阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is positive and natural, but it is somewhat repetitive and contains some grammar and coherence issues. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use linking words to organise supporting details, and correct common grammar errors (e.g., 'when I am waiting for my brother' not 'when I go to pick up my brother'). Keep responses concise (no more than 4–5 sentences). Also vary vocabulary (e.g., 'browse the bookstore', 'catch up on reading', 'listen to podcasts').

示例: I do like reading. On weekends I often browse a local bookstore to find popular novels or non-fiction titles, and I read whenever I have spare time, for example while waiting for my brother. Instead of watching YouTube or listening to podcasts, I prefer to use that time to read because it helps me relax and learn new things.

建议: The main idea is clear: you prefer paper. However your answer has grammar mistakes, unclear phrases ('paper blue', 'textbook is more better'), and unfinished thought. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, one or two specific reasons with linking words, and a brief example. Use correct comparative forms and clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'annotate', 'highlight', 'retain information').

示例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen. I find paper easier to annotate and highlight, so I remember important points better; for example, I often underline passages and write notes in the margins. Because of this, I usually choose a physical book when I study or read for pleasure.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but is vague and grammatically weak. Provide a clear topic sentence stating the contrast (e.g., 'I read carefully when the material is important'). Then give specific examples and use linking words (e.g., 'however', 'for instance'). Avoid hesitation and unfinished sentences; finish your thought with a clear distinction between reading for detail and reading for pleasure.

示例: I read carefully when the material contains important information, such as study texts, work reports, or instruction manuals. For instance, when studying for an exam I read slowly, take notes and highlight key points; however, when I'm reading a light novel for fun, I read more quickly and focus on enjoying the story rather than remembering details.

× I really like reading and on the weekend I just try to go to the bookstore and try to buy a trendy book.

✓ I really like reading, and on weekends I try to go to the bookstore and buy a trendy book.

Use of simple present for habitual actions: 'on the weekend' should be 'on weekends' for general routine, and avoid redundant 'try to' twice. Combine verbs with same subject to be concise.

× If I have time or waiting something or waiting on my brother when I go to pick up my brother, I just try to read it instead of watching YouTube or podcast, recent podcasts.

✓ If I have time or am waiting for something or waiting for my brother when I go to pick him up, I try to read instead of watching YouTube or listening to recent podcasts.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for progressive 'waiting' and incorrect preposition: use 'waiting for'. Avoid repeating 'pick up my brother' and use 'him'. Use parallel gerunds 'watching' vs 'listening to' for podcasts.

× Yeah, absolutely. I love the reading.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. I love reading.

Unnecessary definite article 'the' before uncountable noun 'reading' when speaking generally. Remove 'the'.

× Umm, usually I love the paper blue because if the screen I don't mark on the book because I really like the mark on the book when I'm reading because I really love the text what I want to remember.

✓ Umm, usually I prefer blue paper books because on a screen I can't mark the text, and I like to mark the parts I want to remember.

Word choice and order: 'love the paper blue' is incorrect; use 'prefer blue paper books' or 'prefer paper books'. 'If the screen' incorrect — use 'on a screen'. 'What I want to remember' should be 'that I want to remember' or 'the parts I want to remember'. Simplify for clarity.

× So yeah, I prefer textbook is more better than screen.

✓ So yeah, I prefer textbooks to screens.

Incorrect comparative 'more better' is redundant. Use 'prefer A to B' or 'X is better than Y'. Also pluralize consistently: 'textbooks' and 'screens' unless referring to specific items.

× So usually I pay more I.

✓ So usually I pay more attention to them.

Incomplete sentence lacking object and verb: 'I pay more I' is ungrammatical. Likely meaning is 'pay more attention to them' or 'I spend more time on them'.

× Depends on what kind of book I'm reading.

✓ It depends on what kind of book I'm reading.

Sentence fragment missing subject 'It'. Adding 'It' completes the clause for general statements.

× So uh, most of the book is something different information.

✓ So, most books contain different kinds of information.

'Most of the book' and 'something different information' are incorrect. Use 'most books' for generalization and 'different kinds of information' or 'various types of information'.

× So if someone need to carefully because some information or something I have to remember I really carefully reading,

✓ So if I need to read carefully because there is some information I have to remember, I read very carefully.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'someone need' should be 'I need' for this speaker. Missing 'there is' to introduce information. 'Really carefully reading' has wrong form; use 'I read very carefully' or 'I read carefully'.

× but just just novel or.

✓ But for just a novel, I do not read as carefully.

Fragment 'but just just novel or.' is incomplete and repetitive. Provide a complete contrast clause: indicate less careful reading for novels.