聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' appropriately and keep it to 2–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relieve stress when I'm feeling down. For example, I often share my worries with a close friend so I don't keep negative thoughts to myself, which makes me feel better afterward.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence and then specific examples. Improve grammar (plural/singular, verb forms) and use linking words like 'such as' or 'for instance'. Avoid vague phrases like 'some thing that I can't do my decisions'—be precise about what you mean.

示例: I usually talk about my emotions and worries, such as stress from work or relationship problems. For instance, if I'm unsure about a decision, I ask a friend for suggestions, which helps me see different perspectives.

建议: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give a concise reason and a brief example. Correct articles and plural forms, and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' naturally. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer talking to one friend because my conversations are often private and personal. For example, I usually confide in one trusted friend rather than discuss private matters in a group.

建议: Clarify and correct mixed ideas: decide which mode you prefer and explain why with specific reasons. Fix pronoun references and contrast correctly (face-to-face vs texting). Use 2–3 sentences and linking words like 'because' or 'whereas'.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read facial expressions and tone of voice, which helps when discussing problems. Texting is useful for quick messages, but it lacks the emotional nuance of an in-person conversation.

建议: Be clear about frequency and reasons. Use correct grammar (articles, plurals, verb forms) and choose better vocabulary: 'argue' vs 'disagree' and 'help me reflect' instead of 'relieve my success'. Provide one concise reason and an example. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes, I sometimes disagree with close friends because honest arguments can help me see different viewpoints. For example, a trusted friend once challenged my plan, which helped me reconsider and improve it.

× Yes, I'm very like chatting with my friend because I can make me relieve my stress especially when I'm feel down.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve my stress, especially when I feel down.

'Very like' is incorrect; use 'really like' (adverb modifying verb). 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match general statement. 'Can make me relieve' is unnatural and ungrammatical; use 'helps me relieve' or 'helps me to relieve'. 'I'm feel down' mixes auxiliary and base verb; correct is 'I feel down'. Maintain consistent subject and verb forms.

× For example, I always chatting with my friends with negative things because I don't want to hold something bad in my mind.

✓ For example, I always chat with my friends about negative things because I don't want to keep bad things in my mind.

After 'always' use base verb 'chat', not 'chatting'. 'With negative things' is incorrect preposition use; use 'about negative things'. 'Hold something bad in my mind' is awkward; 'keep bad things in my mind' or better 'hold bad thoughts'—use simpler 'keep bad things'.

× I usually chat about my negative emotion, my worries and some thing that I can't do my decisions because I really like to ask my friends suggestion.

✓ I usually chat about my negative emotions, my worries, and things that make it hard for me to make decisions because I like to ask my friends for suggestions.

'Negative emotion' should be plural 'negative emotions'. 'Some thing' should be 'things'. 'I can't do my decisions' is ungrammatical; use 'make decisions' or 'decide'. 'I really like to ask my friends suggestion' needs 'for suggestions' and plural 'suggestions'. Also adjust word order for clarity.

× It helps me to think and decision.

✓ It helps me think and make decisions.

Use base verb 'think' (no 'to') after 'helps'. 'Decision' should be plural noun 'decisions' and you need the verb 'make' — 'make decisions' is the correct collocation.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because sometimes that things I chat about is a little bit private, so I don't want to talk to a group of people, I just want to talk with the friends that I trust.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because sometimes the things I talk about are a little private, so I don't want to talk to a group of people; I just want to talk with friends that I trust.

'That things' should be 'the things' and 'things' requires plural verb 'are' not 'is'. 'I chat about' can be simpler as 'I talk about'. 'The friends' can be general 'friends' unless referring to specific ones. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct articles.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think that can express their feeling by their face and I can feel emotion by texting.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I think you can express feelings with your face, while texting does not convey emotion as well.

'Can express their feeling by their face' mixes pronouns and prepositions incorrectly. Better to use general 'you' or 'people' and 'express feelings with your face'. 'Feel emotion by texting' is awkward; use 'texting does not convey emotion as well'.

× So when I have some problem I want to talk about, I like to face to face.

✓ So when I have a problem I want to talk about, I prefer face-to-face communication.

'Some problem' should be 'a problem'. 'I like to face to face' is ungrammatical; use 'I prefer face-to-face communication' or 'I prefer to talk face to face'.

× Yes, I usually argue with my friends but only a friend that I trust because I think sometimes argue is not bad thing, they can make me think and relieve my success when something I really don't like.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but only with friends that I trust, because I think arguments are not always bad; they can make me think and help me improve when I encounter something I really don't like.

Pronoun and noun forms are inconsistent: 'a friend that I trust' vs 'my friends'—use consistent plural 'friends'. 'Sometimes argue' should be 'sometimes argue' or 'I sometimes argue'. 'Argue is not bad thing' needs article and plural: 'arguments are not always bad'. 'Relieve my success' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'help me improve' or 'help me succeed'—changed to 'help me improve'. Clarify 'when something I really don't like' to 'when I encounter something I really don't like'.