爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, chính xác và ngữ pháp đúng. Tránh lỗi số nhiều/số ít (a hobby / hobbies), dùng mạo từ (a book / books) và chia động từ đúng (friends). Thêm liên từ hợp lý nếu liệt kê nhiều sở thích (e.g., and). Nên dùng tối đa 3–4 câu và cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy reading novels, listening to pop music and playing sports with my parents and friends. For example, I usually play badminton with my family at the weekend.

建议: Sử dụng thì quá khứ khi nói về thời thơ ấu (had, enjoyed). Tránh từ không chính xác như “flying” nếu ý là chơi máy bay đồ chơi hay bay lượn — hãy nói rõ. Câu nên có chủ đề rõ ràng và tối đa 3 câu; cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động bạn làm khi nhỏ.

示例: Yes, I had several hobbies as a child. I enjoyed cycling and walking in the park with my friends. I also liked playing with toy planes when I was seven.

建议: Trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc: bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó mô tả cụ thể. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (I have had / I have played; once a week), danh từ riêng hoặc địa danh không rõ nên giải thích hoặc bỏ nếu không cần. Dùng linking words như “because” để giải thích cảm xúc.

示例: Yes, I have played badminton since I was a child. I usually play badminton once a week with my parents and a friend because it helps me relax and stay active. It always makes me feel excited and refreshed.

建议: Câu trả lời hiện rối và ngữ pháp sai nhiều. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích cụ thể ai có cùng sở thích và làm gì cùng nhau. Tránh đại từ không xác định (your). Dùng thì phù hợp (have / has) và câu ngắn, rõ ràng (2–3 câu).

示例: Yes, many members of my family enjoy the same hobbies. For example, my husband and I like playing sports together, and sometimes our children join us at the park. We often play badminton or go for a family bike ride on weekends.

× Yes, I have many hobby such as reading book, listening to music and playing sports with my parents and my friend.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies such as reading books, listening to music, and playing sports with my parents and my friends.

'Hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' after 'many'. 'Book' should be plural 'books' after 'reading'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'my parents' (plural) and to indicate more than one friend. Also add commas for clarity.

× Yes, when I was a child I have many hobbies such as cycling, walking and flying.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had many hobbies such as cycling, walking, and flying kites.

The time expression 'when I was a child' sets the context in the past, so the verb should be past tense 'had' not 'have'. 'Flying' alone is vague; likely intended 'flying kites' or 'flying planes'; adjust to a clearer noun. Add commas for list separation.

× Yes, but in Pedmington is my hobby that I have since childhood.

✓ Yes, but badminton in Pedmington is a hobby I have had since childhood.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing articles. Reorder to subject-verb-object structure: 'badminton in Pedmington is a hobby I have had since childhood.' Use present perfect 'have had' to indicate an action continuing from past to present.

× I always play badminton with my parents and my friend.

✓ I always play badminton with my parents and my friends.

The present tense 'play' is fine, but 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to agree with 'parents' or to reflect multiple people. If referring to one friend, make it 'a friend' for clarity.

× I play badminton once days a week.

✓ I play badminton once a week.

The phrase 'once a week' is the correct adverbial expression for frequency. 'Once days a week' is ungrammatical; remove 'days' and keep 'once a week'.

× It make me feel excited and relaxed.

✓ It makes me feel excited and relaxed.

Subject 'It' is third-person singular, so the verb should be 'makes' (adds -s) to agree in present tense.

× Yes, my husband had the same hobby as my family member, my family, all I, my family various life playing sports and me too.

✓ Yes, my husband has the same hobbies as my family members; my whole family plays sports and I do too.

Use present tense 'has' if talking about current hobbies. 'Family member' should be plural 'family members'. The sentence was fragmented and repetitive; reorganize into two clear clauses: 'my husband has the same hobbies as my family members' and 'my whole family plays sports and I do too.' Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'family' as a group takes singular verb 'plays'.

× Uh, my family always plays about with your friend and your parents.

✓ My family often plays sports with friends and relatives.

Original used wrong pronouns 'your' instead of 'our' and awkward phrasing 'plays about'. Use 'often' or 'always' and 'plays sports with friends and relatives' to convey meaning. Change 'your' to neutral nouns 'friends and relatives' or 'our friends and parents' if intended to refer to the examiner's family; here 'friends and relatives' fits the student's context.