食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. "medieval steak"). Add one brief reason or detail using a linking word. Keep answers under five sentences.

示例: I love eating steak, especially at restaurants. For example, I prefer a medium-rare ribeye because it is tender and full of flavour, and I often order it with seasonal vegetables.

建议: Use past tense consistently and give a clear reason. Begin with a topic sentence in past tense, then add a brief explanation connected with a linking word (because, so). Avoid vague phrases like "it has less."

示例: When I was young I mostly liked vegetables, especially leafy greens. I preferred them because they tasted light and made me feel healthy, so I rarely ate oily snacks.

建议: Correct grammar and be concise. Use accurate verbs and reduce redundancy. Start with a topic sentence, then briefly explain the tradition and contrast with daily habits using a linking word (however, but).

示例: Yes, I eat different foods at certain times of the year. For example, during the Spring Festival I always eat dumplings because it is a family tradition, but otherwise I rarely eat them.

建议: Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating the change, then give one specific reason for the change using a linking word (because, since). Keep it to two sentences.

示例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I used to add a lot of vegetables to every meal because my parents encouraged them, but now I prefer steak because I enjoy its flavour and texture.

× My favorite food is steak. I really enjoy eating steak in a restaurant. I like eating medieval steak.

✓ My favorite food is steak. I really enjoy eating steak in restaurants. I like eating medium-rare steak.

'Medieval' is incorrect here; the correct adjective for steak cooked to a warm pink center is 'medium-rare'. Also 'in a restaurant' is acceptable but plural 'in restaurants' sounds more natural when speaking generally. Suggestion: use the correct adjective 'medium-rare' and choose singular/plural consistently based on context.

× I like the vegetables when I was young, especially the green ones.

✓ I liked vegetables when I was young, especially green ones.

The time marker 'when I was young' places the action in the past, so the verb should be past tense 'liked', not present 'like'. Also 'the vegetables' is unnatural here; use 'vegetables' or 'green ones'. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time expression and omit unnecessary articles.

× It has less because it's a light taste.

✓ They were milder because they have a lighter taste.

The original has several issues: 'It has less' is ungrammatical and unclear. Vegetables (plural) require 'they' and the intended meaning is that green vegetables had a milder or lighter taste. Use comparative/adjective forms 'milder' or 'lighter' and correct subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: refer to plural noun with 'they' and use appropriate adjective forms.

× I don't like oily food at that time.

✓ I didn't like oily food at that time.

The time phrase 'at that time' refers to the past, so the negative should be in past tense 'didn't like' rather than present 'don't like'. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits or states.

× Yes, I do IE dumplings in the spring festivals.

✓ Yes, I do eat dumplings during the Spring Festival.

The original contains 'IE' (likely a typo) and incorrect preposition. Use the verb phrase 'do eat' for emphasis or simply 'eat', and use the preposition 'during' and capitalize the festival name 'Spring Festival'. Suggestion: remove typos and use correct preposition.

× But in the daily life, I don't like eat dumplings.

✓ But in daily life, I don't like eating dumplings.

After 'like' the gerund form 'eating' is required, not the base verb 'eat'. Also 'in daily life' is more natural than 'in the daily life'. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for general preferences and adjust article use.

× I only eat dumplings in the spring festivals because it's a tradition.

✓ I only eat dumplings at the Spring Festival because it's a tradition.

Use the singular proper name 'Spring Festival' or 'during the Spring Festival' rather than 'the spring festivals'. Also the preposition 'at' or 'during' is appropriate. Suggestion: use correct event name and preposition.

× Yes, my favorite food changed since I were a child.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed since I was a child.

When using 'since' with a time point that continues to the present, the present perfect 'has changed' is appropriate. Also 'I were' is incorrect; use 'I was'. Suggestion: use present perfect for changes from past to present and correct subject-verb agreement in past simple clause.

× I like I like add vegetables when I were a child but now I prefer the steak more.

✓ I liked adding vegetables when I was a child, but now I prefer steak more.

Multiple problems: repetition 'I like I like' is an error; with past time 'when I was a child' use past 'liked'. After 'like' or 'liked' the gerund 'adding' is required. Use 'I was' not 'I were'. 'Prefer steak more' is acceptable but 'prefer steak' is sufficient. Suggestion: remove repetition, use past tense, use gerund after like, and correct 'was'.