食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more fluent and clear: remove filler words (umm, mmm), correct vocabulary and grammar, and give a concise reason. Use one topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words. For example, say what you like and when/how often you eat it, and why.

示例: My favourite foods are sushi and ice cream. I often eat them in the evening because my mother usually buys them as a snack, and I enjoy the contrast between fresh sushi and sweet ice cream.

建议: Answer directly and grammatically: start with a clear topic sentence about childhood favourites, then give a specific reason using correct nouns and verb forms. Avoid asking questions back to the examiner and use linking words (because, since) to connect ideas.

示例: When I was young, I liked chicken and chips. I liked chicken because it tasted good and was a good source of protein, so my parents often cooked it for me.

建议: Clarify meaning and improve grammar: explain seasonal or daily variation clearly. Use one topic sentence and a supporting reason with linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and avoid repetitions.

示例: Yes, I eat different foods regularly because I get bored if I eat the same thing every day. For example, in summer I prefer salads and fruits, while in winter I choose soups and stews for warmth.

建议: Organize answer with a clear contrast: state whether it changed, then explain how and why using linking words (however, now, because). Remove fillers and fix grammar; use specific examples of foods and reasons (health, preference).

示例: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. When I was younger I ate a lot of meat such as chicken, beef and pork, but now I prefer vegetables and fruits because I want to be healthier and feel more energetic.

× MMM my favorite food is umm sushi and ice cream. Umm I really love to see almost every in the evening because umm my mom always buy for a snack.

✓ My favorite foods are sushi and ice cream. I really love to eat them almost every evening because my mom always buys them as a snack.

Problems: plural/singular and pronoun reference and verb agreement. 'Food' should be plural 'foods' when listing multiple items (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'See' is incorrect; context needs the verb 'eat' (Grammar Problem Type 26 sentence structure). 'Almost every in the evening' is missing a noun; change to 'almost every evening' (Grammar Problem Type 11 preposition/phrase). 'My mom always buy' requires third person singular agreement 'buys' (Grammar Problem Type 2/27). Also use pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'sushi and ice cream' (Grammar Problem Type 12). Suggestion: identify the subject number, choose correct verb forms, and use clear pronouns referring to plural nouns.

× Can your food that I used to eat since I was young is chicken and chips? I really love to eat chicken because it's delicious and have a lot natural and protein to my.

✓ The food I used to eat when I was young was chicken and chips. I really loved eating chicken because it was delicious and had a lot of natural protein.

Problems: incorrect question form and word order; 'Can your food that I used to eat since I was young is' is ungrammatical (Grammar Problem Type 26). Use past tense 'used to' with 'was' for habitual past (Grammar Problem Type 5). 'Have a lot natural and protein to my' has multiple issues: verb agreement and word order; use 'had a lot of natural protein' and remove 'to my'. Also change 'I really love to eat' to past 'I really loved eating' to match past time frame. Suggestion: for past habits use 'used to' + base or 'was' for descriptions, ensure correct noun phrases like 'natural protein'.

× MMM yes, I always eat different food every time every day because I'm a person who don't want to eat again and again. It's make me feel bored and I don't want to eat anything.

✓ Yes, I always eat different foods every day because I'm a person who doesn't want to eat the same thing again and again. It makes me feel bored and I don't want to eat anything.

Problems: 'different food' should be plural 'different foods' when referring generally to various items (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'Who don't want' needs third person singular 'doesn't' because the subject is 'I' but relative clause uses 'who' with same subject; use 'who don't' is wrong in standard usage here — better 'because I don't want' or 'a person who doesn't want' matching the noun 'person' (Grammar Problem Type 2/12). 'It's make' requires 'it makes' (Grammar Problem Type 6/27). Also clarify 'the same thing' instead of vague 'eat again and again.' Suggestion: maintain subject-verb agreement and use clear noun phrases.

× Yes, it's watching it's a lot. Then I was young, I used to eat, umm, a lot of meat, for example, chicken, beef and pork. But now I'm a person who want to weekend. So I it's a lot of vegetable and fruits is make me more get more healthy and.

✓ Yes, it has changed a lot. When I was young, I used to eat a lot of meat, for example chicken, beef, and pork. But now I am the kind of person who wants to eat more on weekends, so I eat a lot more vegetables and fruits, which help me become healthier.

Problems: 'it's watching it's a lot' is incoherent; intended meaning is 'it has changed a lot' (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'Then I was young' should be 'When I was young' and use past habitual 'used to' (Grammar Problem Type 5). 'Person who want to weekend' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'person who wants to eat more on weekends' — needs third person singular 'wants' (Grammar Problem Type 2) and proper phrasing. 'So I it's a lot of vegetable and fruits is make me more get more healthy and' has multiple errors: subject-verb agreement, plural nouns 'vegetables and fruits', redundant words, and incorrect clause 'is make me more get more healthy' — correct to 'which help me become healthier' (Grammar Problem Type 13/adjective use and 27). Suggestion: plan sentences with clear subjects and verbs, use correct tense for comparisons between past and present, and simplify clauses to avoid redundancy.