阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Говорите более естественно и экономно: давайте короткий прямой ответ, затем одно или два предложения с объяснением. Избегайте повторов и грамматических ошибок (например, "rather reading the books" -> "rather than reading books").

示例: No, I don't really enjoy reading. I prefer watching TV series because they are more engaging and require less effort after a long day.

建议: Исправьте неверные слова и порядок: используйте подходящую лексику (например, "insane formation" неверно) и стройте предложение логично. Дайте четкий выбор и пояснение с связкой (because, although).

示例: I prefer to read important or detailed information on paper because it’s easier to focus, although I usually read most things on a screen nowadays for convenience.

建议: Сформулируйте предложение яснее: начните с основной идеи, затем добавьте контраст через связки (for example, while, but). Уберите лишние слова и уточните примеры (study, work, safety).

示例: It depends. I need to read carefully for study materials or anything related to my safety at work, but I don't read as carefully when I'm reading fiction for pleasure.

建议: Употребляйте правильные формы слов и связки: "detailed reading" вместо "detail it reading"; объясните причины кратко и логично. Старайтесь не превышать 3–4 предложений.

示例: It depends on the task. For quick revision or when I'm short on time I usually scan the text, but for important or technical documents I do detailed reading to ensure I understand everything.

× No I don't. I don't like reading. I prefer watching TV series rather reading the books.

✓ No, I don't. I don't like reading. I prefer watching TV series rather than reading books.

The student omitted a comma after 'No' and used 'rather' without 'than' which is required in the construction 'prefer A rather than B'. 'The books' is unnatural here because the student speaks generally about books; the zero article or plural without 'the' is correct. Also keep consistent contractions and spacing.

× I prefer reading insane formation on paper, but nowadays it is not popular so I can be read everything on screen.

✓ I prefer reading important information on paper, but nowadays it is not popular so I can read everything on a screen.

There are several problems: 'insane formation' is incorrect word choice; 'important information' is appropriate. 'can be read everything' is ungrammatical passive; use active 'I can read everything'. Also add article 'a' before 'screen' when speaking of a device. Tense remains present simple for preferences and general truths.

× It depends on situation if when it comes to study and work on myself safety, I have to read carefully if I otherwise if I read literature.

✓ It depends on the situation. When it comes to studying or working on my personal safety, I have to read carefully; otherwise, if I read literature, I do not need to be so careful.

Original sentence has confused word order and incorrect forms: use 'the situation' and gerund 'studying'. 'Work on myself safety' should be 'working on my personal safety'. Use 'otherwise' to contrast clauses. Break into two sentences or use a semicolon for clarity. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× Again, it's about the situation. When it comes to study in a short time, I prefer scanning and when it comes to really crucial things, I have to detail it reading.

✓ Again, it's about the situation. When I have to study in a short time, I prefer scanning, and when it comes to really crucial things, I have to read them in detail.

Use gerund 'studying' or rephrase 'When I have to study'. 'Detail it reading' is incorrect order and form; use 'read them in detail' (read + object + adverbial phrase). Maintain parallel structure and correct word order for clarity.