食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more natural, concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler sounds (umm) and incorrect verb forms. For example, say you are not very interested in eating and prefer quick meals, and then explain why a hamburger fits that need.

示例: My favourite food is hamburgers because I’m not very interested in long meals and I prefer something quick to eat. Besides, they’re convenient and I can eat them on the go, which suits my busy schedule.

建议: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and then add specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and eliminate repetition. Explain frequency or occasions when you ate those foods.

示例: When I was young, I loved fast food like hamburgers and pizza. My parents usually avoided these foods, so I could only have them on special occasions or weekends, which made them feel like a treat.

建议: Provide a clear topic sentence and more specific details about when and why you eat certain foods, using linking words. Fix vocabulary and pronunciation (use the correct dish name and its spelling). For coherence, mention the season or holiday and describe the dish briefly.

示例: Yes, I do. During Lunar New Year in Korea, I usually eat tteokguk, which is a rice-cake soup. People eat it because it is traditional and symbolizes getting a year older, and it’s a warm, comforting dish for winter celebrations.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence about change in tastes, then explain reasons with linking words and specific examples. Correct tense and possessive/pronoun errors, avoid fillers. Mention when and why your preference changed.

示例: Yes, my tastes have changed since childhood. I couldn’t eat cheese as a child because I didn’t like the smell, but over time I grew to enjoy cheese-based foods, for example pizza and cheesy pasta, especially after trying milder cheeses and different recipes.

× I would say hamburger because actually I don't interested in umm eating food, so I don't need to spend much time to eat food and hamburger it can. I can eat hamburger fast so I like it.

✓ I would say hamburger because actually I'm not interested in eating food, so I don't need to spend much time eating and I can eat a hamburger quickly, so I like it.

Error type 10: After auxiliary 'do' negative 'do not' + verb should be base form (not 'interested'); but the intended meaning uses 'to be' with -ing: 'I'm not interested in eating' or 'I do not interest in' is incorrect. Use 'interested in' with 'be' and gerund after 'in'. Also 'spend time to eat' is incorrect — use 'spend time eating'. 'Hamburger it can.' is ungrammatical; reorder to 'I can eat a hamburger quickly.' Use article 'a' before 'hamburger' when referring to one item.

× When I was a kid, I was really into eating fast food such as hamburger and pizza because my parents didn't want to eat them. So I can eat them. I I could eat them in special day.

✓ When I was a kid, I was really into eating fast food such as hamburgers and pizza because my parents didn't want to eat them, so I could eat them on special days.

Error type 5: Tense consistency — narrative is past, so present 'can' should be past 'could'. Also plural and article issues: use plural 'hamburgers' when speaking generally. Use 'on special days' for the correct preposition and plural. Combine clauses for clarity.

× Yes, I do. Korea has a lot of holidays in Lunar New Year. I I usually eat takuk. That means, uh, Korean rice cake soup.

✓ Yes, I do. Korea has many holidays around the Lunar New Year. I usually eat tteokguk, which is Korean rice cake soup.

Error type 11: Use 'around' not 'in' when referring to time period 'Lunar New Year'. Also 'a lot of holidays in Lunar New Year' is awkward; 'many holidays around the Lunar New Year' is natural. Spelling: 'takuk' should be 'tteokguk'. Use a relative clause 'which is' to define it.

× Yes I have experienced changing my taste. When I was a kid I can I couldn't eat cheese because of their it smell. But now I'm really into uh cheese food such as pizza so.

✓ Yes, my taste has changed. When I was a kid I couldn't eat cheese because of its smell, but now I'm really into cheesy foods such as pizza.

Error type 6: Use present perfect 'has changed' for a change from past to present. Remove redundant verbs and incorrect 'can I' fragment. Use 'couldn't' for past inability. 'Their it smell' mixes pronouns; use 'its smell' for cheese (singular neuter). 'Cheese food' is unnatural; use 'cheesy foods'. Ensure sentence is complete and coherent.