阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan tata urutan kalimat agar terdengar lebih alami; singkirkan pengulangan, dan pastikan bentuk kata kerja konsisten (mis. 'helped' vs 'helps', 'improve' -> 'improves'). Juga batasi jawaban hingga maksimal 4–5 kalimat dan gunakan kata penghubung sederhana untuk kelancaran (mis. 'also', 'for example').

示例: Yes, I do. Reading is one of my favorite hobbies because it helps me relax after a busy day. I enjoy various genres, such as fiction, history, and self-help, and I find that reading not only broadens my knowledge but also improves my vocabulary and language skills.

建议: Perbaiki beberapa kesalahan kecil pada tata bahasa dan pilihan kata (mis. 'comfortable from my eyes' -> 'comfortable for my eyes', 'detective experience' bukan frasa umum; gunakan 'sensory' atau 'tactile'). Jaga jawaban singkat dan langsung, gunakan satu atau dua penghubung seperti 'because' atau 'also'.

示例: I prefer reading on paper because it's more comfortable for my eyes and I enjoy the tactile feel of a physical book. Also, I can focus better without the distractions of digital devices.

建议: Jawaban terpotong dan ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa serta pilihan kata (mis. 'contract exam instruction' tidak jelas). Lengkapi kalimat yang terputus, jelaskan contoh secara spesifik, dan gunakan penghubung untuk membuatnya koheren. Hindari frasa ambigu dan berikan juga contoh kapan tidak perlu membaca dengan sangat teliti.

示例: I need to read carefully when dealing with important documents, such as contracts, exam instructions, or official emails, because missing a detail could cause serious problems. However, I don't read as carefully when I'm browsing social media or light fiction for pleasure, since the consequences of misunderstanding are low.

× Reading is one of my favorite hobbies that really helped me to unwind and escape from my daily stress.

✓ Reading is one of my favorite hobbies that really helps me to unwind and escape from my daily stress.

The relative clause refers to the present habit, so the verb should be in the present simple (helps) not the past (helped). Use present tense to describe ongoing routines or general truths. Suggestion: use 'helps' to match the present reference. Grammar_problem_type_id:10

× I enjoy exploring different genres like fiction, history, and self help books and I find that reading not only expands my knowledge but also improve my vocabulary and language skills.

✓ I enjoy exploring different genres like fiction, history, and self-help books, and I find that reading not only expands my knowledge but also improves my vocabulary and language skills.

Parallel verbs connected by 'not only... but also' must agree in number and tense; 'expands' is third person singular so 'improves' must also be third person singular. Also 'self-help' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective and a comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses. Suggestion: change 'improve' to 'improves' and add hyphen and comma. Grammar_problem_type_id:13

× I find it far more comfortable from my eyes, and I really enjoy the detective experience of holding a physical book or magazine.

✓ I find it far more comfortable for my eyes, and I really enjoy the tactile experience of holding a physical book or magazine.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; use 'for' to indicate suitability or comfort. Also 'detective experience' seems a word-choice error; 'tactile experience' or 'sensory experience' better conveys the feeling of touching a book. Suggestion: replace 'from' with 'for' and 'detective' with 'tactile'. Grammar_problem_type_id:2},{