建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the answer more informative and natural by giving one specific detail and using a linking phrase. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

示例: Yes, there are several tall apartment blocks near my home, especially along the main road. For example, the new glass tower opposite the park is the tallest and can be seen from my balcony.

建议: Avoid one-word answers; expand with a brief reason or frequency and a linking word to show coherence. Provide a specific example of what you photograph.

示例: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings when I travel because I like their architecture. For instance, I photographed an old colonial courthouse last month to study its details later.

建议: Clarify and correct grammar, state the building and one specific reason, and use a linking word to connect ideas. Be more precise about the style and what attracts you.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit the cathedral downtown because it is built in an Italian Renaissance style and has stunning frescoes inside. I’m especially keen to see the dome and the marble carvings.

建议: Make the response coherent: state a clear reason and expand with one specific benefit using linking language. Fix incomplete fragments and avoid redundancy.

示例: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers great views of the city. For example, from a high floor I could see the river and the skyline, which I find relaxing.

× Yes, there is a building I want to visit because this building is very beautiful, made by made in Italian style.

✓ Yes, there is a building I want to visit because it is very beautiful and was made in an Italian style.

The sentence has a 'there be' clause that is acceptable but the rest contains grammatical problems: repetition ('this building'), incorrect passive phrasing ('made by made in'), and article/style phrasing. Correct by using a pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition, using the past passive 'was made' to indicate how it was constructed, and 'in an Italian style' to correctly use the article 'an' with the adjective 'Italian'. Also combine clauses with 'and' for clarity.

× Yes, I want to live in a tall building because I want to see all. From my from.

✓ Yes, I want to live in a tall building because I want to see everything from my flat.

The original contains sentence fragments and unclear phrasing ('see all. From my from.'). This is a sentence structure error. Replace the vague 'see all' with 'see everything' and join the fragment using 'from my flat' (or 'from my home') to form a complete, coherent sentence. Ensure logical connection and remove fragmentary repetition.