阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, correct minor grammar (use 'non-fiction' or 'non-fiction books'), and avoid redundancy. Add one specific detail (e.g. favourite genre or recent book) using a linking phrase to enrich the answer.

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially contemporary fiction. For example, I recently read a novel about family relationships that I found very moving, which is why I often choose character-driven stories.

建议: Make the response more coherent and concise: use one clear contrasting phrase (e.g. 'although' or 'but'), correct comparative phrasing ('prefer X to Y'), and give one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repeating similar ideas and limit to 3–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer to read on paper to reading on a screen because physical books feel more immersive. Although screens are more convenient for travel, I particularly enjoy the tactile feel and even the smell of books, which makes reading more enjoyable for me.

建议: Improve clarity and grammar, avoid repetition, and provide specific examples. Start with a direct topic sentence, then use a linking word to give contrasting situations and an example of each to show depth.

示例: You need to read carefully when studying for an exam or following instructions, for instance when learning a new theory in class. By contrast, you can skim casually when reading a light novel or magazine for pleasure, because the main goal is entertainment.

× Yes I do like reading mostly fiction, but I also read a few non fictions.

✓ Yes, I do like reading, mostly fiction, but I also read a few non-fiction books.

The noun 'non fictions' is incorrect. 'Non-fiction' is a compound noun/adjective; when referring to countable items use 'non-fiction books' or 'some non-fiction'. Also add commas for clarity and a hyphen in 'non-fiction'. Suggestion: use 'non-fiction books' or 'some non-fiction' depending on style. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I definitely prefer to read on paper than on screen, although reading on screen is more convenient and pocket friendly, but reading on paper just seems more real.

✓ I definitely prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen, although reading on a screen is more convenient and pocket-friendly; reading on paper just seems more real.

Use 'rather than' to compare preferences, and include the article 'a' before 'screen'. 'Pocket-friendly' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. Also avoid using both 'although' and 'but' together; replace with a semicolon or separate sentences. Suggestion: use 'rather than' for comparisons of preference and include articles where needed. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× And also the main thing is the smell of the books.

✓ Also, the main thing for me is the smell of books.

Beginning a sentence with 'And also' is informal and redundant. 'The smell of the books' sounds overly specific; 'the smell of books' is more natural. Rearranged for clarity. Suggestion: avoid starting sentences with 'And' in formal responses and simplify noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× It's exhilarating.

✓ It is exhilarating.

Contraction 'It's' is acceptable in speech but ensure consistency in tone. Expand to 'It is' for slightly more formal clarity in a test response. No grammatical error in tense, but stylistic adjustment suggested. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× We need to read carefully when we are actually when we actually want to study about something, and we don't need to read carefully when we are just reading it for the fun of it.

✓ We need to read carefully when we actually want to study something, and we do not need to read carefully when we are just reading for fun.

The phrase repeats 'when we are actually' resulting in redundancy. Also, 'study about something' is incorrect; use 'study something' or 'study a subject'. 'Reading it for the fun of it' is wordy; 'reading for fun' is concise. Suggestions: remove repeated words, use 'study something' and simplify the second clause. Grammar problem type ID: 26