阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and concise: give one clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use singular/plural and verb forms), and add a brief specific detail. Avoid repetition. For example, say what kinds of books you enjoy and why in two or three sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially science books like chemistry and physics because I find them fascinating. They help me understand how the world works, and I usually read them in my free time.

建议: Improve grammar and clarity: start with a clear preference sentence, give a concise reason and an example. Use linking words (because, so) correctly and avoid hesitations. Correct article use and plural forms.

示例: I prefer reading on a screen because digital books are lighter and easier to navigate. For example, I can jump to a specific chapter or search for keywords instead of flipping through hundreds of pages.

建议: Organise into two clear parts using linking words (When..., but...). Use correct tense and smoother phrasing. Be specific about what you do when studying and when skimming.

示例: I need to read carefully when I am preparing for an exam because I must understand key concepts and remember details. However, when I am just browsing or reading for pleasure, I usually skim the text to get the main ideas quickly.

建议: Give a direct answer and then explain with contrast words (when/if). Use correct vocabulary (scan, detailed reading, memorise) and avoid confusing phrases. Provide a clear reason for each choice.

示例: I prefer detailed reading when I have exams because I need to memorise facts and understand details. If I don't have an exam, I usually scan the text to pick out the main points and save time.

× I really like reading. I'm really like reading a book such as chemistry book and physical book.

✓ I really like reading. I'm really into reading books such as chemistry books and physics books.

The student used 'I'm really like' incorrectly; the correct expression is 'I'm really into' (verb + preposition) or 'I really like'. Also 'chemistry book' and 'physical book' are singular and uncountable here; plural 'books' is appropriate when speaking generally, and 'physical' is the wrong adjective for the subject 'physics'. Use 'physics books' to refer to books about physics.

× That's my hobbies.

✓ Those are my hobbies.

Hobby is countable; when referring to multiple hobbies use the plural 'hobbies' and the demonstrative must agree: 'those' (plural) not 'that'. Use 'Those are my hobbies.' or 'That is my hobby.' depending on number.

× I prefer read on a screen because when I read a book there there is a lot of page and the book has a around 1000 page.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because when I read a book there are a lot of pages and the book has around 1,000 pages.

After 'prefer' when speaking generally, use the -ing form ('prefer reading'). 'There is' should be 'there are' for plural 'pages'. Use plural 'pages' and correct article usage: 'around 1,000 pages' (no 'a' before 'around'). Also remove the duplicated 'there'.

× So when I see when I take the in the screen I just take a one piece.

✓ So when I look at it on the screen I just take one page.

The original has multiple issues: incorrect verbs ('see'/'take') and wrong articles ('the in the screen'). Use 'look at it on the screen' and 'one page' (no 'a' before 'one'). 'Take one page' is simplified to mean 'view one page' or 'open one page' depending on intended meaning.

× I need to read carefully when I have exam I take an idea and all information that's needed for the exam and I read.

✓ I need to read carefully when I have an exam; I take notes and all the information that's needed for the exam and I read it carefully.

Add the article 'an' before 'exam' ('an exam'). 'Take an idea' is unclear; likely 'take notes' is intended. Also pronoun/reference: 'all information that's needed' should have the article 'the'. Finally, add a clear object for 'read' ('read it carefully') and separate clauses with punctuation.

× I just focusing on when when I don't have an exam I read just like a scan against skipping the page.

✓ I just focus on it; when I don't have an exam I read more like scanning, skipping pages.

Use the base form 'focus' after the subject 'I' (not 'focusing'). Remove duplicated 'when'. 'Just like a scan against skipping the page' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'read more like scanning, skipping pages' to express quick reading. Also adjust word order and plural 'pages'.

× The band when I have exam I need to read any detail but if I have it now I need to memorize and if I don't have an exam I just scan against keeping the information.

✓ When I have an exam I need to read every detail and memorise it; if I don't have an exam I just scan without trying to keep the information.

'The band' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation of 'then' or 'when'; remove it. Add articles: 'an exam'. 'Read any detail' should be 'read every detail'. Use 'memorise it' to show purpose. 'Scan against keeping the information' is incorrect — rephrase to 'scan without trying to keep the information'. Use correct conjunctions and punctuation to separate clauses.