旅行— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện: Nên trả lời trực tiếp, mạch lạc và dùng cấu trúc ngắn gọn (tối đa 5 câu). Lỗi phát âm/ từ vựng (ví dụ "cow" thay vì "count", "thing" không cụ thể) và ngữ pháp cần sửa. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi nêu 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể liên quan (ví dụ: phong cảnh, cảm giác) và dùng liên từ để liên kết (e.g., "because", "so"). Ví dụ cụ thể để luyện: mô tả tần suất, điều bạn nhìn thấy và cảm xúc khi nhìn ra cửa sổ.

示例: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching passing landscapes, especially trees and small villages, because they help me relax and forget about my worries. Sometimes I count how many interesting houses I see, so the journey feels shorter.

建议: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi giải thích rõ ràng. Sửa lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp (ví dụ "call window" -> "car window", "sensory" -> "scenery"). Nên dùng 2–3 câu: câu chủ đề + lý do/chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng liên từ để kết nối ý (e.g., "because", "so").

示例: No, I usually don't take photos of the scenery outside the car window. I prefer to open the car window and simply enjoy the view because looking around helps me relax. Taking photos from a moving car is also difficult and the pictures often turn out blurry.

建议: Cải thiện: Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (e.g., "I prefer..." hoặc "I like both..."). Tránh câu rời rạc; dùng liên từ và mô tả cụ thể lý do cho mỗi lựa chọn (ví dụ: hoạt động, cảm giác, âm thanh). Chú ý ngữ pháp số ít/ số nhiều ("mountains are", "the sea is"). Giữ 2–3 câu ngắn gọn.

示例: I like both the mountains and the sea, but for different reasons. I enjoy the mountains for hiking and fresh air, while the sea is relaxing because of the waves and the beach atmosphere. Usually I choose according to my mood: active trips to the mountains and relaxing breaks by the sea.

× I cannot cow how many time I look at the window to see the thing when traveling by bus and car because I really really like the moment when I open the window and.

✓ I cannot count how many times I look out of the window to see the scenery when travelling by bus or car because I really, really enjoy the moment when I open the window.

Multiple issues: 'cow' is a spelling error for 'count'; 'time' should be plural 'times' (singular and plural issue); 'look at the window' is unnatural — use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' (preposition use); 'the thing' is vague — use 'the scenery' (word choice/adjective use); 'travelling' British spelling retained to match context; sentence was incomplete and needed rephrasing to be grammatical. Suggestion: replace misspelled words, make nouns plural where needed, choose appropriate prepositions and more precise nouns to convey meaning.

× Not. I open the call window and to see the sensory and forgot the moment and I cannot do anything just look around and relax.

✓ No. I open the car window and look at the scenery, and I forget the moment; I cannot do anything but just look around and relax.

Errors: 'Not.' should be 'No.' (word choice); 'call' is a typo for 'car' (spelling); 'to see the sensory' is incorrect—use 'look at the scenery' ('scenery' noun and verb+preposition usage); 'forgot the moment' should be present 'forget the moment' to match habitual present (tense issue); missing conjunctions and incorrect infinitive 'and to see'—use simple present 'and look'; 'cannot do anything just look' needs 'but' for contrast and clearer structure. Suggestion: correct typos, use simple present for habitual actions, use proper collocations like 'look at the scenery', and connect ideas with appropriate conjunctions.

× Both when I go to the sea, I also watch the moment near the sea and I enjoy the both of them. Mountains is great, the sea is a beautiful.

✓ I like both. When I go to the sea, I also enjoy the moments near it, and I enjoy both equally. Mountains are great; the sea is beautiful.

Problems: 'Both when I go to the sea' is awkward—start with 'I like both' (sentence structure). 'Watch the moment' is incorrect—use 'enjoy the moment(s)' (verb choice). 'the both of them' is wrong; use 'both of them' or 'both equally' (quantifier/article error). 'Mountains is great' has subject-verb agreement error—'Mountains are great' (plural subject with plural verb). 'the sea is a beautiful' incorrect article/adjective use—'the sea is beautiful' (no indefinite article). Suggestion: use correct quantifiers ('both'), ensure subject-verb agreement for plural nouns, and remove unnecessary articles before adjectives.