建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần phát triển câu trả lời rõ ràng và ngữ pháp chính xác. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi thì/ngôi (ví dụ: 'I were' → 'I was'). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng từ vựng phù hợp như 'tall buildings', 'mountainous area', 'hills' và liên từ đơn giản như 'however' hoặc 'but'. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

示例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I was born in a mountainous area, so the landscape is mostly hills rather than high-rise buildings. However, I can see several tall peaks in the distance, which makes the view very scenic.

建议: Cần diễn đạt rõ lý do và sắp xếp câu mạch lạc hơn. Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: 'of of', 'in in') và dùng cấu trúc đơn giản: trả lời trực tiếp, nêu lý do và cho ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để kết nối ý. Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

示例: Yes, I do. When I travel to cities I usually take photos of buildings because I like modern architecture and interesting facades. For example, I often photograph glass skyscrapers and historic government buildings when I visit downtown areas.

建议: Câu trả lời nên trực tiếp nêu tên và lý do, tránh hỏi lại người chấm. Sửa thì cho nhất quán (ví dụ: 'My dream was' → 'My dream is'). Thêm chi tiết tại sao bạn muốn đến và một mô tả ngắn về tòa nhà. Dùng liên từ như 'because' để giải thích.

示例: Yes, I would love to visit Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City. My dream is to see it because it is one of the tallest and most modern skyscrapers in Vietnam, and I’m curious about its observation deck and the city views from the top.

建议: Cần trả lời rõ ràng 'yes' hoặc 'no' trong một câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích với lí do mạch lạc và cụ thể. Sửa ngữ pháp và cách nối ý (ví dụ: 'I would say no. I think living in high-rise buildings is less convenient because you must rely on elevators and air conditioning...'). Nói ngắn gọn về nỗi sợ độ cao và bất tiện thực tế. Giữ 2–3 câu.

示例: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building. I find it inconvenient to depend on elevators and centralized air conditioning, and I also feel uncomfortable because I’m afraid of heights.

× Actually no of ace.

✓ Actually no, of course.

The original sentence appears to be a pronunciation/spelling issue rather than a grammatical subject-verb problem. Replacing 'of ace' with 'of course' corrects the phrase to a standard response. Use 'Actually, no, of course.' or simply 'Actually, no.' to be natural.

× I were born in the mountainous area, so there were no top buildings near my house, but there there are a wide range of tall mountain.

✓ I was born in a mountainous area, so there were no tall buildings near my house, but there are a wide range of tall mountains.

Use 'was' (singular first-person past) not 'were'. Use 'a mountainous area' (article and adjective form). 'Top buildings' is incorrect; use 'tall buildings'. 'There there are' has a duplication; keep one 'there are'. 'A wide range of tall mountains' needs plural 'mountains' to match 'a wide range of'.

× Well, actually yes, when I travel to the cities, I usually take photos of of buildings is I love something in in relation to modernization, so I usually take photos a bit.

✓ Well, actually yes. When I travel to cities, I usually take photos of buildings because I like things related to modernization, so I usually take a few photos.

Remove duplicated words 'of of' and 'in in'. Use 'cities' without 'the' when speaking generally. Use 'because' to show reason instead of 'is'. 'I love something in relation to modernization' should be 'I like things related to modernization.' Use 'a few photos' instead of 'photos a bit' for natural English.

× Actually, yes. My dream was to travel to Landmark 81, which is located in Ho Chi Minh City, and I want to go to it. Is it a symbol of modern architecture in Vietnam?

✓ Actually, yes. My dream is to travel to Landmark 81, which is located in Ho Chi Minh City, and I want to go there. It is a symbol of modern architecture in Vietnam, isn't it?

Use present tense 'is' for a current dream (ongoing desire) rather than 'was'. Use 'go there' not 'go to it'. The question tag 'is it a symbol...' can be turned into a confirmation tag 'isn't it?' for conversational flow; alternatively keep as a statement/question pair. Maintain consistent tense.

× Well actually if I would say no is I think that living in the town readings is not as convenient as my house A a held to depend on the air on the elevator which is sometime makes me uncomfortable and I am so scared of height.

✓ Well, actually I would say no. I think that living in a tall building is not as convenient as living in my house. You have to depend on the elevator, which sometimes makes me uncomfortable, and I am very scared of heights.

The original mixes conditional and incorrect phrases. Use 'I would say no' to give an opinion. 'Town readings' is incorrect; use 'tall building'. 'My house' needs 'living in' to parallel structure. 'Have to depend on the elevator' or 'you have to depend' is clearer. 'Which is sometime makes me uncomfortable' should be 'which sometimes makes me uncomfortable.' Use 'scared of heights' (plural) for the common expression.