旅行— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and use correct tense and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and limit to about 2–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I often look out of the car window when I travel. For example, I enjoy watching the changing countryside, especially fields and small villages, because the scenery feels peaceful and memorable.

建议: Use correct simple present tense for habitual actions and clear reasons with linking words. Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct common errors (e.g., 'did' → 'do', 'towering' → unclear).

示例: Yes, I always take photos when I see a beautiful view from the car. I do this because it is hard to remember every detail, so photos help me keep those moments and share them with family later.

建议: Answer directly with a clear reason and a specific example. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'it makes me feel', 'I like swimming') and one supporting detail only to stay natural and concise.

示例: I prefer the sea because it relaxes me and I enjoy swimming. For instance, in summer I often go to the beach to swim and watch the sunset, which helps me unwind.

× Yes I have looked out the window while I traveling by bus or car, but I usually go buy a car so when we go somewhere I will saw the view from the window car and feel really impressed with that view.

✓ Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car, but I usually go by car, so when we go somewhere I see the view from the car window and feel really impressed by it.

Problems: subject-verb agreement and tense consistency (present perfect 'have looked' is unnecessary for a habitual action; use simple present 'look'). 'I traveling' is missing the auxiliary or should be gerund; correct is 'when I travel'. 'go buy a car' is incorrect word choice and preposition; correct is 'go by car' (preposition error). 'I will saw' mixes future with past form; for habitual present use simple present 'I see'. 'window car' word order is wrong; correct is 'car window'. 'impressed with that view' is awkward; 'impressed by it' is more natural. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, ensure correct verb forms, use proper prepositions ('by car'), and correct noun order ('car window').

× Yes I did every time. Why I towering by the car because my eye cannot take all of the beautiful view so that's why I always take a photo to keep it in mind phone.

✓ Yes, I do it every time. When I am travelling by car my eyes cannot take in all the beautiful scenery, so I always take a photo to keep it on my phone.

Problems: 'Yes I did every time' uses past tense 'did' but context is habitual present; use 'do'. 'Why I towering by the car' is ungrammatical: 'towering' is wrong word; likely meant 'travelling' and the clause needs correct word order and tense: 'When I am travelling by car'. 'my eye cannot take all of the beautiful view' has subject-number and verb/preposition issues: 'eyes' (plural) and 'take in' (phrasal verb) and 'scenery' sounds better than 'view'. 'to keep it in mind phone' mixes 'in mind' and 'phone'; correct is 'on my phone'. Suggestion: use correct verb tense for habits, choose correct vocabulary ('travelling', 'scenery'), use appropriate phrasal verbs ('take in'), match pronouns and nouns in number ('eyes'), and place adverbial phrases correctly ('on my phone').

× I prefer the sea because it's made me feel comfortable and I like to swimming in the sea, especially in the summer.

✓ I prefer the sea because it makes me feel comfortable and I like swimming in the sea, especially in the summer.

Problems: 'it's made me feel' mixes present contraction with past participle; correct is simple present 'it makes me feel' for general truths. 'I like to swimming' incorrectly combines 'to' with the gerund; use either 'I like swimming' or 'I like to swim'. Suggestion: use simple present for general preferences, and use correct verb patterns after 'like' (gerund 'swimming' or infinitive 'to swim').