食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and clear: name the food first, give a concise reason, and avoid incorrect grammar or irrelevant phrases. Use one or two supporting details connected with linking words. For example, say why you prefer it (taste, health) and give a brief example of how you consume it.

示例: My favourite food is honey because it is a natural sweetener and healthier than refined sugar. For instance, I often add honey to my tea or yogurt instead of sugar, which helps me reduce my sugar intake.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific examples. Use correct tense for the past and avoid repeating the same word. Connect ideas with linking words like 'for example' or 'especially'.

示例: When I was young, I loved eating fruit, especially apples. For example, I would eat apples as snacks and sometimes have apple juice with my breakfast. I still try to eat apples regularly because I enjoyed them as a child.

建议: Answer directly and explain briefly. Use linking words to compare seasons and give a clear reason why your diet does or does not change. Correct sentence structure and avoid contradictions.

示例: I don't usually change my diet much with the seasons because I can buy most foods year-round. However, I sometimes eat more strawberries in summer and more oranges in winter when they are cheaper and fresher.

建议: Give a clear yes/no answer and explain how and why it changed using correct tense. Provide specific examples of foods you liked before and what you prefer now, and use linking words to show contrast (e.g., 'but', 'however').

示例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I disliked honey and ate many unhealthy snacks like chips and sweets, but now I prefer honey and natural foods because I am more health-conscious and avoid processed snacks.

× My favorite food is highly because honey is natural sugar and I don't ate sugar right.

✓ My favorite food is honey because it is a natural sweetener and I don't eat sugar.

The sentence used 'highly' incorrectly (an adverb) instead of naming the food; 'honey' should be the subject. 'Natural sugar' is better expressed as 'natural sweetener.' Also 'don't ate' mixes present negative with past 'ate'; correct form is 'don't eat' (present tense). Maintain present tense to state a preference.

× I don't ate sugar right.

✓ I don't eat sugar.

This sentence mixed present negative auxiliary 'don't' with past tense verb 'ate.' Use the base form 'eat' after 'do/does' for negative present: 'don't eat.' This keeps tense consistent.

× I ate healthy food and honey helps me eat sweet without a grandchild.

✓ I eat healthy food, and honey helps me enjoy sweets without eating sugar.

The sentence used past tense 'ate' while discussing a habitual preference; use present 'eat.' 'Eat sweet' is unidiomatic; use 'enjoy sweets' or 'eat sweets.' 'Without a grandchild' is a semantic error—likely meant 'without sugar.' Replace with 'without eating sugar.' Ensure conjunction and comma for compound sentence.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? / I like fruit.

✓ When I was young, I liked fruit.

The question asks about the past ('did you like' / 'when you were young'), so the answer should be in the past tense: 'liked' not 'like.' Keep tense consistent with the time reference.

× For example, I can eat a lot of fruit with apple.

✓ For example, I could eat a lot of fruit, especially apples.

The modal 'can' implies ability now; to describe past habitual action use 'could' or simple past 'ate.' 'With apple' is awkward; use 'especially apples' or 'including apples.' Adjust plurality.

× I can eat cake juice with apple and only apple.

✓ I used to eat cake, juice, and apples — but mostly apples.

The original 'cake juice with apple' is unclear and ungrammatical. Likely the student meant they ate cake, juice, and apples. Use commas to list items and clarify meaning. 'Only apple' is better expressed as 'mostly apples' or 'only apples' with consistent plurality.

× Now I try to eat a lot of apple too.

✓ Now I try to eat a lot of apples too.

Use plural 'apples' when speaking generally about quantity. 'Try to eat' in present tense is appropriate; only change is plural noun agreement.

× I don't think so, because I try to eat different.

✓ I don't think so, because I try to eat different foods.

'Eat different' is incomplete; add a noun 'foods' to complete the idea. The present tense 'try' fits the context.

× I try to eat the same food all season because I don't think we can eat orange only winter and we can eat strawberry only summer.

✓ I try to eat the same foods all year because I don't think we can only eat oranges in winter or only eat strawberries in summer.

Use 'all year' or 'throughout the season' instead of 'all season.' Pluralize 'foods,' 'oranges,' 'strawberries.' Place 'only' before the verb phrase or before the noun to clarify restriction: 'only eat oranges in winter.' Use 'or' to connect the two clauses.

× The market has a lot of food always also.

✓ The market always has a lot of food.

Adverb placement: put 'always' before the verb or after subject. Remove redundant 'also.' Natural word order is 'The market always has a lot of food.'

× Yes, I think so because when I was a child I don't ate honey.

✓ Yes, I think so, because when I was a child I didn't eat honey.

Talking about the past requires past tense. Use 'didn't eat' (past negative) rather than mixing present 'don't' with past verb 'ate.' Also add a comma after 'Yes, I think so' for clarity.

× I hate honey.

✓ I hated honey.

If referring to childhood preference ('when I was a child') use past tense 'hated.' If speaking about current feelings, keep present. Context indicates past preference, so use past.

× I ate a lot of unhealthy food but now I try don't exist.

✓ I ate a lot of unhealthy food, but now I try not to eat it.

The clause 'try don't exist' is ungrammatical. To express attempting to avoid something, say 'try not to eat it.' Keep past tense for 'ate' and present for current habit 'try,' and refer back to 'unhealthy food' with 'it.'

× I hate unhealthy food right now.

✓ I hate unhealthy food now.

'Right now' is acceptable but redundant. 'Now' is clearer. Present tense 'hate' is correct for a current preference.