食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a direct topic sentence naming the favourite food, then explain briefly why using clear grammar and relevant vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “highly”, “grandchild”) and correct verb forms and negatives. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences and use linking words like because or so to connect reason and result.

示例: My favourite food is honey. I prefer it because it is a natural sweetener and helps me avoid refined sugar, so I can enjoy sweet taste while staying healthy.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence (what you liked) and give specific, coherent details about why and how often you ate it. Use correct tenses for past habits (used to) and avoid repetitive or unclear phrases like “cake juice”. Use linking words such as for example or because to organize supporting detail.

示例: When I was young, I used to love fruit, especially apples. For example, I ate apples every day because they were sweet, convenient to eat and my parents always had them at home.

建议: Answer directly and clearly with one main sentence, then explain with a short reason. Use correct grammar (I try to eat the same foods, not food) and clearer linking (because, however). Avoid contradictions (saying you don’t eat different, then saying you try to eat different). Be specific about examples for seasons and markets.

示例: Not really — I usually eat the same types of food throughout the year because supermarkets sell most fruits and vegetables year-round. However, I do buy a few seasonal items, like strawberries in summer, because they taste better then.

建议: Answer with a clear topic sentence stating yes/no and then give a concise reason using correct past and present tense (used to, didn’t eat). Avoid unclear phrases ("try don't exist"). Provide specific contrasts (what you liked then vs now). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like because or but.

示例: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. As a child I didn’t like honey and often ate unhealthy snacks, but now I prefer natural foods like honey and fruit because I try to eat healthily.

× My favorite food is highly because honey is natural sugar and I don't ate sugar right.

✓ My favorite food is honey because it is natural sugar and I don't eat refined sugar.

The original sentence has article and verb tense errors. 'is highly' is incorrect — likely intended 'is honey'. 'Honey' as a noun does not need an article here. 'is natural sugar' is fine but needs a subject 'it'. 'I don't ate' mixes present negative with past tense; use present simple 'I don't eat'. Also 'sugar right' is unnatural; 'refined sugar' or 'processed sugar' is clearer. Suggestion: use consistent tense (present simple) and a clear noun phrase for the type of sugar.

× I ate healthy food and honey helps me eat sweet without a grandchild.

✓ I ate healthy food, and honey helps me eat sweet foods without added sugar.

The sentence mixes past tense 'ate' with present 'helps'. Keep tense consistent: if describing a past habit, use past for both; here the meaning is ongoing, so present works: 'I eat healthy food, and honey helps me eat sweet foods without added sugar.' Also 'eat sweet' is uncountable/awkward — use 'eat sweet foods' or 'eat sweets'. 'without a grandchild' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'without added sugar'. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary ('added sugar') and align verb tenses.

× I like fruit.

✓ I liked fruit when I was young.

The examiner asked about past preference 'when you were young'. The original present-tense 'I like fruit' does not match the time frame. Use past tense 'liked' to match the question. Suggestion: pay attention to time references in the question and adjust verb tense accordingly.

× For example, I can eat a lot of fruit with apple.

✓ For example, I could eat a lot of fruit, especially apples.

'With apple' is incorrect preposition and singular/plural choice. Use 'especially apples' or 'such as apples' to give examples. Also adjust modal to past ('could') to match 'when you were young'. Suggestion: use 'especially' or 'such as' to introduce examples and use plural 'apples' for general reference.

× I can eat cake juice with apple and only apple.

✓ I would only eat cake and apple juice, mostly just apples.

The original phrase 'cake juice with apple' is semantically incorrect. Likely intended 'cake, juice, and apples' or 'apple juice'. Clarify items and use appropriate nouns. 'Only apple' conflicts with listing other foods; rephrase to 'mostly just apples' or 'only apples'. Suggestion: list items clearly and use correct compound nouns like 'apple juice'.

× I can eat a lot of apple with apple.

✓ Now I try to eat a lot of apples too.

This repeats earlier sentence; correct form uses present simple 'I try to eat a lot of apples too' with plural 'apples'. Ensure plurality and natural word order.

× I don't think so, because I try to eat different.

✓ I don't think so, because I try to eat differently.

'Eat different' uses adjective 'different' where an adverb is required to modify the verb 'eat'. Use 'differently'. Suggestion: convert adjectives to adverbs when modifying verbs.

× I try to eat the same food all season because I don't think we can eat orange only winter and we can eat strawberry only summer.

✓ I try to eat the same foods all year because I don't think we can eat oranges only in winter or strawberries only in summer.

Multiple errors: plural forms ('foods', 'oranges', 'strawberries'), missing prepositions ('in winter'), and awkward phrasing 'only winter'. Recast sentence for clarity and correct pluralization. Suggestion: use plural for general statements about food and include prepositions for time periods.

× The market has a lot of food always also.

✓ The market always has a lot of food.

Word order and adverb placement are wrong. Place adverb 'always' before the main verb or between auxiliary and verb: 'always has'. Remove redundant 'also'. Suggestion: put adverbs of frequency in natural positions (before main verb).

× Yes, I think so because when I was a child I don't ate honey.

✓ Yes, I think so, because when I was a child I didn't eat honey.

The clause refers to the past, so use past negative 'didn't eat' rather than present 'don't ate' which mixes tenses and uses past form after 'don't'. Use auxiliary 'did' with base verb 'eat' in past negation. Suggestion: for past negatives use 'did not' + base verb.

× I hate honey.

✓ I hated honey.

To match 'when I was a child' context, use past tense 'hated'. The original present tense is acceptable for current feelings, but within the past context it should be past. Suggestion: align pronoun/tense with time reference (here past simple).

× I ate a lot of unhealthy food but now I try don't exist.

✓ I ate a lot of unhealthy food, but now I try to avoid it.

'Now I try don't exist' is ungrammatical and likely a mistranslation. Use 'avoid it' to express stopping the behavior. Maintain contrast with past by using past 'ate' and present 'try'. Suggestion: use 'avoid' or 'stop eating' to convey the intended meaning.

× I hate unhealthy food right now.

✓ I hate unhealthy food now.

'Right now' and 'now' are both acceptable; change is minimal. Original is grammatically acceptable, but ensure consistency: if speaking generally prefer 'now' or 'at the moment'. Suggestion: keep simple adverb 'now' and maintain consistent tense.