食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more fluent and natural: avoid filler words like 'uh' and expand slightly with specific reasons or details to show vocabulary and fluency. Keep within 1–3 sentences. Use a clear topic sentence then a brief supporting detail.

示例: My favourite food is pizza because I love the combination of melted cheese and a crispy crust. I especially enjoy pizzas with fresh tomatoes and basil, which taste lighter and more aromatic.

建议: Use past tense consistently and add a short explanation or memory to make the answer more specific. Replace 'like' with 'liked' and avoid brief single-word answers. Use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: When I was young, I mostly liked savory snacks, especially chips because they were convenient and crunchy. For example, I used to have them after school while watching cartoons.

建议: Good structure and contrast. Remove filler 'uh' and make the contrast clearer with a linking phrase like 'whereas' or 'in contrast'. Add a brief reason to show depth.

示例: Yes. In the summer I prefer light salads because they are refreshing, whereas in winter I opt for stewed meat or vegetables since they are warming and comforting.

建议: Be specific and concise. Use past and present comparison with clear reasons and avoid repetitive fillers. State whether your favourite changed and give one or two specific factors (e.g., health, maturity, exposure to new cuisines).

示例: Yes, my tastes have changed since childhood. When I was a child I preferred simple, salty snacks, but now I enjoy more varied and healthier dishes because I care more about nutrition and have tried different cuisines.

× I mostly like savory food, especially chips.

✓ I mostly liked savory food, especially chips.

The question asks about when you were young (past). The verb should be in the past tense to match the time frame. Change 'like' to 'liked'. Suggestion: Use past simple for habits in the past (I liked, I used to like).

× Yes, of course. In the summer I prefer, uh, salads, but in the winter I prefer stewed meat or vegetables.

✓ Yes, of course. In the summer I prefer salads, but in the winter I prefer stewed meat or vegetables.

This sentence generally uses present tense to describe current seasonal preferences, which is acceptable. However, there is an unnecessary comma after 'prefer' before 'salads'. Remove the comma to correct word order and flow. Suggestion: Do not place a comma between a verb and its direct object (prefer salads).

× Yes, I think that everything has changed during this period.

✓ Yes, I think that everything has changed in this period.

The present perfect 'has changed' is fine for recent change, but the preposition 'during' with 'this period' is awkward. Use 'in this period' or 'over this period' to express change within a timeframe. Suggestion: Use 'in' or 'over' with 'this period' when using present perfect (has changed over the years).

× Uh, food doesn't have, uh, doesn't have this umm, taste in of last years.

✓ Food doesn't have the same taste as in previous years.

This sentence has several problems: incorrect preposition 'in of', missing article, and awkward phrase 'this umm, taste'. Correct structure: 'the same taste as in previous years'. Use the definite article 'the' before 'same taste', use comparative connector 'as', and 'in previous years' is a correct time phrase. Suggestion: Simplify to 'Food doesn't taste the same as it did in previous years' for clarity.