打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your response more natural and concise: state your preference in one topic sentence, then give one clear reason with a specific example. Avoid repeating and sentence fragments. Use linking words like 'because' only once and combine thoughts smoothly.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is messy and others often struggle to read it. For example, when I write notes by hand for class, my classmates ask me to rewrite them, so typing is more efficient for sharing and editing.

建议: Respond with a clear topic sentence and a concise supporting detail. Correct grammar (use past tense, remove filler words) and link ideas with 'because' or 'so'. Avoid awkward phrases like 'back in the day' unless followed by specifics.

示例: I type on a desktop keyboard every day because my laptop broke last year. Before that I used a laptop, but since it stopped working I switched to a desktop for all my typing tasks.

建议: Answer directly and avoid colloquial fillers like 'literally' and repetition. Give a precise time frame if possible, and explain briefly why formal training wasn't necessary, using linking words for clarity.

示例: I never had formal typing lessons because my work only requires basic typing for emails and short edits. As a result, I developed a comfortable, informal typing style without learning touch-typing techniques.

建议: Give a clear direct answer and avoid hesitations and repeated phrases. If you don't practice, state that and offer a brief reason; alternatively mention simple ways you could improve (online exercises, daily practice) to show awareness and enrich the answer.

示例: I don't actively train to improve my typing because my tasks are simple and I don't need high speed. However, if I wanted to improve, I would use short daily typing drills on a website like TypingClub for ten minutes each morning to build speed and accuracy.

× 'I prefer typing over handwriting because it's easier to understand. Because my handwriting is horrible.'

✓ 'I prefer typing over handwriting because my handwriting is horrible and harder to read.'

'Because' cannot start a short sentence fragment following a complete sentence; combine the ideas into one sentence to avoid a sentence fragment and improve flow. Suggestion: join clauses or rephrase to form a single complete sentence.'

× 'I type on a desktop over a laptop.'

✓ 'I type on a desktop rather than on a laptop.'

'Over' is incorrect in this comparative context; use 'rather than' or 'instead of'. Also add the preposition 'on' before 'a laptop' for parallel structure.'

× 'I used to use that laptop keyboard back in the day, but since ever the my laptop got broken I started to use the desktop on.'

✓ 'I used to use my laptop keyboard back in the day, but after my laptop broke I started using the desktop.'

'Since ever the my laptop got broken' is ungrammatical and word order is wrong. Use 'after my laptop broke' or 'since my laptop broke'. Also change 'started to use the desktop on' to 'started using the desktop' for natural verb phrasing.'

× 'Literally never.'

✓ 'I've never learned to type.'

'Literally never' is a fragment and not a full answer to 'When did you learn how to type?'. Use present perfect 'I've never learned to type' to indicate up to now.'

× 'I never learned to write on a keyboard because my tasks are simple as a as like writing emails, editing articles.'

✓ 'I never learned to type because my tasks are simple, such as writing emails and editing articles.'

'Write on a keyboard' is awkward; 'type' is correct. The phrase 'simple as a as like' is ungrammatical; use 'such as' and list items with proper conjunctions.'

× 'I don't. I don't do heavy writings on my keyboard so I don't require some skills or speed when it comes to typing.'

✓ 'I don't. I don't do heavy writing on my keyboard, so I don't need special skills or speed when it comes to typing.'

'I don't' by itself is a fragment unless the meaning is clear from context; better to keep one clear sentence. 'Writings' is usually uncountable here; use 'writing'. 'Require some skills' is awkward; use 'need special skills'. Add a comma before 'so'.'

× 'I don't really train on how to type on a keyboard because as I have said, I don't use it for heavy tasks.'

✓ 'I don't really practice typing because, as I said, I don't use it for heavy tasks.'

'Train on how to type on a keyboard' is wordy and unidiomatic; 'practice typing' is natural. Use 'as I said' not 'as I have said' for spoken style; add commas for clarity.'

× 'I don't need the skills of uh or the speed uh, but on typing on the keyword the keyboard because as I've said, my work is very simple.'

✓ 'I don't need the skills or the speed for typing on the keyboard because, as I've said, my work is very simple.'

'Skills of' is incorrect here; use 'skills or the speed for typing'. 'On typing on the keyword the keyboard' has multiple issues: 'keyword' is wrong word and preposition placement is incorrect; use 'typing on the keyboard'. Remove filler 'uh' in formal correction.'