爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 句子有多处语法和时态错误，表达也不够简洁自然。回答应以主题句开头，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，避免重复。建议改正动词形式（draw, support），使用连词（for example / because）增加连贯性，并提供具体频率或场景。

示例: Yes, I enjoy drawing. I usually draw on weekends because it helps me relax, and my parents support my hobby by buying me pens and paper.

建议: 回答中有语法错误（时态与情态混用）、词汇误用（price）和口语填充词（you see）过多。建议先直接回答，再用一两句说明原因和频率，使用明确的连接词如 'because' 或 'so'，并替换错误词汇。

示例: Yes, I often played table tennis as a child because I could play with my best friends. We practised after school several times a week to stay fit and improve our skills.

建议: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，含义不清（motivate a best friend / have a good）。建议用一到两句说明持续性和频率，使用连接词（nowadays / since then / so）并提供明确原因或感受。注意冠词和词序。

示例: Yes, I still play table tennis, which I have enjoyed since childhood. My best friend and I usually play once a week because it keeps us active and is a great way to socialise.

建议: 回答结尾不完整，表达重复且句子过长。建议先简洁回答，然后解释原因和具体例子，使用连接词如 'because' 和 'so'，并完成句子。避免重复信息。

示例: Yes. My father is a big fan of table tennis, so he encouraged me to learn it when I was young. Now we still play together on weekends because it is fun and good exercise.

× I often drawing a picture on the weekends and my parents are support me to drawing a picture.

✓ I often draw pictures on the weekends and my parents support me in drawing pictures.

句中 draw 原本為一般動詞，與頻率副詞 often 共用時需用動詞原形 draw（第一/第三人稱單數要加 s，但主語是 I，故用 draw）。drawing 為動名詞/現在分詞，原句誤用造成句法不正確；另外 are support 結構錯誤，應為 support。建議：主語是 I 時與頻率副詞並用一般現在時（I often draw），表示習慣動作；若要表達支持可用 support 或 support me in doing sth。

× They pay for my pen and papers.

✓ They pay for my pens and paper.

英文中 paper 當作不可數名詞表示紙時不加複數 s，但 pen 是可數名詞，表示多支應使用複數 pens。原句 pen and papers 混用單複數形式不當。建議：檢查名詞是否可數，使用正確的單複數形式（paper 作不可數名詞或 a sheet of paper）。

× When I was a child I often played table tennis because I can play with my best friends, you see, and we often have a practice in after school so we can play together and have an exercise price.

✓ When I was a child I often played table tennis because I could play with my best friends, you see, and we often had practice after school so we could play together and get some exercise.

敘述過去的習慣性動作應使用過去時（played, had），因此 can 與 can 的現在形式需改為過去式 could；practice 前的 a 通常省略（we had practice），而 exercise 不用 price（單字誤用），且表達「做運動」應為 get some exercise 或 have exercise。建議：描述過去事件或習慣時，全篇保持過去時一致。

× Nowadays I often play table tennis. I should say the table tennis can help motivate and a best friend and I often play the table tennis once a month so we can play together and have a good.

✓ Nowadays I often play table tennis. I would say table tennis can be motivating, and my best friend and I often play table tennis once a month so we can play together and have a good time.

應用情態動詞 should 在此處不自然，改為更常用的 would say；表達「有激勵作用」用 be motivating 或 motivate（需有受詞）；a best friend 用法錯誤，應為 my best friend；have a good 不完整，應為 have a good time。建議：注意固定片語（have a good time）、所有格使用（my best friend）以及情態動詞用法的語境匹配。

× Yes, my father is a big fan of table tennis so when I was a child he encouraged me to learn it and my parents think it is good for our health so we still play together on the weekend and my father and.

✓ Yes, my father is a big fan of table tennis, so when I was a child he encouraged me to learn it. My parents think it is good for our health, so we still play together on the weekends with my father.

原句句子過長且結尾不完整（“and my father and.”），造成結構混亂。需要拆成兩到三個完整句子，並修正週末用法為 the weekends 或 on weekends，最後補全與父親一起的表達（with my father）。建議：避免過長的句子，確保每個分句都有主語與動詞，句子結尾要完整。