建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, số ít/số nhiều, động từ chia) và từ vựng chính xác; trả lời ngắn gọn, mạch lạc trong tối đa 4-5 câu. Cụ thể: dùng "there are" cho danh từ số nhiều, sửa "scribbles" thành từ đúng như "skyscrapers" hay "high-rise buildings", chia động từ đúng (ví dụ "I see them every day"), và nối ý rõ ràng hơn bằng liên từ đơn giản như "because" hoặc "so".

示例: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. I live in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, so I often see skyscrapers in my neighbourhood. My house is close to some high-rise apartment blocks, so I see them every day.

建议: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và sử dụng từ nối hợp lý; sửa lỗi về ngữ pháp và danh từ số nhiều/số ít. Cụ thể: dùng cấu trúc điều kiện đơn giản ("It depends on how the building looks"), giải thích rõ lý do bằng linking words như "because" hoặc "so", và sửa "this buildings" thành "these buildings" hoặc "that building".

示例: It depends on how the building looks. If a skyscraper has interesting or unusual features, I often take photos of it and send them to my friends to discuss. But for ordinary buildings I usually don't bother taking pictures.

建议: Cải thiện tính chính xác của thông tin, ngữ pháp và diễn đạt rõ ràng: dùng tên đúng (ví dụ "Eiffel Tower"), tránh dịch trực tiếp; dùng thì phù hợp ("I've seen it on social media"), và giải thích cụ thể vì sao muốn đến thăm (mô tả đặc điểm mong muốn).

示例: I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris. I have seen many photos and videos of it on social media, and I am fascinated by its iron lattice structure and the view from the top. I hope to experience the atmosphere and see the city from above.

建议: Cải thiện diễn đạt ý chính và ngữ pháp: biểu đạt sợ độ cao đúng là "I'm quite scared of heights", dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng để giải thích lý do, tránh câu dài lủng củng. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tiện lợi khi xách đồ, không cần thang máy).

示例: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I'm quite scared of heights. My family and I live in a house close to the ground, which is more convenient for moving furniture and going in and out without using stairs or elevators.

× This is because I live in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, so there are a lot of scribbles, the high rise building.

✓ This is because I live in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, so there are a lot of high-rise buildings.

The original sentence uses 'a lot of scribbles, the high rise building' which is incorrect noun choice and singular/plural mismatch. Use the plural 'buildings' to match 'a lot of' and the compound adjective 'high-rise' before the noun. Improve by using correct noun and plural agreement: 'a lot of high-rise buildings'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× And that's why I sees it every day, because my house also near this building.

✓ And that's why I see them every day, because my house is also near these buildings.

'Sees' is incorrect for the first person singular subject 'I'; use 'see'. Also the sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'house' and needs plural reference for 'buildings' ('them'/'these buildings'). Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and include the correct form of 'to be'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 2

× While it depends on how this building look like.

✓ It depends on what the building looks like.

'It depends on how this building look like' mixes structures. Use 'what' to ask about appearance and 'looks' (third person singular) for subject-verb agreement. Also 'while' is unnecessary. Keep simple: 'It depends on what the building looks like.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 27

× For example for some skyscraper has a lot of flaw and it attracts my attention, so I will take the photos and send it for my friend to talk about this buildings.

✓ For example, if a skyscraper has a lot of flaws and attracts my attention, I will take photos and send them to my friend to talk about the building.

Multiple issues: missing conjunction 'if', singular/plural mismatches ('skyscraper' vs 'a skyscraper', 'flaw' vs 'flaws'), incorrect pronoun agreement ('it' vs 'them'), incorrect preposition 'for' instead of 'to', and 'this buildings' should be 'the building' or 'these buildings'. Correction fixes conditional structure, plural forms, pronoun agreement and prepositions. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× However for some normal buildings I don't care much about that.

✓ However, for some ordinary buildings I don't care much about them.

'That' is vague; use 'them' to refer to 'buildings'. 'Normal' is acceptable but 'ordinary' sounds more natural. Add comma after 'However'. Ensure pronoun matches plural noun. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× Actually, I always want to visit the FM tower in Paris, which is the symbolized in French.

✓ Actually, I have always wanted to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris, which is a symbol of France.

'FM tower' and 'symbolized in French' are incorrect. The famous landmark is 'Eiffel Tower'. Use present perfect 'have always wanted' to express a long-standing desire. 'A symbol of France' is the correct noun phrase. Also use proper noun names. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× I have watches on the social media or when I scroll in the on the Internet.

✓ I have seen it on social media or when I scroll on the Internet.

'Have watches' is incorrect; use 'have seen' (present perfect) to indicate encountered images. Remove extra 'the' and use 'on social media' and 'on the Internet'. Ensure correct verb form and prepositions. Grammar Problem Type ID: 9

× However, I still want to go there and enjoy the unique features that I just have.

✓ However, I still want to go there and enjoy the unique features it has.

'That I just have' is ungrammatical. Use 'it has' to indicate the tower possesses unique features. Keep tense consistent and use correct relative clause structure. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× Actually not, this is because I quite scare the height, so I just want to live in some way is near the ground.

✓ Actually not; this is because I am quite scared of heights, so I prefer to live somewhere close to the ground.

'I quite scare the height' is incorrect: use 'I am quite scared of heights'. 'Some way is near the ground' is awkward; use 'somewhere close to the ground' or 'on the ground floor'. Also use 'prefer' for personal preference. Fix verb 'am' and preposition 'of'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× That's why my family and I live in a house and I think it's very convenient when I want to move everything that I and that I don't need to wait till ever.

✓ That's why my family and I live in a house, and I think it's very convenient because when I want to move things I don't need to wait for elevators.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Move everything that I and that I don't need to wait till ever' is unintelligible. Likely meaning: can move items without waiting for elevators. Use 'things' or 'my belongings', and 'wait for elevators' for clarity. Fix tense and remove redundant words. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26