建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your response is unclear and grammatically incorrect. To improve, answer directly with a topic sentence stating whether you take photos of buildings. Use correct verbs and prepositions (take photos of, photograph buildings). Add one or two brief supporting details using linking words (for example, because, so, when) and keep it under five sentences. Be specific about what kinds of buildings you photograph and why.

示例: Yes, I often take photos of buildings. For example, I like photographing old churches and modern skyscrapers because their architecture and details are interesting, so I try to capture unique angles and textures.

建议: Your reply is a repetition of the examiner's question and contains unclear phrasing. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence saying whether there is a building you want to visit. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., cathedral, museum, wooden house) and give specific reasons or examples. Use a linking word to add a supporting detail and keep the answer concise and natural.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit the Sagrada Família in Barcelona. I want to see its intricate façades and unique design up close because I admire Gaudí’s work, and I think seeing it in person would be very inspiring.

× Do you take off photos to the building?

✓ Do you take photos of buildings?

The student used incorrect prepositions 'take off' and 'to' with 'photos' and 'building'. The correct verb phrase is 'take photos of' (use preposition 'of' to indicate the object of the photograph). Also use plural 'buildings' to match the general question asked by the examiner. Suggestion: use 'take photos of' + object, and use plural when asking generally.

× Is there building like a wood you visit?

✓ Is there a building you would like to visit?

The student omitted the definite/indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'building' and used an unclear phrase 'like a wood you visit'. The examiner's question asks if there is a building they would like to visit, so the correct structure is 'Is there a building you would like to visit?' Suggestion: include the article 'a' for singular countable nouns and use the standard relative/modal construction 'you would like to visit' for polite intention. If the student meant 'wood' (forest), they should say 'a wooden building' or 'a building in the woods', but here the intended meaning is likely to follow the examiner's original question.