聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a direct, natural response (topic sentence), then one or two clear supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct verb forms and keep it under five sentences. For example, start with "Yes, I do" or "No, I don't", then explain why briefly.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. For instance, we often share funny stories or talk about our plans, which makes me feel less stressed.

建议: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence about typical topics, then give one specific example. Use linking words like "for example" or "usually" and correct grammar (subjects and verbs). Avoid unrelated details.

示例: Usually we talk about everyday things, such as work or hobbies. For example, after work I often tell my friends about my jogging routine and we exchange tips about staying healthy.

建议: Give a clear preference sentence, then briefly explain why with one or two supporting reasons linked by words like "because" or "so". Reduce repetition and correct minor grammar (remove duplicate phrases).

示例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel more comfortable and can have a deeper conversation. For example, it's easier to share personal thoughts without interruptions.

建议: State your preference clearly (face-to-face or online) and give a concise reason, using linking words like "because" or "however". Avoid unclear phrases and fillers, and use correct vocabulary (e.g., "face-to-face", "video calls").

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I value eye contact and body language. However, when friends are far away I use video calls to stay in touch.

建议: Answer directly (Yes/No) and give a clear reason. Use one or two specific supporting points showing how you resolve conflicts. Keep sentences short and grammatical, and avoid unrelated mentions (like 'my son') unless relevant.

示例: No, I usually don't argue with friends because I prefer to talk things through calmly. If we disagree, I take time to listen and explain my point so we can reach an understanding.

× That's ideal because I'd like to chatting with my friends because it's made me rewrite and, uh, get get done. I can get nervous for me.

✓ That's ideal because I'd like to chat with my friends since it helps me relax and get things done. I can get nervous sometimes.

The phrase 'I'd like to chatting' incorrectly combines 'would like' with a gerund; after 'would like' the base verb (infinitive without to) or 'to' + base verb should be used: 'I'd like to chat' or 'I would like to chat'. 'It's made me rewrite' is unclear and likely intended to mean 'it helps me relax' or similar; rewrite is wrong verb form and meaning. 'Get get done' is repetition and needs correction to 'get things done'. 'I can get nervous for me' is unnatural; use 'sometimes' to indicate occasional nervousness. Suggestion: Use 'I'd like to chat' (would like + base verb) and replace unclear phrases with clear verbs like 'helps me relax' or 'helps me get things done'. Keep sentences concise.

× The main virtually I often feel chatting with my son because I spending my time to jogging my friend. I'm chatting with them after work to go to my home. Yeah.

✓ Mainly, I often chat with my friends virtually after work because I spend my free time jogging. I chat with them after I get home.

This sentence has multiple structure problems: incorrect word order and mixed subjects ('son' then 'friend'), wrong verb forms ('I spending' should be 'I spend'), and unclear time expressions. 'The main virtually' should be 'Mainly' or 'Virtually, mainly'. 'I often feel chatting' should be 'I often chat'. 'I spending my time to jogging my friend' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I spend my time jogging' or 'I go jogging with my friend'. 'I'm chatting with them after work to go to my home' should be 'I chat with them after I get home' or 'after work when I go home'. Suggestion: Break into two clear sentences, use correct verb tenses (present simple for habitual actions), and maintain consistent subjects.

× I would actually prefer only one friend because I think for me it's a comfortable for me and and I would like to talk with my friend. I'm comfortable.

✓ I would actually prefer only one friend because I think it is more comfortable for me, and I prefer talking with a single friend. I feel comfortable that way.

Problems: redundant and incorrect preposition/phrasing 'for me it's a comfortable for me'. Use 'comfortable for me' once. 'Talk with my friend' is okay but 'talking with a single friend' is clearer. Use 'feel comfortable' rather than 'I'm comfortable' as a standalone fragment that repeats idea. Suggestion: Remove redundancy, use 'comfortable for me' and maintain parallel structure.

× For me, actually, I prefer commodity cake factor fate because, uh, I'd like to add eye contact when I'm talking with my friend, uh, sometime, uh, when I'm long distance with my friend and shouting on online person, yes.

✓ For me, I prefer face-to-face communication because I like to have eye contact when I'm talking with my friends. Sometimes, when a friend is far away, I communicate with them online.

Original uses nonsensical phrases 'commodity cake factor fate' possibly mispronounced 'face-to-face', and 'shouting on online person' is incorrect word choice and adverb/adjective use. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Long distance' needs preposition: 'when a friend is far away' or 'when I'm long-distance from a friend'. Suggestion: Use the correct adjective/adverb phrases: 'face-to-face', 'eye contact', 'online' and 'sometimes'. Keep sentences clear and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

× Umm no I don't because my son, I love him, he's lovely for me and I think our. I take time to uh, speaking and uh, get to understanding with them not approved together.

✓ No, I don't. I love my friends; they are important to me. I take time to talk and try to understand them; we don't usually argue.

Multiple tense and structure errors: 'I love him, he's lovely for me' mixes pronouns and meaning; likely 'I love my friends; they are important to me.' 'I take time to uh, speaking' should be 'I take time to speak' or 'I take time to talk' (infinitive after 'take time to'). 'Get to understanding with them' should be 'try to understand them' or 'reach an understanding with them'. 'Not approved together' is meaningless; 'we don't usually argue' fits context. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions and preferences, use 'take time to talk' and 'try to understand' or 'reach an understanding' for clarity.