建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: حاول أن تجيب بشكل أكثر دقة وبدون أخطاء نحوية، واملأ الجملة بجملة موضوعية ثم قدّم تفاصيل قصيرة تدعمها. استخدم روابط بسيطة مثل “but” أو “however” لتوضيح الاستثناءات. حاول أن تبقى ضمن 3-4 جمل ولا تكرر الكلمات.

示例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. My neighborhood mostly has low-rise houses and small shops. However, there is a cluster of high-rises about 20 minutes away by bus.

建议: ابدأ بجملة واضحة ترد مباشرة على السؤال، ثم أضف تفصيلاً واحداً أو مثالاً عن نوع المباني التي تلتقطها وأين تحتفظ بالصور. تجنب التكرار وصحح ترتيب الكلمات والأزمنة.

示例: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings. I usually photograph historic facades and modern skyscrapers and post my favorites on Instagram.

建议: قل اسم المبنى مباشرة ثم أعطِ سبباً محدداً لاهتمامك به. استخدم روابط مثل “because” أو “and” لكن تجنب التردد (uh) والكلمات المكررة. حاول أن تكون محدداً في الوصف.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit the Faisaliah Tower and the Kingdom Centre. I’m interested because the Faisaliah Tower has a unique design, and the Kingdom Centre offers a famous sky bridge with great city views.

建议: قدّم إجابة واضحة ومباشرة ثم فسّر السبب بشكل منظم وبجمل كاملة. استعمل عبارات مثل “because I’m afraid of heights” أو “because I prefer quiet houses” بدلاً من ترديد الكلمات وعبارات غير مكتملة. ضمن 2-3 جمل واضحة.

示例: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building because I’m afraid of heights. I also prefer quieter, more spacious houses on the ground floor.

× No, the tall buildings far my home.

✓ No, the tall buildings are far from my home.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' and the preposition 'from'. Use 'are' for plural subject 'buildings' and 'far from' to indicate distance. Suggestion: Include the correct form of 'be' and the preposition: 'The tall buildings are far from my home.'

× I have photo for building tall building.

✓ I have a photo of a tall building.

Use the article 'a' with the singular count noun 'photo' and the preposition 'of' to show possession/relationship. Also order the adjectives correctly: 'a tall building.' Suggestion: 'I have a photo of a tall building.'

× More more photo.

✓ I have many more photos.

The fragment 'More more photo' is ungrammatical. Use a determiner 'many' for countable plural 'photos' and place it before the noun. Also use plural 'photos.' Suggestion: 'I have many more photos.'

× Kept in my Instagram.

✓ They are kept on my Instagram.

Sentence lacks subject and auxiliary verb. Use subject 'They' (referring to photos) and passive structure 'are kept' plus preposition 'on' for platforms: 'on Instagram.' Suggestion: 'They are kept on my Instagram.'

× Yes, I want uh, to visit uh, Faysalia building in my country and and Mamlaka building.

✓ Yes, I want to visit the Faisaliah Building and the Mamlaka Building in my country.

Use 'the' with specific named buildings (article error) and correct spelling/order: 'Faisaliah Building' (or 'Faisaliah') and 'Mamlaka Building.' Remove filler 'uh' and duplicate 'and.' Suggestion: 'Yes, I want to visit the Faisaliah Building and the Mamlaka Building in my country.'

× No, because I am uh, fire, uh at all building. I have problem uh, a lot tall, but.

✓ No, because I am very afraid of fires in tall buildings. I have a big problem with very tall buildings.

Multiple errors: wrong word 'fire' instead of 'afraid of fires' (vocabulary/structure), missing articles and incorrect adjective placement. Rephrase to express fear: 'afraid of fires in tall buildings.' Second sentence clarifies intensity: use 'a big problem with very tall buildings' or 'I have a big problem with very tall buildings.' Suggestion: 'No, because I am very afraid of fires in tall buildings. I have a big problem with very tall buildings.'