旅行— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm), and use correct verb forms. Add one or two specific details linked with a linking word (e.g. because, so) to make the answer coherent. Keep to about 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the changing landscapes. For example, I like seeing countryside fields and small villages as they pass by, which helps me relax during the journey.

建议: Answer directly and reduce hesitation. Use a clear structure: brief topic sentence then a reason with linking word (because/so). Avoid informal contractions and repeated negatives. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Sometimes I take photos from the car window, but not often because I don't consider myself a photography enthusiast. I usually only take pictures when the view is particularly striking, such as at sunrise or when passing a landmark.

建议: Give a clear preference sentence first, then explain with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing. Use linking words (however, because) and provide one concrete detail or comparison to make your point stronger. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer the sea because it feels more relaxing and different from the mountains I see every day in my country. For instance, I enjoy swimming and watching the horizon at the beach, which is a nice contrast to the familiar mountain scenery.

× It's actually not depends on when I traveling.

✓ It actually does not depend on when I am traveling.

Original uses 'depends' with 'not' incorrectly and omits auxiliary 'do' for present simple negative. Also 'I traveling' lacks auxiliary 'am' for present continuous. Use 'does not depend' for negative present simple or 'doesn't depend' plus 'when I am traveling' for the time clause. Suggestion: use the auxiliary 'do/does' for negative present simple and include 'am' before the '-ing' form for present continuous.

× I just really like to see out of the window and in any anywhere I go.

✓ I just really like to look out of the window wherever I go.

The phrase 'see out of the window' is unnatural; 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' is correct. 'In any anywhere' is redundant and incorrect; use 'wherever' to indicate any place. Suggestion: replace 'see out of the window and in any anywhere I go' with 'look out of the window wherever I go.'

× I'm not a photography person, so I'm not really enjoy the taking a photo of something.

✓ I'm not a photography person, so I don't really enjoy taking photos of things.

After 'do' in negative present simple use base verb 'enjoy' not 'enjoy' with 'I'm not really'. Also 'enjoy' should be followed by the '-ing' form 'taking'. 'The taking a photo' has incorrect article usage and singular/plural; use 'taking photos' or 'taking a photo'. Suggestion: use 'I don't really enjoy taking photos.'

× but I'm not gonna say always I take a picture of the scenery

✓ but I'm not going to say that I always take pictures of the scenery

Use 'going to' instead of informal 'gonna' for standard grammar. Word order is incorrect: 'always' should go before the verb 'take' or after auxiliary. Also include 'that' to introduce the clause. Plural 'pictures' is more natural. Suggestion: 'I'm not going to say that I always take pictures of the scenery.'

× I really like to like to see and actually, I don't know why, but it's just because of in my country there's a lot of mountains.

✓ I really like to see mountains and, actually, I don't know why, but it's because there are a lot of mountains in my country.

Phrase 'like to like to see' has repetition and should be 'like to see'. 'Because of in my country' is incorrect preposition order; use 'in my country' and place it after 'mountains' or use 'because there are a lot of mountains in my country.' Also use 'there are' for plural 'mountains.' Suggestion: simplify to 'I really like to see mountains... because there are a lot of mountains in my country.'

× So maybe mountains are not special for me.

✓ So maybe mountains are not special to me.

Preposition 'for' is not wrong but 'special to me' is more natural collocation in English. No plural form issue but choice of preposition improves naturalness. Suggestion: use 'special to me.'

× And yeah, I really prefer to see see.

✓ And yeah, I really prefer to see the mountains.

The original repeats 'see' and lacks a clear object. Complete the thought by stating what is preferred; context suggests 'the mountains' or 'them.' Also avoid unnecessary repetition. Suggestion: specify the object after 'prefer to see.'