食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Nên trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và chính xác tên món ăn; tránh lặp từ và tiếng ồ ừ; cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hương vị, thành phần, khi nào ăn) và dùng liên từ để kết nối câu. Ví dụ: nói một câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích lý do và một chi tiết bổ sung.

示例: My favourite food is Vietnamese cuisine, especially banh mi and pho. I enjoy pho because its broth is rich and aromatic, and I often have it for breakfast on weekends. Moreover, the fresh herbs and lime make it light yet flavorful.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, tránh sửa đổi lộn xộn trong câu; dùng thì quá khứ hoàn chỉnh cho hành động trong quá khứ; cung cấp lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh câu mơ hồ và dùng từ vựng chính xác (sweets, candies, chocolate).

示例: When I was young I loved sweets, especially chocolate and candies. For example, I used to get excited about birthday cakes and jelly sweets after school, because they tasted special and made me happy.

建议: Trả lời rõ ràng (Yes/No) và mở rộng bằng một hoặc hai câu có liên kết logic; dùng từ vựng chính xác về mùa, ngày lễ; đưa ví dụ cụ thể về món ăn theo mùa hoặc dịp lễ. Giữ câu ngắn gọn, không lặp lại.

示例: No, we usually eat the same kinds of food throughout the year. However, on special occasions like Lunar New Year we have traditional dishes such as boiled chicken and sticky rice, which we only prepare for that holiday.

建议: Cần sử dụng thì đúng (present perfect) và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng: Yes/No + explanation. Tránh sửa đổi lặp lại; nêu lý do tại sao món ăn không thay đổi hoặc nếu thay đổi thì như thế nào, kèm ví dụ cụ thể.

示例: No, my favourite food hasn't changed since I was a child. I still love Vietnamese noodles because they remind me of family breakfasts and the familiar flavours have stayed the same.

× I like her uh, gumtom and uh, moon.

✓ I like gumtom and moon.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used before the food names; we should not use a possessive pronoun there. Remove 'her' to correctly name the foods. Use: 'I like gumtom and moon.'

× I, I, I choose to eat that every morning breakfast for breakfast.

✓ I choose to eat that every morning for breakfast.

The sentence contains repetition and redundant words ('morning' and 'for breakfast'). Remove duplicates and keep 'every morning for breakfast' to be natural and grammatically correct.

× Well, when I was young, I really like some squid food.

✓ Well, when I was young, I really liked squid dishes.

The time clause 'when I was young' requires past tense in the main verb, so 'like' should be 'liked'. Also 'squid food' is awkward; 'squid dishes' is clearer.

× No, I would say it's candy and chocolate.

✓ No, I would say candy and chocolate.

The clause 'it's candy and chocolate' is awkward after 'I would say.' Omitting 'it's' makes the response concise and natural.

× Yes. I think all the kids getting good.

✓ Yes. I think all the kids get it.

'Getting good' is incorrect in this context. Use simple present 'get' for a general truth. 'Get it' refers to enjoying the sweets; contextually clearer than 'getting good.'

× I think all the people when they was young will like something sweet food then main food.

✓ I think everyone, when they were young, liked sweet foods more than main dishes.

Several errors: 'people' -> 'everyone' is natural; 'they was' should be 'they were' (subject-verb agreement in past); tense consistency requires past 'liked'; 'something sweet food' should be 'sweet foods' and contrast with 'main dishes.' Also change word order for clarity.

× No I don't. Yes in my family we just eat the normal food for years just on a special day or holidays we will go out to eat something special then normally but I could say we don't eat.

✓ No, I don't. In my family we usually eat the same foods throughout the year, and only on special days or holidays do we go out to eat something special.

The original has run-on structure, tense and modal issues. Use 'usually' for frequency, 'throughout the year' for clarity, and invert 'do we' for emphasis in the clause 'only on special days.' Remove contradictory fragments like 'but I could say we don't eat.'

× No, I hasn't.

✓ No, it hasn't.

'Hasn't' contracts 'has not' and must match the subject; with 'No' referring to 'my favourite food changed' the correct short answer is 'No, it hasn't.' Use 'it' as the subject.

× Well, I was try.

✓ Well, I tried.

After 'I was' you need a present participle for continuous past ('I was trying') or simple past 'I tried.' Context suggests simple past 'I tried.'

× No, I hadn't.

✓ No, I haven't.

The question 'Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?' expects a present perfect answer. Use 'I haven't' rather than 'I hadn't.'

× I I think I can. I'm not.

✓ I think I haven't changed.

The original contains fragments and unclear meaning. To answer whether favourite food has changed, say 'I think I haven't changed' or 'I don't think it has changed.' This provides a complete, relevant response.