阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: thiếu chủ ngữ/động từ chia đúng thì), một vài chỗ thừa từ không cần thiết và câu hơi ngắn. Hãy: 1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi; 2) Sử dụng thì nhất quán (hiện tại đơn cho sở thích); 3) Tránh lặp từ và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn. Ví dụ cụ thể: nêu thể loại sách bạn thích hoặc dẫn chứng một cuốn sách gần đây.

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me learn new things and relax. For example, I recently read a biography about Elon Musk that taught me a lot about persistence and innovation.

建议: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (động từ chia: 'feel' → 'feels'), lặp từ 'and and', câu cuối bị bỏ dở. Hãy: 1) Trả lời trực tiếp; 2) Sửa lỗi chia thì và cấu trúc; 3) Hoàn thành câu so sánh với màn hình bằng một điểm cụ thể; 4) Giữ độ dài không quá 5 câu.

示例: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more natural and comfortable. I especially enjoy the smell and texture of books, which makes reading more enjoyable, whereas reading on a screen often causes eye strain.

建议: Nội dung rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (thì: 'start' → 'started'/'have started'; 'method' sai từ, nên là 'material'); câu cuối bị bỏ cụm. Hãy: 1) Dùng từ chính xác; 2) Sử dụng thì phù hợp; 3) Hoàn thiện ý cuối bằng ví dụ cụ thể về khi bạn lướt qua; 4) Dùng liên từ để liên kết ý rõ ràng hơn.

示例: I have started reading more books recently. I read carefully when the material is technical, such as instruction manuals or training guides, because I need to understand all the details, but I usually skim news articles or social media posts when I just want a quick update.

建议: Ý trả lời tốt nhưng có lỗi từ vựng và chính tả ('scheming' sai; nên 'scanning and skimming'; 'details reading' → 'detailed reading'); cụm 'iOS reading test' có thể không rõ. Hãy: 1) Sửa lỗi từ; 2) Giải thích ngắn vì sao chọn từng phương pháp; 3) Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc; 4) Giữ không quá 5 câu.

示例: It depends on the situation. For timed tests, like a reading exam, I prefer scanning and skimming to locate answers quickly because time is limited. However, for novels I choose detailed reading to fully understand the plot and characters.

× You like reading? Yes, I am really into reading because is help me to learn new things.

✓ You like reading? Yes, I am really into reading because it helps me to learn new things.

The pronoun 'is' is incorrect; use 'it' to refer to reading. Also use third person singular verb 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it' (reading). Suggestion: use 'it helps' for correct subject-pronoun agreement.

× And it also helped me relax.

✓ And it also helps me relax.

The student mixed past tense 'helped' with present context about a general habit. Use present tense 'helps' to describe an ongoing benefit. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual or general statements.

× I prefer reading on paper because it feel more natural and comfortable to me.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because it feels more natural and comfortable to me.

The verb 'feel' needs third person singular form 'feels' to agree with subject 'it' (reading on paper). Suggestion: ensure -s on verbs in present simple with he/she/it.

× I especially love the smell and and textures of books which make me reading more enjoyable whereas reading on a screen can.

✓ I especially love the smell and textures of books, which make my reading more enjoyable, whereas reading on a screen can be less pleasant.

There is a duplicated 'and' and a faulty clause 'make me reading' should be 'make my reading' or 'make reading'. Also 'can' at end is incomplete; add 'be less pleasant' to complete comparison. Suggestion: remove duplicate words, use correct possessive or gerund forms, and complete clauses.

× Recently I start reading more books.

✓ Recently I have started reading more books.

Use present perfect 'have started' to link recent action to present, especially with 'recently'. Simple present 'start' is incorrect for this context. Suggestion: use present perfect for recent changes or states.

× I read carefully when the method is technical, for example instruction or training guides, because I need to know further details.

✓ I read carefully when the material is technical, for example instructions or training guides, because I need to know further details.

'the method' is unnatural; 'material' or 'text' fits better. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' or 'an instruction'. Suggestion: choose correct noun and pluralize where general plural is intended.

× But I usually skim article or social media posts when I just want to.

✓ But I usually skim articles or social media posts when I just want to.

Use plural 'articles' to match plural 'social media posts' and generalize the noun. Also sentence ends abruptly but grammatically acceptable; context suggests 'when I just want to get the gist' could be added. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.

× When I'm doing the iOS reading test, I prefer scanning and scheming to find answers quickly because time is limited.

✓ When I'm doing the iOS reading test, I prefer scanning and skimming to find answers quickly because time is limited.

The word 'scheming' is inappropriate here; the correct word is 'skimming' meaning reading quickly. Use gerund forms 'scanning' and 'skimming' consistently. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary and parallel gerund forms.

× But when I read ordinary books, I prefer details reading to fully understand the plot and characters.

✓ But when I read ordinary books, I prefer detailed reading to fully understand the plot and characters.

Use adjective 'detailed' before noun 'reading' rather than 'details reading'. 'Detailed reading' correctly describes the type of reading. Suggestion: use adjective form to modify nouns.