阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は直接的だが、文法ミスと語彙の誤用が目立ちます。具体的には時制（“when I was child”→“when I was a child”）、動詞の選択（“did many books”は不自然で“read many books”）、単数・複数の一致（“Harry Potter is my favorite books”→“Harry Potter is my favorite book”または“the Harry Potter series is my favourite”）を修正する必要があります。さらに回答を自然に5文以内に保つために、トピック文の後に1〜2つの具体例や簡単な理由をつける練習をしてください。

示例: Yes, I do. When I was a child I read a lot of books, and the Harry Potter series was my favorite. I especially enjoyed the imaginative world and the characters, so I often re-read the books during holidays.

建议: 理由を述べようとしている点は良いですが、文が途中で切れていたり、不自然な構造があります（“I prefer to read it on paper because.”の後に理由が必要、また“On the screen makes me tired”は主語欠如）。接続詞で理由を明確につなぎ、完全な文章にする練習をしてください。例を挙げて具体性を増すとさらに良くなります。

示例: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and I don’t get eye strain. For example, I can read for longer periods with a paperback without feeling tired.

建议: 内容は答えているが、混乱している部分と不自然な語彙（“must need to”は二重助動詞、“when I take your exam”は不自然、“Phobi”の意図不明）があるため意味が取りにくいです。まず明確なトピック文で始め、対比を示す接続詞（but / whereas）を使い、具体的な場面を明確に述べてください。また不要なフィラー（uh）を減らす練習をしましょう。

示例: I need to read carefully when I take exams because every word can change the answer. In contrast, I don’t read carefully when I’m browsing social media, since I just scan posts quickly for interesting points.

建议: 回答の主張（スキャニングを好む）は明確ですが、理由と例が合っていません（“I enjoyed the story”は小説に使う表現で、“nonfiction novel”は矛盾）。理由を論理的に結びつけ、語彙を正確に使う練習をしてください。さらに、接続詞を使って主張と理由を自然に繋げ、具体的な例を付け加えると良いです。

示例: I prefer scanning because I usually read non-fiction to get key facts quickly. For example, when I read articles about history, I scan headings and first sentences to find the main ideas before reading more closely.

× When I was child I did many books.

✓ When I was a child I read many books.

The student used 'did many books' which is incorrect; the verb 'read' (past tense pronounced 'red') is used for reading activities. Also missing article 'a' before 'child'. Correct structure: 'When I was a child I read many books.' Suggestion: use 'read' for past reading and include necessary articles.

× For example Harry Potter is my favorite books.

✓ For example, Harry Potter is my favorite book.

The subject 'Harry Potter' is singular, so the complement should be singular 'book', not plural 'books'. Also add a comma after 'For example'. Suggestion: match singular subject with singular noun.

× I prefer to read it on paper because.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because...

The phrase ends with 'because.' followed by nothing; remove 'it' since 'read' is intransitive here when referring to medium. Better: 'I prefer to read on paper because it is easier on my eyes.' Suggestion: complete the clause after 'because' or use a full reason.

× On the screen makes me tired.

✓ Reading on the screen makes me tired.

The original lacks a proper subject; 'On the screen' is a prepositional phrase and cannot be subject alone. Use 'Reading on the screen' or 'Screens' as subject. Suggestion: use a noun or gerund as subject.

× For example, uh, when I take your exam I must need to read carefully, but for Phobi it's I don't need to read carefully.

✓ For example, when I take an exam I need to read carefully, but for Phobi I don't need to read carefully.

Multiple issues: 'take your exam' incorrectly addresses examiner—use 'an exam' or 'my exams'. 'must need' is redundant; use 'need' or 'must'. 'it's I don't' is ungrammatical—simply 'I don't need'. Suggestion: remove redundancy and use appropriate references to exams.

× I prefer scanning because I enjoyed the story when I read a nonfiction novel.

✓ I prefer scanning because I enjoy the story when I read a nonfiction novel.

Tense inconsistency: 'prefer' (present) pairs better with 'enjoy' (present). The student used past 'enjoyed' which mismatches. Also 'a nonfiction novel' is odd; 'a nonfiction book' or 'a novel' (novels are fiction). Suggestion: keep tenses consistent and use correct noun 'book' for nonfiction.