聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và phát âm để tránh lỗi như “cried into” và dùng động từ phù hợp; rút ngắn câu để tự nhiên hơn (tối đa 3–4 câu); bổ sung liên từ đơn giản để mạch lạc; nêu rõ ví dụ cụ thể về nền tảng và mục đích liên lạc.

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends on platforms like TikTok, Instagram and Facebook. It helps me keep in touch and sometimes meet new people. For example, I often use Instagram to share photos and message classmates about homework.

建议: Tránh phát âm lặp và câu không hoàn chỉnh; trả lời trực tiếp rồi mở rộng bằng chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: chủ đề hàng ngày, học tập, sở thích) và dùng liên từ như “also” hoặc “for example” để rõ ràng; giữ dưới 5 câu.

示例: We usually talk about everyday things like our day at school, favourite subjects and weekend plans. For example, last week we discussed a group project for our biology class and shared study tips. We also sometimes chat about university life and future plans.

建议: Sửa cấu trúc câu để rõ nghĩa (use 'depends on the topic'); tránh lặp từ và ngắt quãng; đưa ra hai câu ngắn nêu rõ lựa chọn và lý do, thêm ví dụ cụ thể khi cần.

示例: It depends on the topic. For practical issues like study tips or advice, I prefer group chats because more people can help. But for personal or deep conversations, I prefer talking one-on-one with a close friend.

建议: Giữ câu ngắn, rõ ràng; sửa lỗi collocation (e.g., 'go to a café') và dùng từ phù hợp ('convey' thay vì 'transfer'); nêu rõ lý do với một ví dụ cụ thể về cảm xúc hay tình huống giúp face-to-face tốt hơn.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication, for example meeting at a café or the library. It's easier to convey emotions and understand tone, especially when discussing personal problems.

建议: Sửa lỗi từ vựng (use 'friends' not 'France'); trình bày ngắn gọn: thừa nhận rồi mô tả nguyên nhân và ví dụ; tránh tiếng ngập và sử dụng linking words như 'usually' hoặc 'for example'.

示例: Yes, we do argue sometimes. It's usually minor, about things like choosing a restaurant or weekend plans. For example, last Sunday we disagreed on which cafe to go to, but we soon resolved it.

× I cried into chatting with my friends through various kind of platforms like Tiktok, Instagram or Facebook.

✓ I communicate with my friends through various kinds of platforms like TikTok, Instagram, or Facebook.

'Cried into chatting' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'communicate' or 'chat'. Use the preposition 'through' with 'platforms'. 'Kind' should be plural as 'kinds' to match 'various'. 'TikTok' capitalization corrected. Suggestion: use 'I communicate with my friends through various kinds of platforms' or simply 'I chat with my friends on platforms such as TikTok, Instagram, or Facebook.'

× I think that is one of the best ways for me to keep in contact with my friends and also like umm create a new relationship.

✓ I think that it is one of the best ways for me to keep in contact with my friends and also to form new relationships.

Use 'one of the' requires 'it is' not 'that is'. 'Create a new relationship' is awkward; better 'form new relationships' (plural) when speaking generally. Also use 'to' + infinitive 'to form'. Suggestion: say 'to form new relationships' or 'to make new friends.'

× There is a vast kind of subjects that we often chat with my friends.

✓ There are a vast range of subjects that my friends and I often chat about.

Subject-verb agreement and preposition issues: 'There are' should be used with plural 'subjects'. 'A vast kind of subjects' is incorrect: use 'a vast range of subjects' or 'many kinds of subjects'. 'Chat with my friends' is fine but 'chat about' expresses topic. Also reorder to 'my friends and I' for correct subject pronoun order. Suggestion: 'There are many subjects that my friends and I often chat about.'

× It's just simply about our daily life or about the favorite subject at school.

✓ It's simply about our daily lives or about our favorite subjects at school.

Use plural 'lives' when referring to multiple people. 'The favorite subject' should be 'our favorite subjects' to match plural reference. Remove redundant 'just' or 'simply'; keep one adverb. Suggestion: 'It's simply about our daily lives or our favorite subjects at school.'

× And we also talk about the structure we we have in the universe, university life and I think.

✓ We also talk about the structure of the universe, university life, and other topics, I think.

Repetition 'we we' is an error. 'Structure we have in the universe' is unclear; better 'structure of the universe'. The sentence ends abruptly; add 'and other topics' to complete it. Use commas to separate items. Suggestion: 'We also talk about the structure of the universe, university life, and other topics.'

× Actually, I think that it is depends on the story that I want to transferred.

✓ Actually, I think that it depends on the situation I want to talk about.

'It is depends' is incorrect; use 'it depends' (no 'is'). 'The story that I want to transferred' mixes tense and form: use 'I want to talk about' or 'I want to discuss'. 'Transferred' is wrong here. Suggestion: 'It depends on the situation I want to discuss.'

× If this the the problem about the, uh, giving the advice or about the the way to get a high mark.

✓ If it's a problem about giving advice or about how to get a high mark,

Missing verb 'is' and articles: use 'If it's a problem'. 'Giving the advice' should be 'giving advice' (no article). 'About the way to get a high mark' is awkward; 'about how to get a high mark' is better. Suggestion: 'If it's a problem about giving advice or how to get a high mark,'

× I prefer to get get engaged in the group of people, but when I have to emerge in the deep talk, I want.

✓ I prefer to get involved in a group of people, but when I have to engage in a deep conversation, I prefer one-on-one.

'Get get' repetition removed. 'Engaged in the group of people' -> 'get involved in a group' or 'join a group'. 'Emerge in the deep talk' is incorrect; use 'engage in a deep conversation'. Sentence ended abruptly; complete with 'I prefer one-on-one.' Suggestion: 'I prefer to join a group discussion for general advice, but for deep conversations I prefer one-on-one.' },{