食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Reduce repetition and small hesitations. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'I enjoy spicy food, especially Indian and Sichuan cuisine') and avoid starting multiple clauses with 'I'.

示例: I enjoy spicy food, especially Indian and Sichuan dishes. For example, I add freshly ground pepper and chili paste to curries and stir-fries to give them more depth, and I like trying new spice blends when I cook international recipes.

建议: Correct grammar (past tense) and organise into a clear topic sentence plus supporting detail. Use linking words ('because', 'for example') and give one concrete example of how you ate pasta. Avoid filler words and repetition.

示例: When I was young, I loved pasta because it tasted comforting and was easy to prepare. For example, my favourite was creamy pasta with a little garlic and herbs; my parents sometimes added a touch of black pepper or grated cheese to change the flavour.

建议: Give a clear direct answer (Yes/No) then explain with specific seasonal examples and linkers (e.g., 'in winter', 'during summer'). Avoid stuttering and vague phrases like 'enhance my knowledge'. Mention particular dishes or ingredients you eat at certain times.

示例: Yes, I eat different foods by season. In winter I prefer warm soups and stews such as beef stew, while in summer I eat lighter dishes like salads and grilled fish; I also enjoy seasonal produce, for example asparagus in spring.

建议: Answer directly with a clear statement about change and give reasons using linking words ('because', 'however'). Provide one or two specific comparisons between past and present preferences and avoid hesitations. Use past tense for childhood habits.

示例: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. As a child I mainly ate plain foods like pasta and rice because I was picky, but now I enjoy a wider variety of flavours, especially spicy and international dishes such as curries and stir-fries.

× 'Uh, during my childhood I eat lots of pasta because I really like the taste and enjoy different, uh, different way of to eat pasta.'

✓ 'Uh, during my childhood I ate lots of pasta because I really liked the taste and enjoyed different ways of eating pasta.'

'During my childhood' refers to the past, so present tense verbs (eat, like, enjoy) are incorrect. Change to past tense (ate, liked, enjoyed). Also "different way of to eat pasta" is ungrammatical: use the plural "different ways" and the gerund form "eating" after 'ways of'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for actions that happened in the past and use 'ways of + -ing' for describing methods.'

× 'Like cream I put some umm, like spices some.'

✓ 'For example, I would put cream and some spices.'

'Like' used to introduce examples is informal and here word order and grammar are incorrect. Also 'spices some' is incorrect order; use 'some spices'. Use a clear structure: 'For example, I would put...'. Use base verb forms or modal + base verb ('would put') and nouns in correct order.'

× 'Umm, I really like to enhance my knowledge of, about uh, foods.'

✓ 'Umm, I really like to enhance my knowledge about foods.'

'Enhance my knowledge' is fine in present tense if speaker currently enjoys doing so; original contains redundant prepositions 'of, about'. Remove redundancy and choose one preposition ('about'). Suggestion: Keep present tense for current habits and avoid duplicate prepositions.'

× 'Uh, it definitely changed when I was a child.'

✓ 'Uh, it definitely changed since I was a child.'

'Changed when I was a child' is not wrong grammatically but context asks 'Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?' The appropriate phrase is 'changed since I was a child' to match present perfect sense. Use 'since' to indicate change from past to now.'

× 'Unfortunately, I was struggling to try different tastes.'

✓ 'Unfortunately, I struggled to try different tastes.'

'Was struggling' (past continuous) suggests an ongoing past action; simple past 'struggled' is more natural here to state a past habit or tendency. Use simple past for repeated or general past behaviours.'

× 'Umm, I just eat some certain, uh, some foods, uh, like pasta, rice, uh, some soup maybe.'

✓ 'Umm, I just ate certain foods, like pasta, rice and maybe some soup.'

'During childhood' context requires past tense: change 'eat' to 'ate'. Also 'some certain' is redundant; use 'certain'. List items with proper conjunctions and article placement ('some soup'). Suggestion: Use 'certain foods' and past tense for childhood habits.'

× 'But other than that, I was not, uh, willing to eat uh, foods. I.'

✓ 'But other than that, I was not willing to eat other foods.'

'Willing to eat foods' is awkward and missing a determiner; add 'other' to clarify contrast and remove misplaced trailing fragment 'I.' The sentence had an incomplete ending. Use complete clause and place adjectives before nouns.'