阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense and word-choice errors (e.g., "forgot a world" → "forget the real world", "don't really read anymore" is fine but explain why clearly).

示例: I used to love reading as a child, and it made me feel relaxed and helped me forget the stresses of daily life. However, I don't read as much now because I often turn to AI tools and online summaries for quick information.

建议: Make a clear direct statement (paper or screen) and support it with two specific reasons. Correct grammar and phrasing, avoid filler words, and use linking words like 'because' and 'also'.

示例: I prefer reading on paper because I use my phone a lot and want to protect my eyes from screen strain. Also, paper makes it easier to take quick notes and highlight important passages.

建议: Begin with a clear topic sentence answering both parts, then give specific examples and use linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'however'). Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., 'recall you' → 'read carefully', 'won' → 'want').

示例: I read carefully when the information affects important decisions, for example contracts, official emails, or medical instructions, because mistakes could have serious consequences. However, I skim headlines and social media when I only want a quick overview.

建议: Answer directly and use correct vocabulary and grammar ('detailed reading' not 'detail readings'). Use linking words ('because', 'however') and give one specific example for each preference. Remove filler words and repetitions.

示例: It depends on the situation. For exams I prefer detailed reading because important facts may appear in questions. However, for daily news or social media I usually skim because it saves time and gives me a quick overview.

× I used to love reading when I was a child, like it was my everyday to do this reading.

✓ I used to love reading when I was a child; it was part of my everyday routine.

The original sentence uses awkward phrasing 'my everyday to do this reading.' The issue is not the past tense itself but incorrect sentence structure and word choice causing a past tense sentence to read poorly. Correction puts verb tense consistent (used to love / was) and replaces incorrect noun phrase with 'part of my everyday routine' for clarity. Suggestion: Use clear noun phrases for habitual past actions (e.g., 'part of my daily routine').

× And when I'm reading I feel relieved and relaxed and just forgot a word of reality and stress.

✓ When I'm reading I feel relieved and relaxed and just forget about a world of reality and stress.

The sentence mixes present continuous 'I'm reading' with past 'forgot.' This is a tense inconsistency. The intended meaning is habitual or general present, so use present simple 'forget' or present continuous 'I just forget about the world.' Also 'a word of reality' is incorrect; correct expression is 'a world of reality' or better 'the pressures of reality.' Suggestion: Keep verb tenses consistent and use idiomatic collocations like 'forget about' and 'a world of.'

× But right now I don't really read anymore.

✓ But right now I don't really read much anymore.

The present tense negative 'don't really read anymore' is acceptable, but missing adverb 'much' makes it sound slightly unnatural. This is a present tense usage improvement rather than a strict grammatical error. Suggestion: Add 'much' for natural negative present statements about frequency: 'don't read much anymore.'

× I think it's the AI technologies keep improving, so yeah.

✓ I think AI technologies keep improving, so yeah.

The original uses 'it's the AI technologies keep improving' which incorrectly combines 'it is' with a clause. Remove the unnecessary 'it's' to maintain correct present simple 'AI technologies keep improving.' Suggestion: Avoid extra dummy subjects when the clause already has a subject and verb.

× I prefer to read on a paper because right now I use my phone a lot and I just the way to protect my eyes from reading on paper.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I use my phone a lot and I want to protect my eyes from reading on screens.

'On a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct idiom. The clause 'I just the way to protect my eyes' is ungrammatical—likely intended as 'I just want a way to protect my eyes' or 'I prefer paper to protect my eyes.' Also 'reading on paper' vs 'on screens' should be clarified. Correction fixes article usage and restructures sentence for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'on paper' (no article) and a clear verb like 'want' when expressing intention.

× And it's also umm, I can take notes on the paper, just write it down on the screen.

✓ Also, I can take notes on paper; I can't really write notes well on the screen.

Pronoun and reference are unclear. 'It’s also ... I can take notes on the paper' mixes subjects. The intended contrast requires negative ability for screens: 'I can't really write notes well on the screen.' Correction clarifies meaning and fixes pronoun/reference errors. Suggestion: Keep subjects explicit and contrast clauses clear (e.g., 'I can do X on paper but can't do X on a screen').

× I can't really take a nice one, just a way of protecting my eyes again.

✓ I can't really take good notes on my phone; reading on paper is another way to protect my eyes.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear ('take a nice one' is nonsensical). This is a sentence structure problem. Correction makes the intended meaning explicit: inability to take good notes on a screen and that paper protects eyes. Suggestion: Avoid fragments and use complete clauses that state subject and action clearly.

× I think I need to recall you when a material effect important decision such as contracts, official emails or medical instruction because a small mistake could have serious consequences.

✓ I think I need to be careful when material matters affect important decisions, such as contracts, official emails, or medical instructions, because a small mistake could have serious consequences.

Many pronoun and word choice errors: 'recall you' is incorrect—should be 'be careful' or 'pay attention.' 'When a material effect important decision' is ungrammatical; needs reordering and correct nouns: 'when material matters affect important decisions.' Also pluralize 'instruction' to 'instructions' and add articles as needed. Suggestion: Use correct verbs for attention ('be careful', 'pay attention') and ensure noun phrases are in the right order ('material matters affect decisions').

× On the other hand, I don't really read carefully when I'm skimming news headline or social media or general interest since I was just won the quick overview.

✓ On the other hand, I don't really read carefully when I'm skimming news headlines, social media, or general-interest pieces since I just want a quick overview.

Tense and verb issues: 'since I was just won the quick overview' is wrong. Use present 'I just want a quick overview.' 'News headline' should be plural 'news headlines' and 'general interest' needs hyphenation or clearer phrasing. The present continuous 'I'm skimming' fits with present simple 'don't read carefully' and 'want.' Suggestion: Keep present-tense consistency for habitual actions and use plural nouns when referring generally ('news headlines').

× Are you perfect? It depends on a situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

'Are you perfect?' is a transcript error—intended question 'Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?' The student's reply 'It depends on a situation' misuses articles and pronouns; correct is 'the situation.' Suggestion: Use 'the' for specific situations: 'It depends on the situation.'

× When I'm doing my exams, I prefer detail readings 'cause it might comes out in the question.

✓ When I'm taking exams, I prefer detailed readings because they might come up in the questions.

Errors: 'detail readings' should be adjective 'detailed readings' (incorrect adjective form). 'Cause' should be 'because' in formal speech. 'It might comes out' mixes singular 'it' with verb 'comes'; better to say 'they might come up in the questions.' This involves adjective/adverb form and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: Use correct adjective forms ('detailed') and ensure subject-verb agreement ('they might come up').

× But when I'm reading Daily News or just it's on the social media, I prefer skimming, Skimming 'cause it really don't waste my time that much and it helps me, umm, quick reading.

✓ But when I'm reading the daily news or something on social media, I prefer skimming because it doesn't waste my time much and it helps me read quickly.

Multiple issues: article use 'the daily news', incorrect 'it's on the social media' should be 'something on social media.' 'Skimming 'cause it really don't waste' has subject-verb agreement error ('don't' should be 'doesn't'). 'Quick reading' should be adverbial 'read quickly.' This combines present tense and adverb placement errors. Suggestion: Use correct articles, ensure subject-verb agreement with singular subjects ('it doesn't'), and use adverbs to modify verbs ('read quickly').