阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (e.g., singular/plural and articles), and limit to up to 4–5 sentences. Add one specific example to make the answer more vivid.

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading. It expands my vocabulary and improves my writing; for example, reading novels taught me new ways to describe emotions. It also lets me escape into interesting stories, and I usually learn something new from each book.

建议: Start with a direct preference sentence, give two clear reasons (one for paper, one for screen), use correct grammar and concise linking words (e.g., however, but). Mention a brief specific example or situation.

示例: I prefer to read on paper because I find it easier on my eyes and more comfortable for long sessions. However, I read on a screen when it's dark or when I travel because it’s more convenient and lightweight.

建议: Give a clear direct answer and distinguish situations that require careful reading versus skimming. Correct grammar and word choice, and provide a concise example to show contrast.

示例: I need to read carefully when the text is technical or factual, for instance when studying a textbook or an instruction manual, because details matter. By contrast, I can skim novels or light articles for general enjoyment and plot.

建议: Begin with a clear preference, explain reasons briefly using correct grammar, and give a short example of when each method is appropriate. Avoid redundancy and long awkward phrases.

示例: I prefer detailed reading because I often miss important information when I scan, especially in non-fiction books. However, I sometimes scan news articles to get the main points quickly when I’m short on time.

× It helps me live in the fantasy of the book.

✓ It helps me live in the fantasy world of the book.

The original sentence is understandable but missing the noun 'world' after 'fantasy' which makes the phrase awkward. Adding 'world' corrects the noun phrase and makes the present participle construction 'live in' natural and complete.

× It helps me learn a new things every day.

✓ It helps me learn new things every day.

The noun 'things' is plural so the determiner should be omitted or changed to 'a' with a singular noun. Remove the unnecessary 'a' to match plural 'things'.

× I do prefer to read on paper because constant exposure to blue light actually harm my eyes.

✓ I do prefer to read on paper because constant exposure to blue light actually harms my eyes.

Subject-verb agreement requires the singular verb form 'harms' with the singular noun phrase 'constant exposure'. This is not a modal error per se but fits subject-verb agreement; however it relates to the effect on a subject and is corrected by changing the verb form.

× However, I prefer to read on screen when it's night time and all the lights are turned off.

✓ However, I prefer to read on a screen at night when all the lights are turned off.

Change 'on screen' to 'on a screen' for natural article use and 'night time' to 'at night' which is the correct adverbial phrase. This fixes article and adverbial usage while keeping tense consistent.

× I do believe that I should read carefully all the time because every information is provided is valuable.

✓ I do believe that I should read carefully all the time because every piece of information provided is valuable.

'Information' is an uncountable noun, so you cannot use 'every' directly with it; use 'every piece of information' or 'all information'. Also remove the extra 'is' after 'provided' to correct the clause structure.

× Whether you are already fictional or non fictional, every details is important and you need to keep attention throughout the book.

✓ Whether the book is fiction or non-fiction, every detail is important and you need to pay attention throughout the book.

'Fictional' describes characters; to describe a book use 'fiction' or 'non-fiction'. 'Details' is plural so use 'detail' with 'every'. Use the verb phrase 'pay attention' rather than 'keep attention'. Also adjust hyphenation for 'non-fiction'.

× I'm not much very good at scanning so I prefer detailed reading because when I scan reading I mess on valuable info especially when it's a non fictional book that I need to keep to pay attention to important details.

✓ I'm not very good at scanning, so I prefer detailed reading because when I scan I miss valuable information, especially in a non-fiction book where I need to pay attention to important details.

Multiple issues: use 'not very good' rather than 'not much very good'. Remove the redundant noun 'reading' after 'scan'. Use 'miss' (verb) not 'mess on'. Replace informal 'info' with 'information'. Use 'non-fiction' with a hyphen and correct article 'a'. Rephrase the clause to 'where I need to pay attention' for correctness.

× So scanning doesn't work that much well for me.

✓ So scanning doesn't work very well for me.

The adverbial phrase 'that much well' is ungrammatical. Use 'very well' or 'that well' to modify 'work'. 'Very well' is the natural choice here.