阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp cần chính xác hơn; tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi chia động từ. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ kèm liên từ hợp lý. Ví dụ: dùng 'I enjoy reading' thay cho 'Absolutely yes', sửa 'I easy to immerse' → 'I can easily immerse myself', và sửa thì/động từ như 'the author wants to tell' và 'I always enjoy detective novels because they make me curious.'

示例: I enjoy reading. When I read, I can easily immerse myself in the stories the author wants to tell, and I especially enjoy detective novels because they make me curious and excited.

建议: Cần diễn đạt mạch lạc và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp/ từ vựng. Tránh tiếng ồn (uh) và câu cắt khúc. Nêu câu chủ đề rõ ràng ('I prefer reading on paper') rồi giải thích nguyên nhân bằng cấu trúc đơn giản và hợp lý: '...because I use screens all day for work/study, so paper helps reduce eye strain.' Chú ý collocation: 'reduce eye strain' thay cho 'release thread of my eyes'.

示例: I prefer reading on paper because I use screens all day for work, so paper books help reduce eye strain and feel more relaxing.

建议: Sửa lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp (reach→read, reviews→review). Tránh lặp và dùng liên từ hợp lý. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề: 'I need to read carefully before exams.' Giải thích khi nào và vì sao, rồi đối chiếu với tình huống đọc lướt. Ví dụ nêu thời điểm cụ thể ('the day before the exam') và loại tin tức bạn đọc lướt qua.

示例: I need to read carefully the day before an exam because I review all my lessons to remember key points. However, I usually scan casual news or lifestyle headlines when I am not very interested.

建议: Cần dùng số ít 'information' và sửa cấu trúc. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ('It depends on the information') rồi phân biệt rõ khi nào dùng mỗi phương pháp, dùng liên từ như 'because' và 'however'. Tránh cụm từ không tự nhiên ('detailed readings' → 'detailed reading'). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể để tăng tính thuyết phục.

示例: It depends on the information. If a news story really catches my attention, I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the topic better and discuss it with friends; however, I often scan headlines to get a quick overview.

× When I'm reading a book I easy to immerse myself in each story that the author want to tell for the readers and I I always want to read some detective book which make me more curious and I'm so excited when I read them.

✓ When I'm reading a book I easily immerse myself in each story that the author wants to tell the readers, and I always want to read detective books which make me more curious; I'm so excited when I read them.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and verb agreement problems. 'easy' should be the adverb 'easily' modifying the verb 'immerse'. 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with singular subject 'the author'. 'some detective book' should be plural 'detective books' to match the general preference and allow 'which make' to agree; alternatively keep singular and change verb accordingly. Also remove the duplicated 'I'. Improve punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: use adverbs for verbs, ensure subject-verb agreement, and match singular/plural consistently.

× While I prefer to read on paper to the screen, this is because, uh, I often to access to the screen every day because of my story.

✓ I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because I often have to access a screen every day for my studies.

Use 'rather than' to compare preferences, not 'to'. The verb 'access' requires 'have to' when expressing obligation: 'have to access'. Also 'because of my story' is unclear; likely intended 'for my studies' or 'for work'. Suggestion: use 'rather than', include auxiliary verbs for 'have to', and choose the correct noun for purpose.

× So when I read books, I want to stay away from the modern devices.

✓ So when I read books, I want to stay away from modern devices.

The definite article 'the' before 'modern devices' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Use no article for plural general nouns. Suggestion: omit 'the' to express a general category.

× So reading a paper, it have me, uh, release thread of my eyes and.

✓ So reading a paper helps me relax my eyes.

The phrase is ungrammatical: 'reading a paper' should be the subject, not 'it'. 'have me release thread of my eyes' is incorrect vocabulary and structure. Use 'helps me relax my eyes' to convey relief. Suggestion: use 'helps me' + base verb and correct collocations (relax my eyes).

× I need to reach carefully whenever I have the exam in the next day.

✓ I need to read carefully whenever I have an exam the next day.

Typo 'reach' should be 'read'. Use 'an exam' (article) and 'the next day' should be placed after 'exam'. Tense is present for habitual action before an exam. Suggestion: correct spelling and article placement.

× So in the previous day I have to reviews all the lessons again.

✓ So on the previous day I have to review all the lessons again.

Use 'on the previous day' or better 'the day before' for time expression. 'have to' should be followed by base verb 'review' (not 'reviews'). Suggestion: use base form after modal-like 'have to' and correct preposition 'on'.

× However, for some news or some titles about the life that I not much to care, I will read it carelessly.

✓ However, for some news or headlines about daily life that I don't care much about, I will read them carelessly.

'news' is uncountable but 'headlines' or 'titles' can be plural; use 'don't' for negative and 'care much about' word order. Pronoun 'it' should match plural 'them'. Suggestion: choose correct noun (news/headlines), use proper negative contraction, and match pronouns to number.

× It depends on the informations.

✓ It depends on the information.

'information' is uncountable and should not take plural 'informations'. Suggestion: use 'information' as uncountable or 'pieces of information' if count is needed.

× For some news that really catch my attentions, I want to read detailed readings.

✓ For some news that really catch my attention, I want to read in detail.

Use singular 'attention' not 'attentions'. 'detailed readings' is awkward; use 'read in detail' or 'do detailed reading'. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and natural collocations like 'read in detail'.

× This is because I can more understand when I research about that and I can easier to talk to my friends about this topic.

✓ This is because I can understand it better when I research the topic, and I can more easily talk to my friends about it.

Adverb placement and comparative forms: 'more understand' is incorrect; use 'understand better'. 'research about' should be 'research' or 'research the topic'. 'easier to talk' should be 'more easily talk' (adverb 'easily'). Also referents need pronoun 'it'. Suggestion: use adverbs to modify verbs and correct collocations.

× However, scanning is a good way to have me know about.

✓ However, scanning is a good way to get a general idea or to find out about something quickly.

The original structure 'have me know about' is ungrammatical. Use idiomatic expressions like 'get a general idea' or 'find out about something'. Suggestion: use standard English phrases to express acquiring general information.