about daily life activities and how they're feeling and how they are doing.

'Used to' indicates a past habit; context likely describes current usual topics, so simple present 'message' is correct. Also avoid redundant 'some' and 'daily life activities' is sufficient. Suggestion: choose tense that matches when action occurs.

× For example, at night I used to talk with my best friend and she tells me the things that she did and the whole day and that's a good way to.

✓ For example, at night I talk with my best friend and she tells me the things she did during the day, and that's a good way to catch up.

Combine tense consistently: use simple present 'talk' and 'tells' for habitual action. 'The things that she did and the whole day' is ungrammatical; use 'during the day'. Also complete the phrase 'a good way to catch up.' Suggestion: use clear time expressions like 'during the day' and finish verbs/phrases.

× I prefer to message each person separately because I hate, uh, groups of people.

✓ I prefer to message each person separately because I hate groups.

'Groups of people' is wordy; 'groups' or 'group chats' is more natural. Suggestion: use concise nouns like 'groups' or 'group chats'.

× For example, in their groups they start to sending a lot of message and a lot of pictures that are not really important.

✓ For example, in group chats they start sending a lot of messages and a lot of pictures that are not really important.

Use 'start sending' (start + -ing) not 'start to sending'. Also plural 'messages' needed. Use 'group chats' not 'their groups'. Suggestion: remember patterns: 'start' + gerund or 'start to' + base verb.

× However, if the group eats for my daily work, I probably would need to take the message.

✓ However, if the group is for my daily work, I would probably need to read the messages.

'Eats for' is incorrect; likely 'is for' or 'exists for'. 'Take the message' is unnatural; use 'read the messages'. Also reorder 'probably' to natural position. Suggestion: choose verbs that match meaning and place adverbs naturally.

× I prefer to talk face to face with people because you can see their expression and how they're feeling about what are you talking about.

✓ I prefer to talk face to face with people because you can see their expressions and how they're feeling about what you are talking about.

Word order 'what are you talking about' should be statement order 'what you are talking about'. Also plural 'expressions' fits better. Suggestion: use statement word order in embedded clauses.

× I think by and sharing you could misunderstand a lot of things and maybe got some problems that are not really there.

✓ I think by sharing, you could misunderstand a lot of things and maybe get problems that are not really there.

Remove stray 'and'; use 'by sharing' and after modal 'could' use base verb 'misunderstand' already corrected; 'got' should be 'get'. Suggestion: ensure correct verb forms after modals and remove extra conjunctions.

× Sometimes if I don't agree with something that my friends are doing, probably I would argue with them.

✓ Sometimes, if I don't agree with something my friends are doing, I will probably argue with them.

'Would' implies conditional or hypothetical; for real possibility 'will' or 'might' is better. Move 'probably' to after 'will' for natural order. Suggestion: use 'will' or 'might' for future/likely actions.

× But I'm a soft person and I believe that I I AM try to prevent problems as much as I can.

✓ But I'm a gentle person, and I try to prevent problems as much as I can.

Remove repeated 'I I AM try'; simplify 'soft' to 'gentle' (more natural) and use simple present 'try' for habitual action. Suggestion: avoid repetitions and use appropriate adjectives and verb forms for habits.