建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: ตอบตรงคำถามก่อน แล้วเสริมรายละเอียดเป็นประโยคสั้นๆ โดยหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำและความกำกวม เช่น บอกตำแหน่งโดยชัดเจน ใช้ linking word เล็กน้อยเพื่อเชื่อมข้อมูล

示例: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home because I live in the capital city. For example, there is a business district with several office towers and apartment blocks within a ten-minute walk.

建议: เริ่มด้วยประโยคตรงๆ ตอบ Yes/No แล้วอธิบายเหตุผลด้วย linking words และรายละเอียดสั้นๆ เพื่อให้คำตอบชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ หลีกเลี่ยงไวยากรณ์ที่ผิด เช่น keep it into my memory

示例: No, I usually don't take photos of buildings. I prefer to observe them with my own eyes and remember the impression, but sometimes I take a quick photo if I want to show a friend or remember a specific detail.

建议: ตอบตรงคำถามแล้วให้ตัวอย่างหรือเหตุผลสั้นๆ ใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผลกับตัวอย่าง และหลีกเลี่ยงประโยคยาวไม่มีจุด เช่น อธิบายว่าชอบธรรมชาติอย่างไรและยกตัวอย่างอาคารที่ไม่สนใจหรือที่อยากไปบ้าง

示例: Not really. I prefer visiting natural or traditional towns because they feel peaceful and relaxing. For instance, I would rather spend time in my hometown’s old market or countryside than visit modern skyscrapers.

建议: ตอบชัดเจนแล้วอธิบายเหตุผลสั้นๆ ใช้ภาษาเป็นธรรมชาติและแก้ข้อผิดพลาดไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'my company provided accommodation' และอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนโดยใช้ linking words เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so'

示例: No, I don't want to live in a tall building. However, my company provided accommodation in a high-rise while I work in the city, and I feel uncomfortable there because I worry about safety and I am not used to escaping from high floors in an emergency.

× Jazz near my home has a lot of tall buildings because my home is in the capital city so.

✓ There are a lot of tall buildings near my home because I live in the capital city.

Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure: 'Jazz near my home has a lot of tall buildings' is unclear and incorrectly structured. Use 'There are' for existence of plural noun 'a lot of tall buildings'. Also replace 'my home is in the capital city so' with 'because I live in the capital city' for natural word order and clear cause. Suggestion: start with 'There are' when stating existence of plural items and keep causal clause directly after with 'because'.

× No, I don't like to take photos of buildings because when I go anywhere I prefer to see the building from my eyes and keep it into my memory.

✓ No, I don't like taking photos of buildings because when I go anywhere I prefer to see buildings with my own eyes and keep them in my memory.

Use of verb + -ing: after 'like' and 'prefer' gerund forms ('taking', 'seeing') are more natural. Pronoun and article errors: 'the building' should be plural 'buildings' or no article; 'from my eyes' is awkward—use 'with my own eyes'; 'keep it into my memory' should be 'keep them in my memory'. Suggestion: use gerunds after like/prefer and match nouns/pronouns in number.

× I would not like to visit any building because I like to live in the natural town or local town such as my hometown because it is very peaceful, so I don't go.

✓ I wouldn't like to visit any buildings because I prefer living in a natural or local town like my hometown since it is very peaceful, so I wouldn't go.

Modal verb and tense: use contraction 'wouldn't' and plural 'buildings'. Preference uses 'prefer living' (gerund). Use 'like' (comparison) not 'such as' in this context or 'like my hometown'. 'Because' repeated is redundant—use 'since' for variety. 'I don't go' is unnatural for hypothetical—use 'I wouldn't go'. Suggestion: keep modal forms consistent and match plurality and verb forms.

× No, I don't want to live in a tall building, but now I live in the tall building because I have to work at the outfit, then the outfit give me a tall building to live in.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building, but at the moment I live in a tall building because I have to work at the company, and the company provided me with a place to stay.

Article and word choice errors: 'the tall building' implies a specific building previously mentioned; here use 'a tall building' for non-specific. 'Now' better as 'at the moment'. 'Outfit' is informal/incorrect for 'company' or 'employer'. Verb tense: 'give' should be past 'provided' if referring to arrangement already made. Use 'provided me with a place to stay' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use correct articles ('a' vs 'the'), choose appropriate nouns (company/employer), and correct past tense for completed actions.

× I don't like because it is very dangerous, I cannot learn escape from.

✓ I don't like it because it is very dangerous; I don't know how to escape from it.

Preposition and verb choice: 'learn escape from' is incorrect. Use 'know how to escape from it' or 'how to get out' to express lack of escape knowledge. Also add the object 'it' after 'escape from'. Suggestion: use correct verb phrase 'know how to' and include appropriate preposition and object. Maintain clause connectors and punctuation for clarity.