爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (e.g., 'umm', 'you know'), correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles), and limit to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific detail about what you do when singing (e.g., practice, covers, lessons) and use a linking word to connect ideas.

示例: I enjoy singing and have loved K-pop since I was young. In my free time I practice covers of my favorite songs and upload short videos online, so singing is my main hobby.

建议: Answer directly and correct mistakes: begin with a clear statement that you had the same hobby, then give one or two specific examples of childhood activities. Avoid vague phrases and repetitions; use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to show reason or result.

示例: Yes, I did. As a child I loved listening to K-pop and often recorded myself singing covers at home, so singing has been my hobby since then.

建议: Provide a direct short answer and add one supporting detail to enrich the response. Keep it natural and avoid repeating exactly the same sentence as before. Use a linking word like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas and one specific example to show continuity.

示例: Yes, singing has been my hobby since childhood, and I still practice regularly by learning new songs and recording myself.

建议: Start with a direct answer (yes/no) then explain with a clear reason and one specific example. Fix grammar (plural/singular, verb forms), remove repetition, and use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to make the sentence flow logically.

示例: Yes, I share the same hobby with my older sister because she also enjoys K-pop. For example, we often listen to the same albums and sometimes sing together at family gatherings.

× I like to sing umm since I was young I've been really into K pop music and anything, you know music.

✓ I have liked singing since I was young; I've been really into K-pop music and music in general.

The original mixes infinitive 'to sing' with timeline 'since I was young'. Use the present perfect continuous or present perfect with the gerund to show an action that started in the past and continues: 'have liked singing' or 'have been liking singing' (less common). Also use 'music in general' instead of 'anything, you know music' for clarity. Use a hyphen in 'K-pop'.

× So that's my when and only hobbies.

✓ So those are my main and only hobbies.

The sentence incorrectly mixes singular 'that's' with plural 'hobbies'. Use plural demonstrative 'those' and correct adjectives: 'main' instead of 'when' (likely misheard) and maintain plural agreement with 'hobbies'.

× As I mentioned, I just really like to listen to the K pop music and any other music so I did a lot of like cover sounds from these sounds.

✓ As I mentioned, I really like listening to K-pop and other kinds of music, so I recorded a lot of cover songs of those tracks.

Use the gerund 'listening' after 'like'. 'Did a lot of like cover sounds from these sounds' is ungrammatical; use 'recorded a lot of cover songs of those tracks'. 'Recorded' is the correct past action verb. Maintain consistent tense and clearer nouns ('cover songs', 'tracks').

× And yeah, I would say singing is my childhood hobby and still my hubby.

✓ And yeah, I would say singing is my childhood hobby and is still my hobby.

The sentence misuses 'hubby' (meaning husband) instead of 'hobby'. Also it lacks a verb before the second noun phrase; add 'is' to make 'is still my hobby'. This fixes word choice and structure.

× As I mentioned, singing is my childhood hobby and it still is so yeah.

✓ As I mentioned, singing was my childhood hobby and it still is.

When contrasting past origin ('childhood') with the present state, use 'was' for the past origin and 'still is' for current status. Original 'is my childhood hobby' can be acceptable but 'was my childhood hobby' is clearer. Remove filler 'so yeah' for formality.

× In my family member, I have same taste with my older sister because since she was young she also enjoy listening to K pop music at any other kinds of pop music.

✓ In my family, I have the same taste as my older sister because since she was young she has also enjoyed listening to K-pop and other kinds of pop music.

'In my family member' is incorrect; use 'in my family'. Use 'the same taste as' for comparison. 'Enjoy' needs third-person singular 'enjoys' or present perfect 'has enjoyed' to match 'since she was young'. Use 'K-pop' and simplify 'at any other kinds of pop music' to 'and other kinds of pop music'.

× So yeah, so I think I have like a little taste with my little taste and same hobby with my sister.

✓ So yeah, I think I have a similar taste and share the same hobby with my sister.

The original repeats 'little taste' and has awkward preposition 'with my little taste'. Use 'a similar taste' and 'share the same hobby with' for natural English. Ensure subject-verb agreement and clear parallel structure.